【英語(yǔ)】九年級(jí)上冊(cè)英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)技巧小結(jié)及練習(xí)題及解析(編輯修改稿)
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【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 m, acient提示問(wèn)題： ● What did you do during the activity of Telling Chinese idioms story?● What did you learn from the activity?● What do you think of it?【答案】The activity of “Telling Chinese idioms story” was held in our school last week.In order to take part in this activity, I collected lots of Chinese idiom stories in advance. Many students, including me, actively shared the Chinese idiom stories in the activity. After each story, the teacher explained the meaning of idioms and how to use it correctly. We learned a lot from our teacher. I did lots of reading in the process of preparation. My reading ability has improved greatly. What’s more, I realized the richness of Chinese acient culture. I really had a good time on the activity.【解析】【詳解】：這是一篇提綱類書面表達(dá)，只給了一些要點(diǎn)提示，但都不很明確。學(xué)生除了要把所給要點(diǎn)提示都表達(dá)出來(lái)外，還要進(jìn)行適當(dāng)拓展，使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)。：例文采用三段式；用第一人稱來(lái)敘述講成語(yǔ)故事活動(dòng)；因?yàn)榛顒?dòng)已經(jīng)舉辦，所以時(shí)態(tài)采用一般過(guò)去時(shí)；對(duì)參加活動(dòng)的過(guò)程描寫完整且條理清晰。：短語(yǔ)：in order to，take part in，lots of，learn from，in the process of，What’s more，have a good time。句型：被動(dòng)句型。6．2019年2月20日，中央宣傳部授予北京榜樣優(yōu)秀群體“時(shí)代楷?！狈Q號(hào)。時(shí)代楷模充分體現(xiàn)“愛國(guó)、敬業(yè)、誠(chéng)信、友善”的價(jià)值準(zhǔn)則。某網(wǎng)站正在開展以“向時(shí)代楷模學(xué)習(xí)”為主題的英語(yǔ)征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勆钪心阍撛趺醋觯约斑@樣做的意義。提示詞語(yǔ)：pick up, rubbish, study, honest, important提示問(wèn)題：● What should you do in your daily life? ● Why do you do so? As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models. 【答案】例文As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models. First, we can protect the environment. For example, we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on. Second, we shall respect people around us. Respect others to start from small things. Third, behave well. We should be kind to others, warmhearted to everyone, and generous to our friends. By doing so, our world will bee more and more beautiful.【解析】【詳解】題干解讀：該題目屬于應(yīng)用文寫作，但寫作時(shí)要按照應(yīng)用文格式寫，寫作時(shí)承接短文開頭，具體寫出怎樣做以及這樣做的意義。例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采用的是一段式，人稱用的是第一人稱復(fù)數(shù)形式，時(shí)態(tài)主要用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描述具體怎么做時(shí)，描寫細(xì)致，條理清晰。高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：protect the environment；pick up the rubbish；behave well；be kind to sb；more and more beautiful。句型：By doing so, our world will bee more and more beautiful；we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on。7．俗話說(shuō)，國(guó)有國(guó)法，家有家規(guī)。家規(guī)是中華民族傳統(tǒng)文化的重要組成部分。我們的國(guó)家主席習(xí)近平多次強(qiáng)調(diào)良好家風(fēng)家規(guī)的重要性。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下表格內(nèi)的要點(diǎn)提示，并結(jié)合你的家庭實(shí)際情況，給你的英國(guó)筆友Sam寫一封信，向他介紹一下你的家規(guī)，并向他展示一個(gè)溫情智慧的中國(guó)家庭。要點(diǎn)提示：三條家規(guī)尊老愛幼，禮貌待人誠(chéng)實(shí)守信，不斷學(xué)習(xí)按時(shí)作息，杜絕熬夜你對(duì)你家家規(guī)的看法......簡(jiǎn)單闡述你是如何受益的......寫作要求:，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使行文流暢、通順；；。文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Sam,Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of our Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.There are many rules that we have to follow.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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