【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 pecial day for me, so I want to give him a surprise. My father is a great father, and he always gives me what I want. I told my mother that I wanted to make a dish for my father. She was very happy to teach me. With the help of my mother, I am confident that I can make a good meal. When my father returned home, he was very happy and praised me a lot. He said this was the biggest present for him.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如such a special day，give him a surprise，a lot，make a dish，want to do，with the help of，return home等。而復(fù)雜并列結(jié)構(gòu)My father is a great father, and he always gives me what I is my father’s birthday, which is such a special day for me, so I want to give him a surprise./ I told my mother that I wanted to make a dish for my father. / With the help of my mother, I am confident that I can make a good meal. /When my father returned home, he was very happy and praised me a ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。【點(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。8．（浙江中考模擬）書面表達(dá) 假如你是Li Ming, 最近你的英國(guó)筆友Susan要來(lái)溫州體驗(yàn)中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)文化，請(qǐng)你為Susan設(shè)計(jì)溫州一日游的活動(dòng)，幫助她體驗(yàn)溫州的文化習(xí)俗。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)給她寫一封電子郵件：；；要求：1. 不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的個(gè)人身份信息；2. 詞數(shù)：110詞左右。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Susan,I’m glad to hear that you are ing to Yours,Li Ming【答案】Dear Susan,I’m glad to hear that you are ing to Wenzhou soon， where there are lots of places of interest． To experience traditional Chinese culture better， We can begin our tour by going sightseeing along Wenzhou Road． I bet you will be attracted． Along the Wenzhou Road．not only can you watch the wonderful scenery， but also you will find many historical relics， from which you can learn a lot of traditional culture． Sincerely waiting for your ing! Yours， Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇書信作文。根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)給她寫一封電子郵件。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要為第一人稱。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，考生要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫作時(shí)，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤?！军c(diǎn)睛】點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作，在寫作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求。9．（上海市澧溪中學(xué)初三期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Yesterday once more”.（以“昨日重現(xiàn)”為題寫一篇不少于60詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。）當(dāng)昨日重現(xiàn)之時(shí)，在腦海里的都是回憶。記憶中有沒(méi)有讓你留下深刻印象的人、事或物，對(duì)你現(xiàn)在的生活造成了影響。請(qǐng)選取一個(gè)方面，結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷，談?wù)勀惝?dāng)時(shí)的經(jīng)歷以及現(xiàn)在的感受。（注意：段文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）The following is for reference only（以下表達(dá)僅供參考）used to be.../make sb do sth/in my heart/have a deep influence/remind sb of sth【答案】例文Yesterday once moreIt goes without saying that our life is full of a variety of memories. Among all the persons I have met, the most unforgettable person is my father.I used to be such a shy and silent girl that I couldn’t say any words in public. Whenever teachers asked me to answer questions, my heart would beat again and again and say nothing but to look down. Once, I tried talking with my father frightenedly. He listened to me all the time with bright smile and encouraged me to be brave. He told me, “ you don’t have to be perfect but when you do your best, you make your parent proud.” With the support of my father, I gained so much encouragement that I determined to be a more confident person. In one word, Father’s love like water, deep and soft, which makes great differences in my life.【解析】【詳解】：該題目屬于記敘文寫作。在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意選取一個(gè)給你留下深刻印象的人、事或物，對(duì)你現(xiàn)在的生活造成了影響。結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷，談?wù)勀惝?dāng)時(shí)的經(jīng)歷以及現(xiàn)在的感受。：例文采用三段式：用第一人稱來(lái)敘述故事內(nèi)容：時(shí)態(tài)采用一般過(guò)去式為主，敘述過(guò)去的經(jīng)歷，敘述完整清晰。：短語(yǔ)：full of；in public；again and again；all the time；encourage sb to do sth；do one’s best；with the support of。句型：such…that…；so…that…引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句；whenever…引導(dǎo)的從句；used to do。10．（山東中考模擬）假如你是學(xué)生會(huì)主席， 你校學(xué)生會(huì)打算以“保護(hù)環(huán)境”為主題搞 一次社會(huì)實(shí)踐。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列提示用英語(yǔ)寫一封倡議書。要點(diǎn)如下：，多走路。，塑料袋。，多植樹。要求：1詞數(shù)：80100；，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。， 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)?！敬鸢浮緿ear classmates,As we all know,the earth is in trouble because of the way we are polluting one of us must do something to help save our ,transportation is the main factor of air we should walk more instead of ,industrial pollution is water from factories is poured into rivers and lakes and this causes water ,we should stop using plastic bags when we go ,remember to turn off the lights and taps whenever we’re not using them and we should plant more trees to protect our earth.The Students’ Union【解析】【詳解】這是一篇要求假如你是學(xué)生會(huì)主席， 你校學(xué)生會(huì)打算以“保護(hù)環(huán)境”為主題搞 一次社會(huì)實(shí)踐。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列提示用英語(yǔ)寫一封倡議書。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。11．（山東中考模擬） 書面表達(dá) 你的的筆友Tom居住在北京，請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格中提供的信息，介紹一下他的情況。（80詞左右）時(shí)間來(lái)到中國(guó)已經(jīng)兩年了，在北京工作。旅游曾經(jīng)去過(guò)長(zhǎng)城，故宮等名勝。喜好過(guò)去喜歡看科幻小說(shuō)，現(xiàn)在對(duì)中國(guó)古典書籍很感興趣，已經(jīng)讀完了2本名著。工作情況早晨8點(diǎn)起床，乘坐地鐵去上班，空余時(shí)間練習(xí)漢語(yǔ)。夢(mèng)想去很多不同的地方，了解中國(guó)文化，品嘗中國(guó)美食。I have a pen friend named Tom. 【答案】I have a pen friend named Tom. It has been two years since he came to China and worked in Beijing. And he has been to the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and other places of interest. He used to like to read science fictions. Now he is very interested in Chinese classical books and has read 2 classics. He gets up at 8 . and takes the subway to work every day, and practices Chinese in his spare time. He teaches English in a middle school in Beijing. He works hard. He likes China. He hopes to go to a lot of different places, know about Chinese culture and taste Chinese food in the future.【解析】試題分析：本文是材料作文。你的的筆友Tom居住在北京，請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格中提供的信息，介紹一下他的情況。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文使用的時(shí)態(tài)有一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，一般過(guò)去式和現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)。寫作時(shí)，列好提綱，注意使用連詞，句型、句式，使文章整體意思連貫，表達(dá)流暢。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無(wú)拼寫，語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤（時(shí)態(tài)，主謂一致等）。（一）列提綱：1. 來(lái)到中國(guó)已經(jīng)兩年了，在北京工作。It has been two years since he came to China and worked in . 曾經(jīng)去過(guò)長(zhǎng)城，故宮等名勝。He has been to the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and other places of . 過(guò)去喜歡看科幻小說(shuō)，現(xiàn)在對(duì)中國(guó)古典書籍很感興趣，已經(jīng)讀完了2本名著。He used to like to read science fictions. Now he is very interested in Chinese classical books and has read 2 . 早晨8點(diǎn)起床，乘坐地鐵去上班，空余時(shí)間練習(xí)漢語(yǔ)。He gets up at 8