【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 【答案】Everyone has his or her favorite outdoor activities. I enjoy running so much because it makes me keep fit and have an excellent figure. Now, plogging is spreading all over the world. What’s plogging? Put simply, plogging is the act of cleaning up trash while running. Every Sunday I wear plastic gloves and carry a garbage bag when I run along the river. I can easily clean up trash such as plastic bottles, cans and so on . . I feel even better after returning from a run when I can do something that’s good for myself and my munity. Plogging shows how we are making the world a better place with a simple task. Everyone should be an environmental protection guard and take action to keep our home clean . To protect the earth is to protect ourselves.【解析】【分析】本篇是材料作文，要求結(jié)合自己的日常生活經(jīng)歷，談?wù)勀銓?duì)目前最環(huán)保的運(yùn)動(dòng)方式 （plogging） 的認(rèn)識(shí)以及怎樣從身邊小事做起，做生態(tài)中國(guó)，健康中國(guó)的踐行者?！驹斀狻浚罕酒牧献魑囊笠缘谝蝗朔Q(chēng)，談?wù)勛约簩?duì)目前最環(huán)保的運(yùn)動(dòng)方式 （plogging） 的認(rèn)識(shí)以及結(jié)合自己的日常生活經(jīng)歷，談?wù)勗鯓訌纳磉呅∈伦銎穑錾鷳B(tài)中國(guó)，健康中國(guó)的踐行者；陳述現(xiàn)階段的事情用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。書(shū)寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意題干所給的提示材料，成文時(shí)要文句通順，內(nèi)容完整。：本例文結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，層次分明。開(kāi)篇緊扣主題，介紹自己最喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)是跑步；正文部分順理成章的介紹plogging這種運(yùn)動(dòng)方式以及自己如何身體力行地做到鍛煉、環(huán)保兩不誤；結(jié)尾以. Everyone should be an environmental protection guard and take action to keep our home clean . To protect the earth is to protect ，總結(jié)全文。文章布局合理，內(nèi)容完整連貫。：高分短語(yǔ)： so much ； all over the world； run along； take action to； keep ……clean .高分句型： enjoy running so much because it makes me keep fit and have an excellent figure. is the act of cleaning up trash while running . Sunday I wear plastic gloves and carry a garbage bag when I run along the river； protect the earth is to protect ourselves.【點(diǎn)睛】本篇材料作文書(shū)寫(xiě)前要認(rèn)真審題，確定人稱(chēng)（第一人稱(chēng)）和時(shí)態(tài)（一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)）；關(guān)注題材的格式（記敘文），注意文章的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)；書(shū)寫(xiě)時(shí)要緊扣主題，做到中心突出，內(nèi)容完整、連貫；成文后要檢查人稱(chēng)、時(shí)態(tài)是否一致、單詞的拼寫(xiě)是否正確、短語(yǔ)和句式的使用是否得當(dāng)。9．（中央民族大學(xué)附屬中學(xué)昆明五華實(shí)驗(yàn)學(xué)校中考模擬）A good book is important to me要求：1. 緊扣主題，意思連貫，語(yǔ)言通順，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范。2. 不得使用真實(shí)姓名和校名，如需使用名字，請(qǐng)用Mike, Gina等英文名字。 校名統(tǒng)一使用Guangming Middle School。3. 詞數(shù)不少于60?！敬鸢浮緼 good book is important for me. It can not only help broaden my horizons, but also give me inspiration. From the good book, I can learn what others think, and their views about the world. What’s more, I can even live their lives, which are totally different from mine. For me, a good book is really like a good friend, who can teach me how to solve the problems when I am in trouble. A good book helps me a lot, and it is quite important for me in my life.【解析】【分析】本題是命題作文，根據(jù)題目一本好書(shū)對(duì)我是重要的，自己寫(xiě)相關(guān)內(nèi)容，可以是你讀了什么書(shū)，該書(shū)對(duì)你產(chǎn)生了什么影響。也可以是一本好書(shū)為什么對(duì)你來(lái)說(shuō)是重要的?！驹斀狻勘酒恼轮饕獜臑槭裁磳?duì)我重要這個(gè)角度來(lái)寫(xiě)。文章時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)為第一人稱(chēng)。題目并沒(méi)有給過(guò)多的提示信息，所以需要學(xué)生自己思索行文內(nèi)容。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤?！军c(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。10．（重慶中考模擬）假如你是李華，你校正舉辦英語(yǔ)讀書(shū)節(jié)活動(dòng),你在參與活動(dòng)的過(guò)程中遇到一些困難。請(qǐng)給你的英國(guó)朋友Nick寫(xiě)一封向他求助。要求：—120 詞，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考要點(diǎn)：（時(shí)間、內(nèi)容……）。（如：缺少相關(guān)書(shū)籍、英語(yǔ)閱讀困難……）；。Dear Nick,How’s everything going?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Nick,How’s everything going?Our school is holding an English reading festival this June. I’m very interested in it. There are many different activation in the festival such as reading good English books. sharing good stories and so on. It’s a good chance for us to learn more about western cultures. However, I have some problems. First, I don’t have enough books. For example, I want to get some books about western history. Next, I’m not so good at English, I have trouble in reading. Would you please share some good books with me and give me some advice on reading?I expect to hear from you soon.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】這是一篇書(shū)信作文。假如你是李華，你校正舉辦英語(yǔ)讀書(shū)節(jié)活動(dòng),你在參與活動(dòng)的過(guò)程中遇到一些困難。請(qǐng)給你的英國(guó)朋友Nick寫(xiě)一封向他求助。首先要注意書(shū)信的書(shū)寫(xiě)格式，文章時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)主要為第一人稱(chēng)。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，要注意理順要點(diǎn)，防止漏寫(xiě)；注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查字?jǐn)?shù)是否符合要求。參考要點(diǎn)：（時(shí)間、內(nèi)容……）。（如：缺少相關(guān)書(shū)籍、英語(yǔ)閱讀困難……）；。11．（全國(guó)中考模擬）共享單車(chē)（shared bikes）在廈門(mén)投入使用以來(lái)，給人們帶來(lái)了諸多便利，受到人們的追捧，改變了人們的出行方式，但同時(shí)也遇到了一些挑戰(zhàn)，它是國(guó)民素質(zhì)的“照妖鏡”，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格中信息的提示，給《21世紀(jì)英文報(bào)》寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于共享單車(chē)看法的稿件。社會(huì)現(xiàn)狀自從出現(xiàn)，飽受贊譽(yù)。諸多優(yōu)勢(shì)，出行方便，減少污染，負(fù)擔(dān)得起存在問(wèn)題你的觀點(diǎn)我認(rèn)為……（考生自擬，至少2點(diǎn)）注意事項(xiàng):，要求語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫?！澳愕挠^點(diǎn)”一欄用2―3句話展開(kāi)合理想象。作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。，文章的開(kāi)頭部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Public bicycles are being more and more popular in our daily life.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Shared bikes are being more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared.Shared bikes have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it39。s easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What39。s more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it.But there are some problems too. Some people can39。t return shared bikes in time. Sometimes shared bikes take up too much of the road, so they are in our way.I think we should encourage more people to use shared bikes properly. After all, it39。s a way of living a green li