【文章內容簡介】 總結牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內容經整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數。7．（海南?？趯嶒炛袑W中考模擬）書面表達安全對于每個人都很重要。中學生年齡較小，學生安全更是人們關注的焦點。請根據以下提示，寫一篇關于學生安全的英語作文。內容提示：：遵守交通規(guī)則，不闖紅綠燈等；：吃健康食物，不吃垃圾食品等；：進行體育鍛煉時，不要弄傷自己，不私自下河游泳等。提示詞語：study hard, read, healthy food, exercise, help, chores, at home,Travel Safety is very important to everyone._______________________________________________________________【答案】Safety is very important to everyone. Middle school students are like precious flowers – so their safety is being a focus for us all.First, we must obey the traffic rules when we go out. Don’t cross the street when the light is red. Secondly, we should eat healthy food. Don’t eat junk food. Eat more fruits and vegetables. Eat less meat and eggs. Finally, be careful not to hurt yourself while you are playing outside. It’s dangerous to go swimming by yourself, so don’t go swimming without permission. These are some important safety tips to remember.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當發(fā)揮。根據材料內容可知本文主要使用一般現在時，主語是第一人稱。寫作時注意人稱、時態(tài)的搭配及主謂一致問題。同時適當使用連接詞，注意上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系?！军c睛】這篇短文涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點內容，表達準確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。在文章的結構組織上很好地使用了簡單句和復合句，文章脈絡清晰，自然流暢。同時，文章還使用了一些常用的句式和短語，如：祈使句的使用、wemust、weshould、inaword、It’s+形容詞+to動詞不定式結構以及序數詞的使用等，這為文章增色不少。在學習中注意積累，牢記一些常用句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理。8．（北京中考模擬）假如你是李華，你們學校準備組織學生本周五去北京世園會參觀。你打算邀請外教 Peter參加。請用英語寫一封電子郵件，告訴他集合的時間和地點，在那里可以做什么，以及參觀時需要準備什么。提示詞語： school gate, nature, culture, food and drink提示問題： ●When and where are you going to meet?●What are you going to do there?●What do you advise Peter to prepare for the visit?Dear Pete,How is it going?I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition in I39。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua【答案】Dear Peter，How is it going?I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition. We will meet at the school gate at 7:00 . this Friday. Then we will go to Beijing International Horticulture Exposition together. We can do a lot of things there. We can not only enjoy the special and beautiful plants but also learn different cultures in various indoor or outdoor shows. We plan to stay there for a whole day. You39。d better wear a pair of fortable sports shoes and take some food and drinks with you.I39。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】1. 題干解讀：這是一篇給材料作文，屬于應用文寫作。本文已經給出了主要寫作要點，動筆前要先認真閱讀要點，寫作中，應注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內容利用上；提示的問題就是寫作的基本方向，然后圍繞要點適當發(fā)揮即可。2. 例文點評：文章采取郵件格式，時態(tài)以一般將來時態(tài)為主。語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，語言準確，語意連貫，表達清楚，具有邏輯性。3. 高分亮點：短語：school gate；invite sb. to do；a lot of；plan to do。句型：not only…but also；You39。d better …；I39。m looking forward to…。9．（安徽中考模擬）假如你是李華，你的美國朋友Johnson打算暑假來合肥玩，而合肥的夏天經常持續(xù)高溫，請你根據以下提示，用英文給他寫一封郵件，告訴他防暑降溫的方法?！?清淡飲食； ● 合理休息； ● 適當運動； ● ……注意: ；，可適當發(fā)揮；、學校名和地名；，不計入總詞數。Dear Johnson Wele to Hefei. It’s a very beautiful city. But it’s often very hot in summer. Here is some advice on how to beat the summer I hope the advice is useful to you. Wish you a good holiday! Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jack, Wele to Hefei. It’s a very beautiful city. But it’s often very hot in summer. Here is some advice on how to beat the summer heat. First of all, you should drink more water and eat light meals, such as salads, fruit and vegetables. Next, you’d better get some sleep after lunch. Don’t stay up and make sure you get enough sleep. It’s not a good idea to stay out when it’s very hot. What39。s more, take some exercise properly. Why not take a warm shower before going to bed. Finally, if you have to go out, please remember to wear sunglasses and a hat. I hope the advice is useful to you. Wish you a good holiday! Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇關于防暑的建議，所以寫作時，比較多地用到表示建議的句型，比如You’d better… ,You should…. , It’s a good idea to do…., Why not do….? Why don’t you do….? 提出建議時要條理清晰，可以使用First,…. Second, ….. At last….等表示次序的詞。在文章最后可以提出自己的期望和祝福。寫完后記得對文章檢查復合，避免單詞拼寫及語法錯誤。本篇文章首先第一段對別人的到來表示歡迎，接著對合肥的天氣進行總的描述，并引出下文自己的建議。第二段也是文章的主體部分。用first of all, Next, What39。s more, Finally,提出了四點建議，其中用到建議的句型，例如you should，you’d better, Don’t…, It’s not a good idea to….., Why not…., please…...等。結構清晰，層次分明，詞語及句型使用正確，很不錯的一篇文章。10．（天津中考模擬） 最近一份學生體質健康調查結果顯示，學生近視率仍維持在高位水平，且越來越低齡化。請根據下表所提示的內容，用英語寫一篇短文，并發(fā)表自己的觀點?，F 狀大約70%學生眼睛近視主要原因1. 睡眠不足2. 長時間看書、做作業(yè)、用電腦等預防方法1. 做眼睛保健操，多進行體育活動2. 養(yǎng)成正確的用眼習慣你的觀點… ….（至少一條）參考詞匯：近視的 shortsighted要求：（1）詞數：80～100個。（2）開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。（3）要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當發(fā)揮。The survey shows that many students have bee shortsighted at a very young age. At present,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】The survey shows that many students have bee shortsighted at a very young age. At present, about 70% of the students are shortsighted. Here are some main causes.Some students may not have enough sleep. Some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest. Some students even like to watch TV or use puters for a long time.In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. We can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We should have the good habit of using our eyes.I think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖表作文。根據題干要求可知，本篇文章主要使用一般現在時寫作，人稱用第三人稱復數和第一人稱