【正文】 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!Wu Hao【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,I’m writing to ask for your help about my family trip. My family is planning a trip to Beijing during the Spring Festival. We decide to travel by air, so we would like to know about flights to Beijing. Also, can you order three rooms in a good hotel? We want to know some information about places of interest in Beijing. You can contact me. My phone number is 8618399. Thanks for your help. Best wishes!Wu Hao【解析】【詳解】本文屬于應用文體，向旅行社詢問去北京的航班、酒店以及旅游景點。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如ask for help, decide to do, by air, would like to do, order, places of interests以及thanks for等。8．（在提高教學質(zhì)量的同時也使得教育更加多樣化。請根據(jù)以下表格，在英語課上和同學談談你的看法。Your opinion…要求：，短文連貫通順； ，可適當發(fā)揮；（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。在提高教學質(zhì)量的同時也使得教育更加多樣化。請根據(jù)以下表格，在英語課上和同學談談你的看法。寫作前先結(jié)合要表達的事情確定句子的人稱時態(tài)，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。【點睛】這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。9．（根據(jù)上述提示，請以“My Unforgettable Junior High School Life”為題寫一篇文章，記錄你難忘的校園生活。注意：. ，句子連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；2. 短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名或能夠透露你個人身份的相關信息。My Unforgettable Junior High School LifeHow time flies! 【答案】How time flies! My colorful junior high school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think of about myself.In the past, I was busy learning my subjects and worked hard at them. I got on well with my classmates. I was good at English. I liked playing basketball / football / volleyball. But now I am interested in history, because it is very interesting. I have many interests such as reading books, playing sports and so on. In this way, I’ve got more knowledge and improved my life.In the future, I’ll try my best to do better. I’ll learn to enjoy my school life. I’ll make it more and more beautiful. Believing myself is the key to success.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文要求我們以My Unforgettable Junior High School Life為題，回想一下自己即將過去的初中，講述難忘的初中生活。審題可知，這篇短文應以一般過去時、第一人稱為主來敘述。寫作時應注意：首先要展開合理想象，補充文章細節(jié)內(nèi)容，注意各部分內(nèi)容之間的層次，內(nèi)容要完整、充實，結(jié)構(gòu)要清晰。句子的結(jié)構(gòu)要完整，可以簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，如主謂賓或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)。語句之間使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、自然。短文有以下幾個優(yōu)點：首先文章內(nèi)容充實、完整，符合題目要求。層次清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)合理。語法規(guī)范，用詞準確，注意了名詞、動詞、形容詞等的正確形式。短文中較好的句型有：In the past, I was busy learning my subjects and worked hard at them、But now I am interested in history, because it is very interesting、In this way, I’ve got more knowledge and improved my life.、I’ll make it more and more beautiful. Believing myself is the key to success等等。江蘇中考模擬）書面表達 某英語教育網(wǎng)站正在舉辦有關分享的主題征文活動，請你根據(jù)圖示內(nèi)容，結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷寫一篇題為“Sharing”的英語短文。，短文的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。SharingIt’s very important for us to learn to share with each other. 【答案】It’s very important for us to learn to share with each other. There’re many things to share in our lives. We can share our happiness or trouble. Some of us like sharing face to face while others prefer to share online like or Wechat.Once, I failed in a Math test. I had difficulty cheering myself up, but I realized keeping worries to myself would make it worse. After sharing it with my friend, I felt much better. Moreover, his words encouraged me a lot. In my opinion, sharing is really helpful. It can bring us more joy and provide us with useful suggestions.【解析】此篇書面表達的話題是“分享”。最后，我們還要注意“分享”的情感教育，讓我們學有所獲。在寫作的時候，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性。最后必須認真檢查是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。江蘇中考模擬）書面表達無錫被評為內(nèi)地最宜居城市。內(nèi)容提示如下：1．政府修建了很多新路、大橋，甚至還有地鐵；2．新添了很多露天開放公園，每到周末和節(jié)假日，人們常常去那里野餐，游玩；3．私家車越來越多，停車已成了大問題；4．城市變化有利有弊；5．你的希望：……注意事項：1．發(fā)言稿須包括所給內(nèi)容要點，要求語句通順、意思連貫；2．第5個要點須用2至3句話展開合理想象。Be a Beautiful CityThere have been great changes in Wuxi in the past few years．____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Be a Beautiful CityThere have been great changes in Wuxi in the past few years．The government has built lots of new roads, bridges and even undergrounds．There have been a number of open parks．People often go there to have a piic and have fun on weekends and holidays．More and more people have their own cars and it39。文中使用了大量短語，例如in the past few years，lots of，a number of，open parks，have a piic，have fun，on weekends and holidays，more and more，both …and，deal with the problem，in the future等。s being difficult to park cars./ Our hometown can be more and more beautiful in the and more句式結(jié)構(gòu)的運用，使本文內(nèi)容豐富，表達流暢，是短文的亮點。還要注意在行文中使用一些常見的短語，會給習作增色。全國中考模擬）書面表達越來越多汽車進入我們的家庭生活，改善了我們的生活，但同時也帶來了很多問題，如塞車和車禍，給家庭和社會帶來極大的危害。別在街道上或馬路上玩耍和踢球。你可以適當增加內(nèi)容，讓短文通順，過渡自然。Traffic safety is everybody39。We can say cars are ing into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody39。【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，寫一篇有關交通安全的短文, 介紹作為中學生我們應該怎么做，結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：we are happy that……，it has also brought…….，Traffic safety is……，we must……，we can……，等句式的應用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系。開頭介紹了現(xiàn)在有很多交通問題，接下來介紹我們應遵守的交通規(guī)則，最后指出人人認為交通安全是自己的事，我們才能在路上安全行駛。13．（請根據(jù)以下要點提示，用英語給他發(fā)一封電子郵件。寫作要求：80詞左右；條理清楚，意思連貫，語句通順，標點正確。給出的要點比較全面，只要稍加發(fā)揮想象即可。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性。要點內(nèi)容：（the Forbidden City）的基本情況（又名……； 建于14061420；古代皇