【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore,punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.So I suggest that you take your friends39。 advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl；let herhave more friends and social activities；and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，對(duì)學(xué)生家長(zhǎng)的博客進(jìn)行回復(fù)。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：My idea is that……，There are……，Some allA students in school have…….，The reason is……，So I suggest that……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭表明自己的看法，接下來(lái)陳述自己的理由，最后介紹自己的建議。此處turn out , by no means, help sb do sth, grow up, let sb do sth, make mistakes, of one’s own等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。8．（安徽中考模擬）近來(lái)，美國(guó)總統(tǒng)特朗普的外孫女由于說(shuō)一口流利的中文而成為“網(wǎng)紅”。你的美國(guó)朋友Sam 看過(guò)相關(guān)報(bào)道之后也很想學(xué)好中文,但是不知道該怎樣做。假如你是大明，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示寫(xiě)一封郵件給他,提一些關(guān)于如何學(xué)好漢語(yǔ)的建議。要點(diǎn)提示 :,做好筆記。,與同學(xué)們用中文交流。、報(bào)紙等,在網(wǎng)上看一些中文語(yǔ)言類節(jié)目。注意 :。,以使行文連貫。,不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。Dear Sam ,I39。m happy to hear from you. I know you want to learn Chinese well. Here are some suggestions._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________In a word,if you have good ways of learning Chinese ,you will learn it well.YoursDaming【答案】Dear Sam,I39。m happy to hear from know you want to learn Chinese are some suggestions.First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class. Second, it39。s a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese. And don39。t be afraid of making mistakes. Third, you39。d better read Chinese magazines or newspapers after class. You can also watch Chinese programmes on the Internet. I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation. Lastly, you can write s to me or other Chinese friends in Chinese.In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well.Yours,Daming【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以大明的身份給Sam寫(xiě)一封信，告訴他如何學(xué)好漢語(yǔ)，題目中從四個(gè)方面提出了建議。通過(guò)審題可知，這是要求寫(xiě)一封建議信，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以下幾個(gè)方面：首先應(yīng)和Sam先做一個(gè)交流，然后引出寫(xiě)信的目的；接下來(lái)給出具體的建議，依據(jù)題目中給出的這四條，用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)，還應(yīng)注意補(bǔ)充一些內(nèi)容，使文章更加充實(shí)；最后寫(xiě)一個(gè)適當(dāng)?shù)慕Y(jié)尾，如希望建議對(duì)你有幫助等。文章應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，根據(jù)表達(dá)需要使用恰當(dāng)?shù)娜朔Q。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)的不同，不能按照漢語(yǔ)的思維逐詞翻譯，寫(xiě)漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)。應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，寫(xiě)完整的句子。如可以較常見(jiàn)的主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)為主，簡(jiǎn)單句的句型可以使文章敘述清楚、簡(jiǎn)潔。為提升文章檔次，可以穿插使用并列句或復(fù)合句以及其他一些復(fù)雜句式。語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文章意思連貫，表達(dá)流暢?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求給Sam寫(xiě)了一封信，對(duì)他的漢語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)提出了一些好的建議。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包括了題目中要求的所有信息。文章主要分成三個(gè)部分：第一段是與Sam之間的問(wèn)候以及引出Sam學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)這一話題，并介紹寫(xiě)信的目的；第二段中是提出的具體的建議，這是這篇文章的主體，所在篇幅最大。這一段中使用了First，Second，Third，lastly等詞，敘述條理、有層次；最后一段用一句話對(duì)整篇文章做了總結(jié)。其次短文使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，句式結(jié)構(gòu)符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。語(yǔ)法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確，用詞得體。文章中的語(yǔ)句以簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句，調(diào)整了文章的結(jié)構(gòu)。文章中使用了較為豐富的短語(yǔ)和句型，如First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class.、Second, it39。s a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese、I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation、In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it 。9．（江蘇中考模擬）今年初《流浪地球》在中國(guó)火熱上映。影片故事設(shè)定在2075年，講述太陽(yáng)即將毀火，已經(jīng)不適合人類生存，而面對(duì)絕境，人類將開(kāi)啟“流浪地球”計(jì)劃，試圖帶著地球一起逃離太陽(yáng)系，尋找人類新家園的故事。影片多次提到“希望”。比如，老師問(wèn):希望是什么?班長(zhǎng)回答:希望是我們這個(gè)年代鉆石一樣的東西。你的筆友Demon觀看后，印象深刻，給你寫(xiě)了一封郵件。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容結(jié)合你的情況，用英語(yǔ)回復(fù)。To: LiHua@China. From: Demon@ America. Subject:Problems and hopeDear Li Hua, How are you? I hope you are well. I have watched a movie called Wandering Earth. I am deeply moved by those Chinese people who never give up. You Chinese are really brave and full of wisdom. As my Chinese pen pal, what will you do when you meet difficulty? Would you please tell me the following things?What problems do you often meet in your school life?How do you usually solve your problems?Who has influenced you most in your life and what do you think of him/her?What do you think about hope? Please write back and tell me everything.Best wishes,Demon注意：，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順。、校名等相關(guān)信息。Dear DemonI39。m glad that you like the film. Indeed, I have learned a lot from it as Please write to me and tell me your view.Yours,LiHua【答案】Dear Demon，I39。m glad that you like the film. Indeed, I have learned a lot from it as well. In school, I also encounter some problems, the biggest problem is how to strike a balance between study and life. Whenever I want to play and don39。t want to study, I will think of the Chinese people who never give up in the film wandering Earth, who will inspire me to study hard.In life, my English teacher has the greatest influence on me. Whenever I have a great need, my English teacher always es to help me. She is the person who helps me the most in my junior high school life at the beginning of three years. . I like her very much and thank her even more.I think hope is the driving force of all, as long as there is hope, there will be motivation, it is possible to succeed. What do you think?Please write to me and tell me your view.Yours,LiHua【解析】【詳解】這是一篇書(shū)信作文。根據(jù)所給出的材料內(nèi)容可知文章時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要用第一、第三人稱。首先要注意書(shū)信的書(shū)寫(xiě)格式，要對(duì)來(lái)信中的問(wèn)題作出全面的答復(fù)。同時(shí)在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。【點(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；同時(shí)注意語(yǔ)句要通順，詞匯書(shū)寫(xiě)無(wú)誤，不要出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。10．（廣東中考模擬）近來(lái)，野生動(dòng)物園發(fā)生了老虎傷人的事件。我們作為游客應(yīng)該如何避免受到野生動(dòng)物的傷害呢？請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示寫(xiě)一篇短文。提示：1. 遵守動(dòng)物園的各項(xiàng)規(guī)定；2. 參觀時(shí)不要單獨(dú)行動(dòng)；3. 時(shí)刻提醒自己安全第一；4. 遇到危險(xiǎn)及時(shí)求助。要求：（開(kāi)頭己給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2. 文章必須包含所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名；4. 條理清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范。It is reported that tigers hurt people in a zoo. As visitors, what should we do to avoid the hurt? Here are some tips.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________