【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 ping Others Is Helping Ourselves 為題寫(xiě)一篇短文。要求：1. 思路清晰，觀點(diǎn)明確，語(yǔ)法正確，有說(shuō)服力；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；3. 80詞左右。Helping Others Is Helping Ourselves________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Helping Others Is Helping OurselvesNobody is perfect enough to manage to do everything, so help is necessary and important in our life. On the one hand, we should help others often. Giving help can bring us pleasure. Helping an old man cross the road often makes me feel confident and useful. On the other hand, we need others’ help when we get into trouble. I often get help from my parents, friends, teachers, even some strangers. Thanks to their help, it is easy for me to get out of trouble.All in all, everyone needs help. And only who are willing to help others will also be helped.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，主要講述“幫助別人就是幫助自己”。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如adj+enough，on the one hand，on the other hand，make sb do，get into trouble，thanks to，it is adj for sb to do sth。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫(xiě)好書(shū)面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料。通常書(shū)面表達(dá)給出的話題是開(kāi)放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫(xiě)短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作了，在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。9．（江蘇中考模擬） 近年來(lái)，隨著智能手機(jī)的普及，越來(lái)越多的學(xué)生開(kāi)始使用手機(jī)來(lái)完成家庭作業(yè)。這引發(fā)了學(xué)生們是否喜歡用app學(xué)習(xí)的討論，為此，英文報(bào)Teens 將在下期開(kāi)設(shè)專(zhuān)欄討論這一話題，你采訪了一些同學(xué)，寫(xiě)了一篇題為“Would you like to study on apps?”的報(bào)道。內(nèi)容如下：支持者反對(duì)者學(xué)生們可以經(jīng)常利用手機(jī)操練說(shuō)英語(yǔ)。自從使用手機(jī)以來(lái)，視力變差。一個(gè)理由……（12句）一個(gè)理由……（12句）你喜歡在用app學(xué)習(xí)嗎？給出你的理由……（23句），要求語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫；；，短文開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；，寫(xiě)在試卷其他部位無(wú)效。Would you like to study on apps?Smartphones are being more and more popular nowadays, more and more students like to use them to study. 【答案】Would you like to study on apps?Smartphones are being more and more popular nowadays, more and more students like to use them to study. Students can often practice speaking English on phones. There are many exercises on apps, this makes it easier for us to learn by ourselves. But other students don’t like to use them. Their eyesight has been worse since they used mobile phones. Also, they can’t help playing with other apps while studying. This leads to bad results in their study. I think it is useful for us to use mobile phones . I can learn more at home without paying much money. But we should use them in a proper way.【解析】【詳解】閱讀題干，這是屬于看法類(lèi)的作文，那么在寫(xiě)這類(lèi)作文時(shí)，首先要分別寫(xiě)出支持和反對(duì)兩方面的看法及原因，最后要說(shuō)明自己的觀點(diǎn)看法來(lái)進(jìn)行總結(jié)。亮點(diǎn)詞匯短語(yǔ)：practice doing ；learn by oneself自學(xué)；lead to導(dǎo)致；it is adj. for us to do sth對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)，做某事是怎樣的；in a proper way以適當(dāng)?shù)姆绞?。亮點(diǎn)句型：There are many exercises on apps, this makes it easier for us to learn by ，這使我們更容易自己學(xué)習(xí)。Make it + adj.+ for sb to do sth.Their eyesight has been worse since they used mobile phones. 自從他們使用手機(jī)以來(lái)，他們的視力變得更差了。they can’t help playing with other apps while 。Can’t help doing sth情不自禁地做某事。10．（寧夏銀川二中中考模擬）假設(shè)你是李華。上周末你和同班同學(xué)去綠色農(nóng)場(chǎng)郊游,大家玩的很開(kāi)心。請(qǐng)你通過(guò)將此活動(dòng)過(guò)程告知你的好友Tom，并簡(jiǎn)要談?wù)勀愕母惺?。要點(diǎn)如下：The trip to the Green FarmWhen4月22日早上8:00出發(fā)。下午5:00返回。Where學(xué)校大門(mén)口集合。綠色農(nóng)場(chǎng)效游。How乘坐校車(chē)。What野炊、摘西紅柿，放風(fēng)箏等（至少提及三項(xiàng)活動(dòng)）?！璖afety tips不要到河里游泳；不要單獨(dú)行動(dòng)……:參考詞匯：get close to the nature（親近大自然）寫(xiě)作要求：詞數(shù)60－80；（開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出）文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名或人名；所給的要點(diǎn)必須都用上；緊扣主題，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。Dear Tom,How’s it going? Last weekend, I went to_______________ Yours, Li Hua【答案】Dear TomHow’s it going?Last weekend ,I went to the Green Farm for a trip with my set off at 8:00 in the morning on 22nd came back at 5:00 in the met at the school went there by school bus . We had a piic,picked tomatoes,flied kites and so teacher told us not to swim in the river and do anything had a chance to get close to the had a good trip.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖表，要求介紹自己上周末和同班同學(xué)去綠色農(nóng)場(chǎng)郊游,大家玩的很開(kāi)心。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱(chēng)，一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。11．（江蘇中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)時(shí)間過(guò)得飛快，似乎幾個(gè)月前才進(jìn)入初三，現(xiàn)在中考卻近在眼前。請(qǐng)以“Are We Ready for the Challenge?”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1．你發(fā)現(xiàn)老師現(xiàn)在上課語(yǔ)速很快。由于有太多的作業(yè)和考試，學(xué)生沒(méi)有足夠的時(shí)間來(lái)進(jìn)行課外活動(dòng)；2．有的同學(xué)以前學(xué)習(xí)不太努力，但現(xiàn)在他們已經(jīng)意識(shí)到這次考試的重要性，并且全身心投入到學(xué)習(xí)中去；3．你在這最后一個(gè)月里的打算和安排……注意：1．短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫；2．第3要點(diǎn)的內(nèi)容須用2至3句話作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3．詞數(shù)90左右，短文的開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Are We Ready for the Challenge?How time flies! It seemed that we began our Grade Three only a few months ago, but the Senior High School Entrance Examination is ing soon!____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I39。m sure we will do well in the ing exam if we try our best!【答案】Are We Ready for the Challenge?How time flies! It seemed that we began our Grade Three only a few months ago, but the Senior High School Entrance Examination is ing soon! I find the teachers speak more