【正文】 o England.I hope I will have a good time there!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。中考后暑假即將開始，你和一些同學準備結伴出國旅行。旅行社提供了兩個國家供你選擇游玩。要求根據旅行社提供的信息將你的選擇用英文向同學們介紹。首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據提示內容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作。在寫作時，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點分明，中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細心復核檢查，確保正確無誤。15．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達假設你校正開展“How to be safe on the Internet”的大討論活動，請你結合生活實際寫一封英語小短文介紹有關情況，以幫助他人安全、文明地使用網絡。短文內容包括以下幾個方面：網絡使用的利弊。介紹如何安全、文明地使用網絡的幾條規(guī)則。如，和家長有所約定，不向strangers透露（give out）真實的個人信息，不單獨和net friend見面，使用文明語言，等等。希望……要求：詞數不少于100。 信中須包括所有內容要點，可適當發(fā)揮，使語句通順，意思連貫，符合邏輯。 文章中不要出現真實的校名和人名。At present, most of us have Internet or Wifi at school and at home. It is time for us to talk about how to use the Internet. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】At present, most of us have net or wifi at school and at home. It is time for us to talk about how to use the Internet. We can get useful knowledge and information through it. We can also get relaxed in our free time. But some of us are not using it in a good way, such as being crazy about playing games.Here are some rules to make us safe and have fun on the Internet. First, we should make rules for Internet use with our parents. Second, we mustn’t give out our real personal information to strangers. Third, we can never meet anyone we meet on line alone. And it’s impolite of us to say bad words about others. I hope everyone uses the Internet in a proper and polite way. If so, the Internet will be safe and useful for us.【解析】試題分析：本篇作文是一篇小議論文，主要討論如何正確使用網絡的方式。寫作中學生需要緊密貼合題干中已經給出的要點：網絡使用的利弊，利弊都要寫出。介紹如何安全、文明地使用網絡的幾條規(guī)則。題干中給出了例子，如，和家長有所約定，不向陌生人透露真實的個人信息，不單獨和網友見面，使用文明語言，等等。學生可以在這個基礎上整理自己的語言，羅列出規(guī)則，可以借助實用的祈使句結構。最后收尾要寫出自己的希望。寫作亮點：這篇短文內容涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點，表達準確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。文章脈絡清晰，自然流暢，首先完整介紹了網絡使用的利弊。如：利：get useful knowledge and information，get relaxed，弊：being crazy about playing games。第二段介紹了幾條規(guī)則，恰當運用“we should”，“we mustn’t”，“it’s impolite of us to…”等句型。最后結尾提出了倡議，結構完整，段落清晰。16．（湖北中考模擬）書面表達隨著黃石“創(chuàng)建文明城市活動”（簡稱“創(chuàng)文活動”）（“civilized city” campaign）的開展許多學校的師生走上街頭清理垃圾、小廣告,撿拾綠化帶中的垃圾,倡導文明出行,以飽滿熱情共赴“文明之約”,請你就此寫一篇短文談談你的看法。內容包括:,談談我市“創(chuàng)文活動”前后的情況（過去如何,現在如何）“創(chuàng)文活動”出力提兩點建議。作文要求::不得在作中出現學校的真實名稱和學生的真實姓名.,記數80個左右。作文開頭已經給出,不計入總詞數.Our city has been on a “civilized city” campaign for over half a year. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Our city has been on a “civilized city” campaign for over half a year. And it has changed a lot. In the past, lots of rubbish could be seen around us. Thanks to the campaign, the streets look much cleaner now. What’s more, there used to be many people breaking the traffic rules. But now we can find more policemen in the streets who warn people to obey traffic rules and the traffic is no longer in a mess. As students we are supposed to follow the traffic rules strictly. Besides we can serve as volunteers to help clean the city. With everybody behaving well, our city will surely bee a civilized city. 【解析】這是一篇關于創(chuàng)建文明城市活動，要求談談自己的看法。動筆前先要認真閱讀要點，圍繞要點組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內容表達出來，在此基礎上亦可適當發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關系，語意連貫。17．（湖北中考模擬）書面表達Relationship and Emotional Attitude （人際關系和情感態(tài)度）現在社會普遍對90后，00后有一些誤解， 認為他們自私、無禮，所以不能很好地與 人溝通，那么，作為一名00后學生，你又是怎么看待這個問題的呢? 請結合你自己和周圍同學的表現，分別列舉至少三條優(yōu)點和兩條不足之處進行描述。要求：，可適當發(fā)揮?！敬鸢浮緼s students born after 1990, we have so many advantages. We are usually kind and helpful. When someone is in trouble, we always give him or her a hand. We are also active. We like to do sports and go traveling. Most of us can work hard in class and play happily after school. Besides, we are imaginative and creative. We always try something new and do everything differently. On the other hand, we also have some disadvantages. Sometimes we can’t express our opinions in proper ways。 sometimes we are a little over confident. And many students have no brothers or sisters, so they may do everything for themselves. These problems may make us seem impolite, even we can’t municate with others well. So it’s the most important for us to learn how to get on well with others.【解析】本文內容應包含題目中所提供的所有信息。靈活運用各種句式，采用不同的表達方式將各個要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確，簡潔。最后必須認真查驗是否有漏寫，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。點睛：這篇文章使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如in trouble；do sports；On the other hand ；municate with等；When；Besides ；And ；So等的運用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理；同時語言流暢，內容完整，是一篇不錯的范文。18．（河南中考模擬）書面表達每個人都有自己心愛的物品，相信你也擁有一個自己心愛的物品吧！請以“A（n） _____ I have”為題，描述一個或一件你心愛的物品，并談談你是如何得到它的，以及它存在的意義。要求：1. 請在題目空白處填上你心愛物品的名字；2. 文中不得出現真實姓名和學校名稱。3. 語言表達準確，短文連貫通順，80詞左右。A（n） _________ I have__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】A（n） toy gun I haveEveryone has an object that she/ he like best. So do I.In my drawer, there is a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth. It’s a black toy gun and it can shot some small plastic pills for ten meters. When I was young, I played with other kids with my toy gun. They all admired me and put me in the place of leader. I was so happy then. When I was a little boy, I liked w