【正文】 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Li Hua【答案】Hi Tom，I hope you39。題目中給我們列出了具體的寫作內(nèi)容，我們可以按照這些提示來組織語言，并增加一些內(nèi)容，使文章更加充實。通過審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主，根據(jù)表達需要靈活運用，并使用適當(dāng)?shù)娜朔Q，注意謂語動詞的正確形式。在文章中還應(yīng)使用一、兩個高級句型或復(fù)雜句式，提升文章檔次?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求給Tom寫電子郵件，介紹了關(guān)于武漢馬拉松的事情。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主，個別句子使用了過去時態(tài)，謂語動詞形式準(zhǔn)確，語法規(guī)范。調(diào)整文章節(jié)奏，提升了文章檔次。6．（注意事項：，條理清楚，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。 狀況水污染，大氣污染...... 應(yīng)對措施立即阻止此類活動,治理環(huán)境（至少兩條）...... 感想建議環(huán)境能夠變得更好......Change for a better China________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】We all know it is being more and more important to protect our environment well. But some people don’t care about it .They throw litter into the river and even worse factories also put waste into the river, the river is full of rubbish. The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days. Factories that burn coal also pollute the air with a lot of black smoke. We hardly ever see blue skies anymore.I think everyone in our hometown should play a part in cleaning it up. We should write to the government ,they should close down the factories. Trees are very helpful and important for the environment .We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more healthy .Now, Our hometown has started to face the problem, I believe we can make our country a better place if we keep trying.【解析】【詳解】環(huán)保話題是人們最關(guān)心的話題之一，請以Change for a better China為主題，結(jié)合自己家鄉(xiāng)的變化寫一篇英語短文。寫作中注意表達觀點時的常用句式，注意在表達不同觀點時，連詞的使用?！军c睛】本文緊扣要求對家鄉(xiāng)做了簡單介紹，內(nèi)容完整，用了表格中的信息。句式豐富。銜接自然，順暢。7．（【答案】Recently, a survey has been made in our school on whether you want a little brother or sister. Different people have different opinions. About forty percent students think it’s good to have a brother or sister. They can help each other and share the happiness and sadness together. And they won’t feel lonely any more. What’s more, they think they’ll get more freedom. But others disagree. They think they won’t get used to the change. They also worry that their parents won’t love them as much as before. Besides, they’re afraid that the new baby will be so noisy that it may bother their study. In my opinion, it’s hard to say whether it’s good or bad to have a brother or sister. But we should respect our parents’ choices. After all, they’re the persons who will make the final decision.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖表作文。時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。仔細(xì)閱讀所給材料，認(rèn)真審題，確定主題，根據(jù)主題和所給要點列出提綱，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。字?jǐn)?shù)應(yīng)在90詞左右。要運用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有連貫性。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點、語法錯誤（時態(tài)、主謂一致等）。s more 再者after all 畢竟as…as 一樣…本文提綱：最近，我們學(xué)校做了一項關(guān)于你想要一個弟弟還是妹妹的調(diào)查。大約40%的學(xué)生認(rèn)為有兄弟姐妹是件好事。他們不會再感到孤獨了。但其他人不同意。他們也擔(dān)心他們的父母不會像以前那樣愛他們。在我看來，很難說有兄弟姐妹是好是壞。畢竟，他們是最終決定的人。re afraid①that the new baby will be②so noisy that it may bother their study．①that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句．②so…that如此…以致于…，that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句．2．In my opinion，①it39。s good or bad to have a brother or sister．①it是形式主語，動詞不定式是真正主語．②say后面是whether 引導(dǎo)的賓語從句．3．①After all，they39。書面表達題要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達意思的能力。要學(xué)以致用。注意檢查：單詞拼寫、語法、動詞時態(tài)、語序、主謂一致等。四川中考模擬） 書面表達本周你們班召開了一次主題班會“畢業(yè)前，我能為學(xué)校做些什么？”大家踴躍發(fā)言，作為第三小組成員，請你根據(jù)各小組的情況匯報以及你們小組的討論情況，寫一個總結(jié)交給老師。第二小組籌錢，為學(xué)校圖書館購買書籍。What can you do for your school?As we all know we will leave school in June. So this week our class hold a class meeting. We discussed about what we can do for our school. All of us gave our own ideas.【答案】What can you do for your school?As we all know we will leave school in June. So this week our class hold a class meeting. We discussed about what we can do for our school. All of us gave our own ideas. Students in Group 1 thought that we could present our used books and school things to the students in Grade 7 and Grade 8. Especially, we can give them to the poor students. They need our help. Students in Group 2 thought that we could raise our pocket money. The books in library are old and little. So we can use the money to buy some new books for the school library so that more students can get more and latest information from books. Students in Group 3 thought we can plant some plants and flowers in the school. That may make our school more beautiful. Anyway, we have studied here for three years, we love our school. We hope our school will be better and better and we should study hard and one day our school will be proud of us.【解析】【分析】本片書面表達要求學(xué)生寫出一個班會會后的總結(jié)。表格中一個兩個組的討論結(jié)果，第三組是需要考生圍繞著主題自己補充的，盡量避免與前面兩組重復(fù)。 首先引出此次班會的主題；其次分別寫出三個小組的討論結(jié)果；最后可以對三個小組進行總結(jié)，表達情感。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體。北京中考模擬）假如你是李華，作為活動主持人，你打算邀請外教 Smith 先生來參加本周末學(xué)校開展的“英語戲劇展示”活動，請用英語給他寫一封邀請函，告訴他本次活動的具體時間和地點，安排了哪些內(nèi)容，以及需要他做哪些事情。m glad to tell you there39。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。審好題是寫好書面表達的關(guān)鍵。構(gòu)思提綱。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。同時還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。10．（某校也就“是否想要個弟弟或妹妹”對部分學(xué)生進行了一次問卷調(diào)查。問卷調(diào)查結(jié)果如下:觀點支持反對人數(shù)比例40%60%原因。3.……。3.……要求:。、地名。Recently,a survey has been made in our school on whether you want a little brother or sister. The opinions are different.【答案】Recently,a survey has been made in our school on whether you want a little brother or opinions are different.Here are the results. About forty percent students think it39。t feel lonely anymore. What39。ll get freedom.But others disagree. They think they won39。t love them as much as before. Besides,they39。s hard to say whether it39。 choices. After all,they39。根據(jù)此結(jié)果寫一份調(diào)查報告,并適當(dāng)闡述你的觀點。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，考生要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達出來。在寫作時，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點分明，中心突出。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。11．（請用英文寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容包括：1．你在學(xué)校或家里曾經(jīng)遇到的最大問題或煩惱；2．你解決問題或煩惱的過程；3．你的感想。My middle school life is ing to an end .During the three years， _________