【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway.As for me, I will go to school by bike or on foot. In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment. Would you like to tell me some good ideas? I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Ming【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以李明的身份給自己的英國筆友寫信，告訴他關(guān)于家鄉(xiāng)霧霾的情況。題目中列出了三個(gè)要點(diǎn)，我們應(yīng)根據(jù)這些要點(diǎn)提示，來組織語言，充實(shí)內(nèi)容。首先介紹去年家鄉(xiāng)的霧霾情況嚴(yán)重；然后介紹為減少霧霾人們采取了一些措施；最后介紹一下你自己在日常生活中應(yīng)該怎么做。因此文章應(yīng)主要分成三段，一個(gè)內(nèi)容一段。文章內(nèi)容中敘述的情況不一，時(shí)態(tài)不能統(tǒng)一，根據(jù)表達(dá)的需要使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)，注意謂語動詞的正確形式。寫作時(shí)，應(yīng)注意英語句式表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮，寫完整的句子，利用簡單句的基本句型，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語。為提升文章檔次，可以穿插使用并列句和復(fù)合句；語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。【點(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文中作者根據(jù)題目要求介紹了自己家鄉(xiāng)治理霧霾的情況，并結(jié)合自身的實(shí)際情況，講述了自己日常生活中是如何做的。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有信息，沒有遺漏要點(diǎn)；且文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，分成了三段，每一段的中心明確，意思表達(dá)清楚、明了。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，作者根據(jù)表達(dá)需要使用了一般過去時(shí)、一般將來時(shí)態(tài)和一般將來時(shí)態(tài)，動詞形式變化準(zhǔn)確，語法規(guī)范。短文中語言得體，句式表達(dá)符合英語的習(xí)慣。句子結(jié)構(gòu)以簡單句為主，也使用了一些并列句和復(fù)合句，長短句結(jié)合，使文章富有節(jié)奏。短文中較好的句式有More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze、People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. 、The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway、In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the 。9．（靖江市第三中學(xué)中考模擬） 年11月15日泰州市召開了深化全國文明城市創(chuàng)建迎檢部署會，會上我市正式啟動了“泰有禮”全民主題實(shí)踐活動，形成崇德向善、文明有禮的道德風(fēng)尚和城市標(biāo)識，同時(shí)組織“泰有禮”志愿服務(wù)隊(duì)伍，圍繞“文明禮讓”“文明交通”“文明餐飲”“文明上網(wǎng)”等文明實(shí)踐活動，承擔(dān)起對市民日常行為進(jìn)行勸導(dǎo)的責(zé)任。假如你是其中的一名志愿者，請根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇150字左右的英語短文。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。（以上背景內(nèi)容無需表達(dá)） 內(nèi)容提示： ，幫助他們做家務(wù)活；，排隊(duì)候車，不隨地吐痰、不亂扔垃圾；不在公共場所抽煙、喧嘩（比如在圖書館或博物館），不撒謊，不說臟話；，幫助別人；坐車時(shí)請讓座給老人，殘疾人，尤其抱小孩的婦女；，做到紅燈停，綠燈行；。 要求：，字跡工整：可圍繞主題適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；、校名、地名成其他真實(shí)信息；As a member of the city, I think we should______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’m sure our city will bee more and more beautiful and cleaner as long as we all try our best to do something for it!【答案】As a member of the city, I think we should respect our parents at home, and help them with the housework. While we are travelling, we should pay attention to our own behavior, such as waiting for a bus in line. We should never spit or litter everywhere. What’s more, we can’t smoke or talk aloud in public, such as in the library or the museum. During our daily lives, we ought to be honest, never tell lies or say bad words because it’s rude to others. Also we should be polite and helpful to others. When we are on the bus, we can give our seats to the old and the disabled, especially the women with babies in their arms. And we should obey the traffic rules. Remember to stop when the traffic light is red and walk when the traffic light is green. Don39。t forget to protect our environment. Though we are young, we can still do something to help. I’m sure our city will bee more and more beautiful and cleaner as long as we all try our best to do something for it!【解析】【詳解】本文就具體的話題給出一定的范圍。所以用得特別多的句式是we should| ought to do sth ……。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示，至少包括五個(gè)點(diǎn)：we should respect our parents at home。While we are travelling, we should pay attention to our own behavior。We should never spit or litter everywhere。we ought to be honest, never tell lies or say bad words。及we should be polite and helpful to others等。Don39。t forget to protect our environment補(bǔ)充作者個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)。最后用I’m sure our city will bee more and more beautiful and cleaner as long as we all try our best to do something for it!總結(jié)全文，表達(dá)每個(gè)人都出一份力，我們的城市會越來越美。文中針對現(xiàn)象提出想法，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，且用第一人稱陳述。【點(diǎn)睛】10．（天津中考模擬） 作為中學(xué)生該怎么度過自己的閑暇時(shí)光？你會推薦什么樣的放松方式？理由是什么？請根據(jù)以下表格中的信息寫一篇文章。觀點(diǎn)理由一部分同學(xué)喜歡網(wǎng)絡(luò)和電視1. 放松,信息量大…………另一部分同學(xué)喜歡親近家人、自然和讀書1. 與家人相處更加和睦2. 增長見識，開闊視野你的思考……（不少于一點(diǎn)）參考詞匯：增長見識 increase one’s knowledge 開闊視野 open one’s mind要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80～100個(gè)。（2）短文的題目和開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。（3）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。Our society is developing fast. People are getting busier too. As a result, people try to relax in their free time. We students have different ideas of spending our free time._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Our society is developing fast People are getting busier too. As a result, people try to relax in their free time. We students have different ideas of spending our free time.Some classmates like surfing on the Internet and watching TV. They think they can get plenty of information through the Internet and make them relaxed. Besides,it is easy for them to municate and play with classmates and even strangers without going outside. Others think they should get close to their family,nature,and read a lot. In fact,they are not only good ways to get along better with family members,but also open up their mind and increase their knowledge.I think we should do sports after school in order to