【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore,punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.So I suggest that you take your friends39。 advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl；let herhave more friends and social activities；and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，對學生家長的博客進行回復。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構主要為系表結(jié)構和動賓結(jié)構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：My idea is that……，There are……，Some allA students in school have…….，The reason is……，So I suggest that……等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系。點睛：本文結(jié)構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭表明自己的看法，接下來陳述自己的理由，最后介紹自己的建議。此處turn out , by no means, help sb do sth, grow up, let sb do sth, make mistakes, of one’s own等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。8．（安徽中考模擬）近來，美國總統(tǒng)特朗普的外孫女由于說一口流利的中文而成為“網(wǎng)紅”。你的美國朋友Sam 看過相關報道之后也很想學好中文,但是不知道該怎樣做。假如你是大明，請你根據(jù)以下提示寫一封郵件給他,提一些關于如何學好漢語的建議。要點提示 :,做好筆記。,與同學們用中文交流。、報紙等,在網(wǎng)上看一些中文語言類節(jié)目。注意 :。,以使行文連貫。,不計人總詞數(shù)。Dear Sam ,I39。m happy to hear from you. I know you want to learn Chinese well. Here are some suggestions._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________In a word,if you have good ways of learning Chinese ,you will learn it well.YoursDaming【答案】Dear Sam,I39。m happy to hear from know you want to learn Chinese are some suggestions.First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class. Second, it39。s a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese. And don39。t be afraid of making mistakes. Third, you39。d better read Chinese magazines or newspapers after class. You can also watch Chinese programmes on the Internet. I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation. Lastly, you can write s to me or other Chinese friends in Chinese.In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well.Yours,Daming【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以大明的身份給Sam寫一封信，告訴他如何學好漢語，題目中從四個方面提出了建議。通過審題可知，這是要求寫一封建議信，內(nèi)容應包括以下幾個方面：首先應和Sam先做一個交流，然后引出寫信的目的；接下來給出具體的建議，依據(jù)題目中給出的這四條，用正確的英語表達出來，還應注意補充一些內(nèi)容，使文章更加充實；最后寫一個適當?shù)慕Y(jié)尾，如希望建議對你有幫助等。文章應使用一般現(xiàn)在時，根據(jù)表達需要使用恰當?shù)娜朔Q。寫作時應注意英語表達習慣和漢語的不同，不能按照漢語的思維逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語。應從句子的整體結(jié)構考慮，寫完整的句子。如可以較常見的主謂賓結(jié)構或主系表結(jié)構為主，簡單句的句型可以使文章敘述清楚、簡潔。為提升文章檔次，可以穿插使用并列句或復合句以及其他一些復雜句式。語句之間使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分，使文章意思連貫，表達流暢?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求給Sam寫了一封信，對他的漢語學習提出了一些好的建議。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包括了題目中要求的所有信息。文章主要分成三個部分：第一段是與Sam之間的問候以及引出Sam學習漢語這一話題，并介紹寫信的目的；第二段中是提出的具體的建議，這是這篇文章的主體，所在篇幅最大。這一段中使用了First，Second，Third，lastly等詞，敘述條理、有層次；最后一段用一句話對整篇文章做了總結(jié)。其次短文使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，句式結(jié)構符合英語的表達習慣。語法規(guī)范、準確，用詞得體。文章中的語句以簡單句結(jié)構為主，也使用了并列句和復合句，調(diào)整了文章的結(jié)構。文章中使用了較為豐富的短語和句型，如First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class.、Second, it39。s a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese、I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation、In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it 。9．（江蘇中考模擬）今年初《流浪地球》在中國火熱上映。影片故事設定在2075年，講述太陽即將毀火，已經(jīng)不適合人類生存，而面對絕境，人類將開啟“流浪地球”計劃，試圖帶著地球一起逃離太陽系，尋找人類新家園的故事。影片多次提到“希望”。比如，老師問:希望是什么?班長回答:希望是我們這個年代鉆石一樣的東西。你的筆友Demon觀看后，印象深刻，給你寫了一封郵件。請你根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容結(jié)合你的情況，用英語回復。To: LiHua@China. From: Demon@ America. Subject:Problems and hopeDear Li Hua, How are you? I hope you are well. I have watched a movie called Wandering Earth. I am deeply moved by those Chinese people who never give up. You Chinese are really brave and full of wisdom. As my Chinese pen pal, what will you do when you meet difficulty? Would you please tell me the following things?What problems do you often meet in your school life?How do you usually solve your problems?Who has influenced you most in your life and what do you think of him/her?What do you think about hope? Please write back and tell me everything.Best wishes,Demon注意：，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。，可適當發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順。、校名等相關信息。Dear DemonI39。m glad that you like the film. Indeed, I have learned a lot from it as Please write to me and tell me your view.Yours,LiHua【答案】Dear Demon，I39。m glad that you like the film. Indeed, I have learned a lot from it as well. In school, I also encounter some problems, the biggest problem is how to strike a balance between study and life. Whenever I want to play and don39。t want to study, I will think of the Chinese people who never give up in the film wandering Earth, who will inspire me to study hard.In life, my English teacher has the greatest influence on me. Whenever I have a great need, my English teacher always es to help me. She is the person who helps me the most in my junior high school life at the beginning of three years. . I like her very much and thank her even more.I think hope is the driving force of all, as long as there is hope, there will be motivation, it is possible to succeed. What do you think?Please write to me and tell me your view.Yours,LiHua【解析】【詳解】這是一篇書信作文。根據(jù)所給出的材料內(nèi)容可知文章時態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要用第一、第三人稱。首先要注意書信的書寫格式，要對來信中的問題作出全面的答復。同時在寫作時，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點分明，中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應該符合語法的結(jié)構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩?！军c睛】首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當運用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；同時注意語句要通順，詞匯書寫無誤，不要出現(xiàn)語法錯誤。最后要細心復核檢查，確保正確無誤。10．（廣東中考模擬）近來，野生動物園發(fā)生了老虎傷人的事件。我們作為游客應該如何避免受到野生動物的傷害呢？請根據(jù)下列提示寫一篇短文。提示：1. 遵守動物園的各項規(guī)定；2. 參觀時不要單獨行動；3. 時刻提醒自己安全第一；4. 遇到危險及時求助。要求：（開頭己給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；2. 文章必須包含所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當發(fā)揮；3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和校名；4. 條理清楚，語句通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范。It is reported that tigers hurt people in a zoo. As visitors, what should we do to avoid the hurt? Here are some tips.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________