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born in a poor family,My parents live a simple I was 8 years old, I was in Grade 3 of primary school. I liked watching others play the piano. In fact, I liked the beautiful picture of playing the piano.Suddenly one day, my father took me to a nice , I learned that it was a piano training center, learning piano was very expensive, but my father helped me find a piano I learned the piano from my teacher there.Three months later, I played the piano to my father, but I did not play well. The teacher told my father that maybe I had no gift for advised my father to give my father said that if I would like to play the piano, he didn39。t give up. I was moved by my father39。s encourgement. 【解析】【詳解】本文是關于自己經(jīng)歷或看到的故事為話題的材料作文,要求根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點來寫作。學生首先要認真閱讀材料中給出的短語及相關信息,認真審題,確定文章的中心。在寫作的文章具有一定的連貫性,還應注意使用一些連接詞,使文章的表達更有邏輯性和條理性。寫作時還要注意:;,使內(nèi)容充實,行文連貫;,有無拼寫錯誤等。高分句型:This is a story of my own experience, from this thing, I really felt my father39。s love for me, warm and deep ,從這件事上,我真的感受到了爸爸對我的愛,溫暖而深沉的愛。Suddenly one day, my father said to take me to a nice ,爸爸說帶我去一個好地方。But my father said as long as I am happy on the line, it doesn39。t ,沒關系?!军c睛】注意寫作過程中,將要點展開并表達清楚,注意使用英語的經(jīng)典句型,避免出現(xiàn)漢語表達。9.(江蘇中考模擬)書面表達近日,你校迎來一批來自英國的交流生,學校組織學生向他們介紹中國的傳統(tǒng)文化。請你根據(jù)表格信息寫一篇題為Chinese Tea的英語短文,向英國交流生介紹中國的茶文化。歷史歷史悠久,享譽世界。種類種類多樣,各具特色。習俗以茶會友,饋贈親朋。功效有益健康,提神醒腦。影響……(自擬兩點)。注意:,適當發(fā)揮。開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。、校名、地名等相關信息。Chinese TeaTea is an important part of Chinese culture. 【答案】Tea is an important part of Chinese culture. It has a long history and it is famous all over the world. There’re many kinds of tea in China. Each of them has its own characteristics. Most Chinese like drinking often treat friends with often buy tea for their friends and relatives as a tea is good for people’s cup of tea can make relaxed and energetic.Tea not only helps foreigners know about China but also builds a bridge between the East and the West.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文,題目是Chinese Tea。本文人稱主要是第三人稱,時態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時。認為閱讀材料,認真審題,確定主題,表格信息提示就是本文的提綱要點,根據(jù)要點適當發(fā)揮,列出提綱。短文必須包含提示內(nèi)容,條理清楚,字數(shù)90詞左右。要運用合適的連接詞或過渡詞,使文章具有連貫性。寫完以后,注意再讀一遍,看看有無單詞拼寫、標點、語法錯誤(時態(tài)、主謂一致等)。本文提綱:茶是中國文化的重要組成部分。它歷史悠久,享譽世界。中國有很多種茶。它們中的每一個都有自己的特點。大多數(shù)中國人喜歡喝茶。人們經(jīng)常用茶來招待朋友。他們經(jīng)常給朋友和親戚買茶作為禮物。喝茶有益于人們的健康。一杯茶可以使人放松和精力充沛。茶不僅有助于外國人了解中國,而且能在東西方之間架起一座橋梁。【點睛】書面表達要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。考生不能遺漏要點,要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數(shù)。語言要規(guī)范,時態(tài)運用要正確,敘述清楚條里,學習中注意總結,牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理。注意書寫的規(guī)范:大小寫、標點符號等的正確運用。注意檢查:單詞拼寫、語法、動詞時態(tài)、語序、主謂一致等。寫作六步法::文體,時態(tài),人稱。:要點是否齊全,適當補充。:通過增加狀語,定語,連詞,使句子意思飽滿充實。,合理使用連詞。:拼寫是否錯誤,語法時態(tài)是否正確,連詞是否恰當?shù)?。:注意書寫工整美觀整潔。10.(安徽中考模擬)書面表達李華所在的國際學校正在開展“My Favourite Traditional Festival”交流活動,假定你是李華,請你向來自不同國家的同學介紹中國傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日——端午節(jié),內(nèi)容包括:1. 今年慶祝時間(6月18日)2. 節(jié)日由來:紀念(be in memory of)屈原3. 吃粽子,賽龍舟,掛菖蒲和艾草(calamus and Ay Tsao)……4. 歡迎大家一起體驗這個傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日注意:1. 詞數(shù)80~100;,以使行文連貫;;,不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear fellows, The Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calendar. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.【答案】Dear fellows, The Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese celebrate the holiday on June18 this year . People hold the dragonboat races in memory of Qu Yuan,one of the greatest poets in China. We can watch the dragonboat races and eat a kind of Chinese food named Zongzi during the Dragon boat Festival. People always hang Calamus and Moxa on the wele to experience this traditional festival with friends from all over the world.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文,向來自不同國家的同學介紹中國傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日——端午節(jié)。結合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài),人稱為第一,三人稱,注意主謂一致問題,句子結構主要為系表結構和動賓結構,注意一些常見句式的應用,比如:People celebrate……,People hold……,We can watch……,We wele to……等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞,注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關系。點睛:本文結構緊湊,語言簡練。開頭介紹了今年端午節(jié)慶祝時間,接下來介紹端午節(jié)的由來以及慶?;顒樱詈髿g迎大家一起體驗這個傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。此處according to, in memory of, a kind of, on the day, wele to do sth, all over the world等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。11.(福建中考模擬)親愛的初三同學,考試來臨,畢業(yè)在即,你遇到了人生路上的轉折點,你的生活、學習平添了一些煩惱和壓力。當前正確面對煩惱,有效緩解心理壓力非常重要。請以"How to solve our stress"為題寫一篇90詞左右的短文,談談你在生活、學習方面的煩惱和壓力,以及要如何面對困難,解決問題的方法。開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。要求:內(nèi)容完整;書寫規(guī)范;語法準確;語句通順連貫。 參考詞:stress(壓力),nervous,sleep,time,healthy,smile,sports,help How to solve our stressThe entrance examination is ing. We will graduate soon. We all have some problems and stress in our lives these 【答案】How to solve our stress?The entrance examination is ing .We will graduate soon . We all have some problems and stress in our lives these days. How should we solve them?First, we should take an active part in exercise. Sports can help us to have a healthier body and study better. Second, we need to talk with our teachers, parents and friends. Let them know our trouble. They may give us some useful advice. Third, we can also listen to music and read books. They are good ways to relax ourselves. Fourth, we should try our best to study hard 。 And we should also learn to face our grades bravely. Finally, if we often have too much stress, we had better see a doctor.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文。要求以"How to solve our stress"為題寫一篇短文,談談你在生活、學習方面的煩惱和壓力,以及要如何面對困難,解決問題的方法。本文給出了一些要點,并給出了作文的開頭。根據(jù)所給的材料可知本文時態(tài)要用一般現(xiàn)在時來寫,主語為第一人稱,寫作時要注意主謂一致的問題。在寫作的時候,注意連句成篇,保持文章的連貫性。同時要注意語言的表述應該符合語法的結構,造句應該符合英語的表達習慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長的復合句;盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。參考詞:stress ( 壓力) , nervous,sleep , time , healthy , smile , sports, help可以用到的短語有: take part in 參加; municate with sb. 和某人交流; try one39。s best to do sth. 盡全力做某事; too much 太多。點睛:首先認真審題,看清題目中的