【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 ll / volleyball. But now I am interested in history, because it is very interesting. I have many interests such as reading books, playing sports and so on. In this way, I’ve got more knowledge and improved my life.In the future, I’ll try my best to do better. I’ll learn to enjoy my school life. I’ll make it more and more beautiful. Believing myself is the key to success.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文要求我們以My Unforgettable Junior High School Life為題，回想一下自己即將過(guò)去的初中，講述難忘的初中生活。題目中用思維導(dǎo)圖，列出了一些文章中會(huì)用到的關(guān)鍵詞，供學(xué)生們參考使用。審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)以一般過(guò)去時(shí)、第一人稱為主來(lái)敘述。題目中并沒(méi)有給出具體的寫作內(nèi)容，學(xué)生們應(yīng)發(fā)揮自己的想象力，可以從自己的學(xué)習(xí)、愛(ài)好、與同學(xué)的交往、與老師的相處以及自己的感受等方面進(jìn)行詳細(xì)闡述。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：首先要展開(kāi)合理想象，補(bǔ)充文章細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容，注意各部分內(nèi)容之間的層次，內(nèi)容要完整、充實(shí)，結(jié)構(gòu)要清晰。其次應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯。句子的結(jié)構(gòu)要完整，可以簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，如主謂賓或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)。為提升作文檔次，應(yīng)穿插使用并列句、復(fù)合句及其他復(fù)雜句式。語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、自然。【點(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，回憶了自己的初中生活，并描述了自己的感受。短文有以下幾個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)：首先文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)、完整，符合題目要求。短文中作者從自己的學(xué)習(xí)情況、與同學(xué)的交往、愛(ài)好、特長(zhǎng)等方面進(jìn)行了總結(jié)，在最后提出了對(duì)未來(lái)的希望。層次清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)合理。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，文章第一段引出主題，使用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；第二段回憶過(guò)去的生活，主要使用了一般過(guò)去時(shí)；最后對(duì)未來(lái)提出希望，用到了一般將來(lái)時(shí)。語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，注意了名詞、動(dòng)詞、形容詞等的正確形式。句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，也使用了并列句、賓語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句等復(fù)合句句型，調(diào)整了文章節(jié)奏，提升了作文檔次。短文中較好的句型有：In the past, I was busy learning my subjects and worked hard at them、But now I am interested in history, because it is very interesting、In this way, I’ve got more knowledge and improved my life.、I’ll make it more and more beautiful. Believing myself is the key to success等等。10．（江蘇中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá) 某英語(yǔ)教育網(wǎng)站正在舉辦有關(guān)分享的主題征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)圖示內(nèi)容，結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷寫一篇題為“Sharing”的英語(yǔ)短文。注意：，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。，短文的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。3. 文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。SharingIt’s very important for us to learn to share with each other. 【答案】It’s very important for us to learn to share with each other. There’re many things to share in our lives. We can share our happiness or trouble. Some of us like sharing face to face while others prefer to share online like or Wechat.Once, I failed in a Math test. I had difficulty cheering myself up, but I realized keeping worries to myself would make it worse. After sharing it with my friend, I felt much better. Moreover, his words encouraged me a lot. In my opinion, sharing is really helpful. It can bring us more joy and provide us with useful suggestions.【解析】此篇書(shū)面表達(dá)的話題是“分享”。首先我們根據(jù)給出的圖表確定要寫的內(nèi)容的提綱，包括：分享什么？為什么分享？怎么分享？然后根據(jù)每個(gè)提綱給出的一些關(guān)鍵詞，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)可能用到的表達(dá)，拓展思維，寫出自己的看法。最后，我們還要注意“分享”的情感教育，讓我們學(xué)有所獲。文章時(shí)態(tài)要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱主要用第一人稱。在寫作的時(shí)候，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性。同時(shí)要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后必須認(rèn)真檢查是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。11．（江蘇中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)無(wú)錫被評(píng)為內(nèi)地最宜居城市。假設(shè)你班對(duì)此進(jìn)行了一次班級(jí)討論，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)討論主題并結(jié)合所給信息，以“Be a Beautiful City”為題寫一份發(fā)言稿，號(hào)召?gòu)V大學(xué)生為建設(shè)美好城市作貢獻(xiàn)。內(nèi)容提示如下：1．政府修建了很多新路、大橋，甚至還有地鐵；2．新添了很多露天開(kāi)放公園，每到周末和節(jié)假日，人們常常去那里野餐，游玩；3．私家車越來(lái)越多，停車已成了大問(wèn)題；4．城市變化有利有弊；5．你的希望：……注意事項(xiàng)：1．發(fā)言稿須包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫；2．第5個(gè)要點(diǎn)須用2至3句話展開(kāi)合理想象。作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3．詞數(shù)90左右，發(fā)言稿的開(kāi)頭已在答題卡上給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；4．發(fā)言稿內(nèi)容必須寫在答題卡指定的位置上。Be a Beautiful CityThere have been great changes in Wuxi in the past few years．____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Be a Beautiful CityThere have been great changes in Wuxi in the past few years．The government has built lots of new roads, bridges and even undergrounds．There have been a number of open parks．People often go there to have a piic and have fun on weekends and holidays．More and more people have their own cars and it39。s being difficult to park cars．The changes have brought both advantages and disadvantages．I hope the government can deal with the problem．Our hometown can be more and more beautiful in the future．【解析】這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了大量短語(yǔ)，例如in the past few years，lots of，a number of，open parks，have a piic，have fun，on weekends and holidays，more and more，both …and，deal with the problem，in the future等。而More and more people have their own cars and it39。s being difficult to park cars./ Our hometown can be more and more beautiful in the and more句式結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，使本文內(nèi)容豐富，表達(dá)流暢，是短文的亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容可知用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，可把提示內(nèi)容結(jié)合實(shí)際展開(kāi)合理的想象，把它們拓展成一個(gè)個(gè)英文句子。還要注意在行文中使用一些常見(jiàn)的短語(yǔ)，會(huì)給習(xí)作增色。12．（全國(guó)中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)越來(lái)越多汽車進(jìn)入我們的家庭生活，改善了我們的生活，但同時(shí)也帶來(lái)了很多問(wèn)題，如塞車和車禍，給家庭和社會(huì)帶來(lái)極大的危害。作為中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該怎樣做呢？請(qǐng)寫一篇有關(guān)交通安全的短文（100字左右）內(nèi)容提示：遵守交通規(guī)則，如走人行道/過(guò)斑馬線。別在街道上或馬路上玩耍和踢球。勸父母不能酒后駕車。你可以適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容，讓短文通順，過(guò)渡自然。參考詞匯：sidewalk 人行道 zebracrossing 斑馬線___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】With more and more cars ing into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents。Traffic safety is everybody39。s business. We must obey the rules. For example, we must walk on walk side, when we cross zebra – crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across fast. Don’t play football on the road .We can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc。We can say cars are ing into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody39。s business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks?！窘馕觥窟@是一