【正文】 結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Everybody has……，my ideal career is……，When I was……，So I must……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。開(kāi)頭介紹了我的理想職業(yè)是當(dāng)一名教師，接下來(lái)介紹我選擇當(dāng)老師的原因以及我現(xiàn)階段的準(zhǔn)備，最后表示只要我有機(jī)會(huì)，我將會(huì)選擇做一名老師。3．（臨近中考，壓力驟增，父母的嘮叨，老師的殷殷期望，自己的學(xué)業(yè)與夢(mèng)想……傾訴是一副良方。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫(xiě)一封給自己的信。第一段指出導(dǎo)致壓力的兩個(gè)方面First,I can’t ignore my parents’ expectation . Second, there is endless homework and tests every , Second點(diǎn)出。用What’s more表遞進(jìn)結(jié)構(gòu)。整篇文章層次分明，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。海南中考模擬）假如你是王梅，有一個(gè)弟弟/妹妹一直是你的夢(mèng)想，去年你家里添了一個(gè)弟弟/妹妺，你非常開(kāi)心，請(qǐng)根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，寫(xiě)一封電子郵件給你的筆友李蕾，和她分享你的快樂(lè)，告訴她你的變化。參考詞匯：joy； grow up with 。寫(xiě)作要求：（1）不得使用真實(shí)姓名和校名（2）包含以上所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫；（3）字跡工整，語(yǔ)言精練，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，條理清楚；（4）詞數(shù)80左右。）Dear Li Lei,I have been dreaming to have a brother/sister. Last year,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’m lucky and happy to have a brother/ sister. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours,Wang Mei【答案】Dear Li Le,I have been dreaming to have a sister. Last year, my dream came true. I was really happy to have such a lovely baby sister.She brings lots of joy to our family and she grows up with me day by day. Every time I see the big smile on her face, my heart is full of sweet feelings. I will e over to see her and play with her as soon as I get home every day. Now I’m not alone any more.Above all, I have learned to share and look after others since she was born. I learn to help my mother do the housework, such as washing clothes, cooking and looking after my little sister on my own initiative. In order to set a good example for my little sister, I decide to study hard all the time and go to a famous university one day. Taking care of the baby is a hard job and I learn to be patient from it. I also learn to be kind and friendly to her.I’m lucky and happy to have a sister. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.YoursWang Mei【解析】【分析】這篇書(shū)面表達(dá)順應(yīng)了當(dāng)今的熱門(mén)話題，“二胎”，主要是站在孩子（考生）的角度，分享有了弟弟或妹妹后的喜悅。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，這樣才可以更好的駕馭。5．（ 提示：你可以作為任意興趣小組或社團(tuán)的一員，或者作為家庭、班級(jí)、社區(qū)的一員，寫(xiě)出你的經(jīng)歷、感受等。m a member of the Singing and Dancing Club. I have been in this club for 2 years. I’m an actor in the club. Many students in our school have joined the club, so I also have made a lot of have many activities on week,we have two times of training. I sing and dance with my classmates on weekends. Though I am very tired, but I am always happy when I the members in the club are just brothers and sisters. I like this club very much.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。首先考生需要把題目補(bǔ)充完整，然后根據(jù)所給出的材料提示，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出?！军c(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；同時(shí)注意語(yǔ)句要通順，詞匯書(shū)寫(xiě)無(wú)誤，不要出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。6．（ 生活中常常會(huì)發(fā)生一些意外的事，但每個(gè)人處理事情的方式不同。當(dāng)你與人發(fā)生沖突時(shí)，你會(huì)如何處理呢？請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，談?wù)勀愕慕?jīng)歷與看法。作文要求：1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實(shí)的名稱(chēng)和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名。作文的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。而固定句型It’s very important to get on well with each ’t be a selfish person and try to deal with everything calmly and ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)?！军c(diǎn)睛】書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。山東中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)下圖描述了李明和家人去年五一假期（May Day Holiday）外出旅游的經(jīng)歷。要求：1. 完整敘述圖片內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際情況陳述個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)或給出建議。t pay attention to hygiene. There39。主要是要完整敘述圖片內(nèi)容、結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際情況陳述個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)或給出建議。在陳述個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)或給出建議時(shí)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)來(lái)寫(xiě)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，避免使用漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語(yǔ)。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。句子What you see at the seaside做主語(yǔ)。該句話運(yùn)用了not only…but also…。湖南省岳陽(yáng)開(kāi)發(fā)區(qū)長(zhǎng)嶺中學(xué)中考模擬）時(shí)光荏苒，轉(zhuǎn)眼間你已經(jīng)成長(zhǎng)為一名即將步入高中的青少年。請(qǐng)你以“_______ makes me happy”為題并根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)提示, 寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文給校英語(yǔ)廣播站投稿，跟大家分享一下使你快樂(lè)的事情及理由。要求: 1. 請(qǐng)補(bǔ)全標(biāo)題, 如reading，traveling或helping others等；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；3. 詞數(shù)80左右，短文的標(biāo)題已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。【詳解】結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱(chēng)為單數(shù)第一，三人稱(chēng)，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I like……，Reading can……，When I feel……，When I am lost in……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。開(kāi)頭介紹了讀書(shū)讓我感到快樂(lè)，接下來(lái)介紹讀書(shū)的好處，最后指出我會(huì)一生保持讀書(shū)的習(xí)慣。9．（下面請(qǐng)大家談?wù)勯喿x的好處并在生活中養(yǎng)成良好的閱讀習(xí)慣。文章的時(shí)態(tài)以寫(xiě)作時(shí)為主。開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題，分析讀書(shū)的好處。10．（Dear fellows, The Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calendar. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.【答案】Dear fellows, The Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese celebrate the holiday on June18 this year . People hold the dragonboat races in memory of Qu Yuan,one of the greatest poets in China. We can watch the dragonboat races and eat a kind of Chinese food named Zongzi during the Dragon boat Festival. People always hang Calamus and Moxa on the wele to experience this traditional festival with friends from all over the world.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，向來(lái)自不同國(guó)家的同學(xué)介紹中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日——端午節(jié)。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。此處according to, in memory of, a kind of, on the day, wele to do sth, all over the world等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。江蘇中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)假定你是李華，最近你們班就低碳生活方式進(jìn)行了討論，你的英國(guó)朋友Peppa向你來(lái)信詢(xún)問(wèn)討論情況。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱(chēng)為第一，三人稱(chēng)，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式