【正文】 o England.I hope I will have a good time there!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。中考后暑假即將開(kāi)始，你和一些同學(xué)準(zhǔn)備結(jié)伴出國(guó)旅行。旅行社提供了兩個(gè)國(guó)家供你選擇游玩。要求根據(jù)旅行社提供的信息將你的選擇用英文向同學(xué)們介紹。首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作。在寫作時(shí)，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。15．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)假設(shè)你校正開(kāi)展“How to be safe on the Internet”的大討論活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你結(jié)合生活實(shí)際寫一封英語(yǔ)小短文介紹有關(guān)情況，以幫助他人安全、文明地使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)。短文內(nèi)容包括以下幾個(gè)方面：網(wǎng)絡(luò)使用的利弊。介紹如何安全、文明地使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)的幾條規(guī)則。如，和家長(zhǎng)有所約定，不向strangers透露（give out）真實(shí)的個(gè)人信息，不單獨(dú)和net friend見(jiàn)面，使用文明語(yǔ)言，等等。希望……要求：詞數(shù)不少于100。 信中須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，符合邏輯。 文章中不要出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名。At present, most of us have Internet or Wifi at school and at home. It is time for us to talk about how to use the Internet. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】At present, most of us have net or wifi at school and at home. It is time for us to talk about how to use the Internet. We can get useful knowledge and information through it. We can also get relaxed in our free time. But some of us are not using it in a good way, such as being crazy about playing games.Here are some rules to make us safe and have fun on the Internet. First, we should make rules for Internet use with our parents. Second, we mustn’t give out our real personal information to strangers. Third, we can never meet anyone we meet on line alone. And it’s impolite of us to say bad words about others. I hope everyone uses the Internet in a proper and polite way. If so, the Internet will be safe and useful for us.【解析】試題分析：本篇作文是一篇小議論文，主要討論如何正確使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)的方式。寫作中學(xué)生需要緊密貼合題干中已經(jīng)給出的要點(diǎn)：網(wǎng)絡(luò)使用的利弊，利弊都要寫出。介紹如何安全、文明地使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)的幾條規(guī)則。題干中給出了例子，如，和家長(zhǎng)有所約定，不向陌生人透露真實(shí)的個(gè)人信息，不單獨(dú)和網(wǎng)友見(jiàn)面，使用文明語(yǔ)言，等等。學(xué)生可以在這個(gè)基礎(chǔ)上整理自己的語(yǔ)言，羅列出規(guī)則，可以借助實(shí)用的祈使句結(jié)構(gòu)。最后收尾要寫出自己的希望。寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文內(nèi)容涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點(diǎn)，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。文章脈絡(luò)清晰，自然流暢，首先完整介紹了網(wǎng)絡(luò)使用的利弊。如：利：get useful knowledge and information，get relaxed，弊：being crazy about playing games。第二段介紹了幾條規(guī)則，恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用“we should”，“we mustn’t”，“it’s impolite of us to…”等句型。最后結(jié)尾提出了倡議，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，段落清晰。16．（湖北中考模擬）書面表達(dá)隨著黃石“創(chuàng)建文明城市活動(dòng)”（簡(jiǎn)稱“創(chuàng)文活動(dòng)”）（“civilized city” campaign）的開(kāi)展許多學(xué)校的師生走上街頭清理垃圾、小廣告,撿拾綠化帶中的垃圾,倡導(dǎo)文明出行,以飽滿熱情共赴“文明之約”,請(qǐng)你就此寫一篇短文談?wù)勀愕目捶?。?nèi)容包括:,談?wù)勎沂小皠?chuàng)文活動(dòng)”前后的情況（過(guò)去如何,現(xiàn)在如何）“創(chuàng)文活動(dòng)”出力提兩點(diǎn)建議。作文要求::不得在作中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校的真實(shí)名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名.,記數(shù)80個(gè)左右。作文開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù).Our city has been on a “civilized city” campaign for over half a year. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Our city has been on a “civilized city” campaign for over half a year. And it has changed a lot. In the past, lots of rubbish could be seen around us. Thanks to the campaign, the streets look much cleaner now. What’s more, there used to be many people breaking the traffic rules. But now we can find more policemen in the streets who warn people to obey traffic rules and the traffic is no longer in a mess. As students we are supposed to follow the traffic rules strictly. Besides we can serve as volunteers to help clean the city. With everybody behaving well, our city will surely bee a civilized city. 【解析】這是一篇關(guān)于創(chuàng)建文明城市活動(dòng)，要求談?wù)勛约旱目捶?。?dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。17．（湖北中考模擬）書面表達(dá)Relationship and Emotional Attitude （人際關(guān)系和情感態(tài)度）現(xiàn)在社會(huì)普遍對(duì)90后，00后有一些誤解， 認(rèn)為他們自私、無(wú)禮，所以不能很好地與 人溝通，那么，作為一名00后學(xué)生，你又是怎么看待這個(gè)問(wèn)題的呢? 請(qǐng)結(jié)合你自己和周圍同學(xué)的表現(xiàn)，分別列舉至少三條優(yōu)點(diǎn)和兩條不足之處進(jìn)行描述。要求：，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮?！敬鸢浮緼s students born after 1990, we have so many advantages. We are usually kind and helpful. When someone is in trouble, we always give him or her a hand. We are also active. We like to do sports and go traveling. Most of us can work hard in class and play happily after school. Besides, we are imaginative and creative. We always try something new and do everything differently. On the other hand, we also have some disadvantages. Sometimes we can’t express our opinions in proper ways。 sometimes we are a little over confident. And many students have no brothers or sisters, so they may do everything for themselves. These problems may make us seem impolite, even we can’t municate with others well. So it’s the most important for us to learn how to get on well with others.【解析】本文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含題目中所提供的所有信息。靈活運(yùn)用各種句式，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各個(gè)要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確，簡(jiǎn)潔。最后必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。點(diǎn)睛：這篇文章使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如in trouble；do sports；On the other hand ；municate with等；When；Besides ；And ；So等的運(yùn)用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理；同時(shí)語(yǔ)言流暢，內(nèi)容完整，是一篇不錯(cuò)的范文。18．（河南中考模擬）書面表達(dá)每個(gè)人都有自己心愛(ài)的物品，相信你也擁有一個(gè)自己心愛(ài)的物品吧！請(qǐng)以“A（n） _____ I have”為題，描述一個(gè)或一件你心愛(ài)的物品，并談?wù)勀闶侨绾蔚玫剿模约八嬖诘囊饬x。要求：1. 請(qǐng)?jiān)陬}目空白處填上你心愛(ài)物品的名字；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。3. 語(yǔ)言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，短文連貫通順，80詞左右。A（n） _________ I have__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】A（n） toy gun I haveEveryone has an object that she/ he like best. So do I.In my drawer, there is a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth. It’s a black toy gun and it can shot some small plastic pills for ten meters. When I was young, I played with other kids with my toy gun. They all admired me and put me in the place of leader. I was so happy then. When I was a little boy, I liked w