【文章內容簡介】 ping Others Is Helping Ourselves 為題寫一篇短文。要求：1. 思路清晰，觀點明確，語法正確，有說服力；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱；3. 80詞左右。Helping Others Is Helping Ourselves________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Helping Others Is Helping OurselvesNobody is perfect enough to manage to do everything, so help is necessary and important in our life. On the one hand, we should help others often. Giving help can bring us pleasure. Helping an old man cross the road often makes me feel confident and useful. On the other hand, we need others’ help when we get into trouble. I often get help from my parents, friends, teachers, even some strangers. Thanks to their help, it is easy for me to get out of trouble.All in all, everyone needs help. And only who are willing to help others will also be helped.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，主要講述“幫助別人就是幫助自己”。根據(jù)要表達的內容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內容。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點詞句，如adj+enough，on the one hand，on the other hand，make sb do，get into trouble，thanks to，it is adj for sb to do sth。增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達的關鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。構思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關的寫作材料。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內容要求學生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關鍵。初寫短文。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。9．（江蘇中考模擬） 近年來，隨著智能手機的普及，越來越多的學生開始使用手機來完成家庭作業(yè)。這引發(fā)了學生們是否喜歡用app學習的討論，為此，英文報Teens 將在下期開設專欄討論這一話題，你采訪了一些同學，寫了一篇題為“Would you like to study on apps?”的報道。內容如下：支持者反對者學生們可以經(jīng)常利用手機操練說英語。自從使用手機以來，視力變差。一個理由……（12句）一個理由……（12句）你喜歡在用app學習嗎？給出你的理由……（23句），要求語句通順，意思連貫；；，短文開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；，寫在試卷其他部位無效。Would you like to study on apps?Smartphones are being more and more popular nowadays, more and more students like to use them to study. 【答案】Would you like to study on apps?Smartphones are being more and more popular nowadays, more and more students like to use them to study. Students can often practice speaking English on phones. There are many exercises on apps, this makes it easier for us to learn by ourselves. But other students don’t like to use them. Their eyesight has been worse since they used mobile phones. Also, they can’t help playing with other apps while studying. This leads to bad results in their study. I think it is useful for us to use mobile phones . I can learn more at home without paying much money. But we should use them in a proper way.【解析】【詳解】閱讀題干，這是屬于看法類的作文，那么在寫這類作文時，首先要分別寫出支持和反對兩方面的看法及原因，最后要說明自己的觀點看法來進行總結。亮點詞匯短語：practice doing ；learn by oneself自學；lead to導致；it is adj. for us to do sth對某人來說，做某事是怎樣的；in a proper way以適當?shù)姆绞?。亮點句型：There are many exercises on apps, this makes it easier for us to learn by ，這使我們更容易自己學習。Make it + adj.+ for sb to do sth.Their eyesight has been worse since they used mobile phones. 自從他們使用手機以來，他們的視力變得更差了。they can’t help playing with other apps while 。Can’t help doing sth情不自禁地做某事。10．（寧夏銀川二中中考模擬）假設你是李華。上周末你和同班同學去綠色農(nóng)場郊游,大家玩的很開心。請你通過將此活動過程告知你的好友Tom，并簡要談談你的感受。要點如下：The trip to the Green FarmWhen4月22日早上8:00出發(fā)。下午5:00返回。Where學校大門口集合。綠色農(nóng)場效游。How乘坐校車。What野炊、摘西紅柿，放風箏等（至少提及三項活動）?！璖afety tips不要到河里游泳；不要單獨行動……:參考詞匯：get close to the nature（親近大自然）寫作要求：詞數(shù)60－80；（開頭和結尾已給出）文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的校名或人名；所給的要點必須都用上；緊扣主題，適當發(fā)揮。Dear Tom,How’s it going? Last weekend, I went to_______________ Yours, Li Hua【答案】Dear TomHow’s it going?Last weekend ,I went to the Green Farm for a trip with my set off at 8:00 in the morning on 22nd came back at 5:00 in the met at the school went there by school bus . We had a piic,picked tomatoes,flied kites and so teacher told us not to swim in the river and do anything had a chance to get close to the had a good trip.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖表，要求介紹自己上周末和同班同學去綠色農(nóng)場郊游,大家玩的很開心。動筆前先要認真閱讀要點，圍繞要點組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內容表達出來，在此基礎上亦可適當發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應用第一人稱，一般過去時態(tài)，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關系，語意連貫。11．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達時間過得飛快，似乎幾個月前才進入初三，現(xiàn)在中考卻近在眼前。請以“Are We Ready for the Challenge?”為題，用英語寫一篇短文，內容要點如下：1．你發(fā)現(xiàn)老師現(xiàn)在上課語速很快。由于有太多的作業(yè)和考試，學生沒有足夠的時間來進行課外活動；2．有的同學以前學習不太努力，但現(xiàn)在他們已經(jīng)意識到這次考試的重要性，并且全身心投入到學習中去；3．你在這最后一個月里的打算和安排……注意：1．短文須包括所有內容要點，要求語句通順、意思連貫；2．第3要點的內容須用2至3句話作適當發(fā)揮；3．詞數(shù)90左右，短文的開頭與結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Are We Ready for the Challenge?How time flies! It seemed that we began our Grade Three only a few months ago, but the Senior High School Entrance Examination is ing soon!____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I39。m sure we will do well in the ing exam if we try our best!【答案】Are We Ready for the Challenge?How time flies! It seemed that we began our Grade Three only a few months ago, but the Senior High School Entrance Examination is ing soon! I find the teachers speak more