【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 g with their family and friends. They should also pay more attention to their studies. If they fill their time this way, they won39。t have too much spare time to think about phone entertainment.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇開(kāi)放性話題作文，針對(duì)很多人成了“手機(jī)控”這一現(xiàn)象，結(jié)合自己的親身經(jīng)歷，談一談自己的觀點(diǎn)?？忌紫纫喿x前面的提示去認(rèn)真審題，確定出文章的中心，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)表達(dá)。要求從三個(gè)方面去完成寫(xiě)作：1. 手機(jī)的正面作用；2. 手機(jī)給人們帶來(lái)的煩惱；3. 如何防止成為“手機(jī)控”。需要自由發(fā)揮的地方較多，比如手機(jī)的正面作用可以寫(xiě)有利于我們的溝通與交流，通過(guò)上網(wǎng)了解世界上所發(fā)生的事情，手機(jī)的負(fù)面作用可以寫(xiě)手機(jī)對(duì)健康的危害，對(duì)學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)的影響等等。最后總結(jié)并發(fā)出呼吁。另外，寫(xiě)作時(shí)，還需注意語(yǔ)句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。9．（安徽中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)某英文報(bào)社組織了題為“我喜歡的英語(yǔ)諺語(yǔ)”征文活動(dòng)，你有意參加。請(qǐng)從下面兩句諺語(yǔ)中任選一句作為標(biāo)題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)作文，內(nèi)容須包括：1. 該諺語(yǔ)的含義；2. 體現(xiàn)該諺語(yǔ)含義的個(gè)人經(jīng)歷。a） A friend in need is a friend indeed.b） Where there’s a will, there’s a way.參考詞匯：諺語(yǔ) proverb____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】A Friend in Need is a Friend IndeedA life without friends is a life without sunshine! Friends try their best to help you without thinking of what they can get from it.Once I doubted the usefulness of study, losing my interests and direction, even confidence. Finally, I decided to stop studying. After knowing the news, my friend encouraged me patiently. She insisted on persuading me until I promised to give up this thought.Later, I made up my mind to study hard so as to enter my dream university.Many people will be in and out of your life, but only true friends will leave footprints in your hear. True friends always e to you when you need help.【解析】【分析】這是命題作文。二選一，第一個(gè)是“患難見(jiàn)真情”，第二個(gè)是“有志者事競(jìng)成”。【詳解】標(biāo)題都是以諺語(yǔ)的形式出現(xiàn)，所以考生第一步做的是理解這兩個(gè)言語(yǔ)的意思，選擇自己較有把握的。在選擇標(biāo)題之后，根據(jù)所給內(nèi)容提示，進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，這樣才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體10．（湖北中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)近年來(lái)，越來(lái)越多的中學(xué)將一些電子產(chǎn)品例如電腦、手機(jī)，甚至iPad 等引入了課堂。在提高教學(xué)質(zhì)量的同時(shí)也使得教育更加多樣化。但人們對(duì)此的看法褒貶不一。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下表格，在英語(yǔ)課上和同學(xué)談?wù)勀愕目捶?。要點(diǎn)：AgreeSave time, protect the environmentDisagreeToo expensive, easily to fall into the games。Your opinion…要求：，短文連貫通順； ，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；（開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。Nowadays, more and more electronic products are introduced into class．We can get our homework on the mobile phone and hand it in by 【答案】Nowadays, more and more electronic products are introduced into class．We can get our homework on the mobile phone and hand it in by save some people and protect the environment. Students can watch videos on the they are active in class.Some people think students shouldn’t use puters in are too is easy for students to fall into the games.I think students should use iPad in teachers don’t allow students to play games in is good for students to use iPad in class.【解析】【詳解】根據(jù)題意近年來(lái)，越來(lái)越多的中學(xué)將一些電子產(chǎn)品例如電腦、手機(jī)，甚至iPad 等引入了課堂。在提高教學(xué)質(zhì)量的同時(shí)也使得教育更加多樣化。但人們對(duì)此的看法褒貶不一。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下表格，在英語(yǔ)課上和同學(xué)談?wù)勀愕目捶?。我們所要做的首先是?yīng)用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。寫(xiě)作前先結(jié)合要表達(dá)的事情確定句子的人稱(chēng)時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語(yǔ)，可見(jiàn)該生英語(yǔ)功底扎實(shí)。如Some people think students shouldn’t use puters in are too is easy for students to fall into the games. The teachers don’t allow students to play games in ，使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。11．（陜西師大附中中考模擬）隨著中考的臨近，初三同學(xué)感到壓力很大， 有些人由于學(xué)習(xí)方法不當(dāng)，盲目刷題或連 續(xù)熬夜，導(dǎo)致上課時(shí)精力不足，考試成績(jī)?cè)桨l(fā)不理想。結(jié)合上述情況，請(qǐng)以 How to improve our study 為題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)演講稿，向同學(xué)們提出建議。寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：，課堂認(rèn)真聽(tīng)講，做好筆記，課后按時(shí)完成作業(yè)。，合理安排時(shí)間。3. …… 寫(xiě)作要求：，意思連貫，語(yǔ)法正確，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。，校名等； 70 詞，開(kāi)頭給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。How to improve our studyDear friends，I’m very sorry to hear that most of us have great pressure in study and don’t perform well in the Here’s my advice. Thanks for your listening!【答案】How to improve our studyAs middle school students, it is important for us to improve our study. What should we do to improve our study?First of all, we should get ready for new lessons before class. What’s more, we must listen to the teachers and take notes carefully in class. Besides, it is necessary for us to finish our homework on time after class. Last but not least, try to make study plans for ourselves and make good use of our time. Only by doing these simple things can we improve our study.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，要表達(dá)如何提高我們的學(xué)習(xí)。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如it is adj for sb to do, on time, make good use of以及first of all, what’s more, besides和last but not least。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。【點(diǎn)睛】寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫(xiě)好書(shū)面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料。通常書(shū)面表達(dá)給出的話題是開(kāi)放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀觥⒚鞔_的關(guān)鍵。初寫(xiě)短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作了，在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。12．（陜西西北工業(yè)大學(xué)附屬中學(xué)中考模擬）假如你是李華，初中生活即將結(jié)束，在步入高中學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)之際，你思緒萬(wàn)千。請(qǐng)你根據(jù) 下面的提示，寫(xiě)一封信表達(dá)你對(duì)老師由衷的感激。提示：1. 生活上的照顧 3. 學(xué)習(xí)上的幫助 要求：1. 參考提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)工整；3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)信息（姓名、班級(jí)）4. 詞數(shù)：不少于 80 詞。（開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。） Dear teachers, My junior high school life is ing to an end. Now, I39。d like to show my thanks to you for what you’ve done to me these years.【答案】My junior high school life is ing to an end. Now, I39。d like to show my thanks to you for what you’ve done to me these years. You take great care of me in life. Last year, when I was ill, You took me to see a doctor and took good care of me. I39。m very grateful. When I encounter difficulties, you always encourage me to face them bravely and help solve them. You supports me in sperm. when I have difficulties in studying , You are always willing to help me.【解析】【詳解】考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等?！军c(diǎn)睛】這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語(yǔ)，可見(jiàn)該生英語(yǔ)功底扎實(shí)。如：You take great care of me in life. Last year, when I was ill, You took me to see a doctor and took good care of 。13．（合肥市第四十二中學(xué)中考模擬）每個(gè)人的生命只有一次。請(qǐng)你以“How to Protect Our Lives”為題，從安全和健康的角度入手，寫(xiě)一篇如何珍惜和保護(hù)我們生命的短文，