【正文】 文，很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，主謂一致，在文中使用了時(shí)間狀語從句，定語從句，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如have fun，in order to，as for，in my opinion等。遼寧中考模擬）（B）根據(jù)要求完成大作文,詞數(shù):80100 We Get from Sports 的短文,應(yīng)該包含以下要點(diǎn):1,學(xué)生參加體育運(yùn)動(dòng)的興趣不同,理由各異.,通過運(yùn)動(dòng)來放松自己.,希望運(yùn)動(dòng)能使自己更強(qiáng)壯.，希望運(yùn)動(dòng)使自己減肥和保持健康,苗條..:文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的名字和學(xué)校的名字,不計(jì)入詞數(shù).:keep slim （保持苗條）What We Get from SportsStudents in our school have one thing in mon an interest in 【答案】Students in our school have one thing in mon an interest in sports. But different students have different reasons for taking part in sports.Many students have sports when they feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have fun. Most boys love sports. They take part in all kinds of sports in order to bee stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most, such as soccer, basketball and volleyball. As for girls, they want to lose weight. They want to keep slim, so they also like taking exercise.In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports.【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作主要是談?wù)撟约簩?duì)運(yùn)動(dòng)的觀點(diǎn)和看法，應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，寫作要點(diǎn)要包括：。s our duty to do sth等等，其次文章結(jié)構(gòu)也比較清晰，例如第二段的銜接詞，F(xiàn)irst of all，Then，Next，使用的簡單而恰當(dāng)。s also important to tell our parents we love them.【解析】【分析】本題要求考生以“我們應(yīng)該尊敬我們的父母”為題結(jié)合所給的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，寫一篇作文【詳解】這是篇材料作文，主要內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)已給，所以考生要圍繞著要點(diǎn)，進(jìn)行寫作，不要遺漏，當(dāng)然順序可以適當(dāng)調(diào)整。s important for us to honor love us so we should love and respect them. First of all, we should try our best to study hard to make them proud of , we can help our parents with some housework because they are tired after , we should respect them and never talk to them 39。We should honor our parents As we know, honoring our parents is an excellent tradition of 【答案】We should honor our parentsAs we know, honoring our parents is an excellent tradition of honor my often help my parents do housework in my spare think it39。某英語報(bào)社正在舉辦以“弘揚(yáng)中華傳統(tǒng)文化”為主題的征文活動(dòng),請你以“We should honor our parents”為題,寫一篇短文參加征文活動(dòng)。6．（它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。Hi, Xiao Ming! 【答案】例文Hi, Xiao Ming! In my opinion, you have to take a long talk with your parents. On the one hand, You should let them know that you’re serious about learning art and you’re clever enough to plan the future for yourself. Interest es first, and one can do better in everything if it is connected with their interest. So this is the best chance for you to achieve your dream, though it’s just the very beginning to enter an art school. On the other hand, you should be understanding with your parents because they really care about you. They want you to be better. But everything may happen if you attend Zhong Kao. If you fail, both your dream and your parents’ wish won’t be able to be realized. That’s the worse thing nobody wants to see. Simply put, keep your dream! Communicate more with you parents, and ask your teacher for help if necessary!【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如in my opinion，have to do，take a long talk with，on the one/other hand，enough to do，connect with，care about，want you to be better，both …and，be able to，ask for help等。杭州市清河中學(xué)中考模擬）小明在朋友圈發(fā)了一段文字，表達(dá)了自己的苦惱，假如你是他的朋友，請回復(fù)他，表達(dá)你的觀點(diǎn)，并給他一些你的建議。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。修改潤色。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。初寫短文。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如bought sth for sb, be grateful to, be going to do, share sth with sb, be fond of, as far as I am concerned, on the one hand...on the other hand, from to以及we had a reading party,which was held on Friday in our reading room中which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句。Last Friday，we had a reading party, which was held on Friday in our reading room. Then we are going to hold an activity to share the feeling with others at 3:00 on Friday afternoon. All of us are fond of buying books on the Internet. We are going to buy some books on the Internet next month. As far as I am concerned, on the one hand, the books on the Internet are cheaper than those in the bookstore. On the other hand, there are all kinds of books, so we needn’t go from one bookstore to another .Best wishes!Yours,Cathy【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，向外教介紹俱樂部中讀書交流會(huì)的活動(dòng)，并且告訴外教同學(xué)們現(xiàn)在喜歡網(wǎng)購圖書并闡述網(wǎng)購圖書的好處。4至少80詞。2可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫。3說一說網(wǎng)上購書有什么好處。（2）本周五的下午3點(diǎn)，大家將共同交流讀書的體會(huì)。寫作要點(diǎn)：1表達(dá)收到圖書后的喜悅與感激之情。俱樂部的同學(xué)們很喜歡網(wǎng)購圖書這種便捷的方式，并打算在本周五交流讀書后的感受。4．（最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。在寫作時(shí)，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，考生要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，以“The Story of Lingling”為題，為社區(qū)宣傳專欄寫一篇短文，介紹在玲玲身上發(fā)生的一件事。（3）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。（1）上周晚飯后玲玲和媽媽一起出去散步，在社區(qū)的門口看見一個(gè)錢包；（2）玲玲把錢包撿起，發(fā)現(xiàn)錢包里有身份證和一些錢；（3）玲玲和媽媽把錢包交給保安，保安把這個(gè)消息發(fā)到小區(qū)的微信群中；（4）失主看到消息后，過來取回錢包并對(duì)玲玲和媽媽表示感謝；（5）你覺得……參考詞匯：社區(qū) munity 身份證 ID card 保安 guard 微信群 Wechat group 失主 owner要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80～100個(gè)。3．（為了是表達(dá)更有邏輯性，可以使用序數(shù)詞，連接詞等。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。t want to leave. I feel that the Palace Museum is very great. It was a very happy day and and I gained a lot.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文，寫一篇發(fā)言稿。My visit to the Palace MuseumOn May 1st I went to visit the Palace Museum. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My visit to the Palace MuseumOn May 1st I went to visit the Palace Museum. I bought tickets to the Palace Museum online in advance. When I arrived in Beijing by train, I transferred to the Forbidden City by subway. The Palace Museum is tall and magnificent, wi