【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 …提示語(yǔ)：develop one’s interests。 get more knowledge。 improve one’s life skills。 a wasteof time。 cause a lot of stress要求：1. 短文應(yīng)包括表格中的信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名；3. 詞數(shù)80左右。開(kāi)頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Recently some schools offer their students some interest classes or special classes such as cooking classes, handcraft classes, traditional opera classes and so on.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thank you!【答案】Recently some schools offer their students some interest classes or special classes such as cooking classes, handcraft classes, traditional opera classes and so on.Is it necessary to offer these classes? We had a discussion in our class. Some students think it’s really necessary to do it. First, it’s good for students to develop their interests. And interests can make them get more knowledge. Second, these classes are helpful for them to improve their life skills. These skills are useful for young students.However, others have different opinions. They don’t think it’s so necessary. They think it’s a waste of time and it’s not helpful for their study. And these activities can cause a lot of stress for children.In my opinion, it’s a good idea to offer these classes. They are not only good for our study but also for our growing.Thank you!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文，并且已給出了內(nèi)容提示，所以我們?cè)趯?xiě)作時(shí)要圍繞所給內(nèi)容提示展開(kāi)。 根據(jù)作文要求，可以確定文章的時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。 在表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)時(shí)通常會(huì)用到例如：I think, in one’s opinion 等引出觀點(diǎn)的詞語(yǔ)。另外，可以用到first, second, third, finally 等一一列出觀點(diǎn)，使文章更有條理，次序。【點(diǎn)睛】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的作文。首先內(nèi)容完整，第一段擺出事實(shí)，第二段說(shuō)明別人的的觀點(diǎn)，最后說(shuō)出自己的觀點(diǎn)，在表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)時(shí)有條理有次序。 短文中使用了一些很好的詞及短語(yǔ)，例如such as，and so on，However等使句子更有連貫性，及好的句型表達(dá)，例如：Second, these classes are helpful for them to improve their life skills. They think it’s a waste of time and it’s not helpful for their study等。8．（山東中考模擬）寫(xiě)作現(xiàn)在全世界都在倡導(dǎo)“低碳生活（lowcarbon life）”，即：降低二氧化碳的排放，采取低能量、低消耗、低開(kāi)支的生活方式。低碳生活對(duì)我們大家都有好處，請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇短文向一家英文報(bào)社投稿。內(nèi)容包括：你的具體做法、你的感受以及建議。提示詞語(yǔ)：be good for,everyone,ride a bike,think,make a difference,environment,suggest,reuse_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Lowcarbon life is good for help with the environment,I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a ,I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the think it39。s my duty to live a lowcarbon even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the I suggest we should reuse books as long as we39。d better not spend much money on expensiveclothes.If everyone does something for the environment,I believe the earth will be a better place【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，針對(duì)“低碳生活”你的做法、感受以及建議。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如be good for, help with, instead of, besides, make a difference, as long as possible, had better do, it is my duty to。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。【點(diǎn)睛】寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫(xiě)好書(shū)面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料。通常書(shū)面表達(dá)給出的話題是開(kāi)放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀觥⒚鞔_的關(guān)鍵。初寫(xiě)短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作了，在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。9．（湖北初三） 童年是人生最美好的時(shí)光。小時(shí)候你一定接收了許多心愛(ài)的禮物，你最喜歡的禮物是什么？你擁有它多長(zhǎng)時(shí)間了？它是誰(shuí)送給你的？它有什么特別的意思？它給你帶來(lái)了怎樣的回憶？請(qǐng)你以“My favorite gift”為題寫(xiě)一篇80至100詞的英語(yǔ)短文。要求：行文連貫、條理清楚、語(yǔ)句通順、語(yǔ)法正確、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；依據(jù)提示可適度發(fā)揮，文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名。My favorite giftMy favorite gift from childhood is ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My favorite giftMy favorite thing from childhood is a toy bear. I have had it for ten years. My mother gave it to me on my fifth birthday. I like it very much because it is so cute. It39。s special to me because I used to play with it almost every day until I was ten years old. I thought it was one of my best friends.The toy bear has left me so many memories. I remember when I was six years old, I would never go to bed without it. Now, I don39。t want to give it up, but to be honest, I have to. Because I39。m getting older!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下你的心愛(ài)禮物。主要從：你最喜歡的禮物是什么？你擁有它多長(zhǎng)時(shí)間了？它是誰(shuí)送給你的？它有什么特別的意思？它給你帶來(lái)了怎樣的回憶？這幾個(gè)方面去介紹。時(shí)態(tài)為一般過(guò)去在時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，避免使用漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語(yǔ)。語(yǔ)法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縄t39。s special to me because I used to play with it almost every day until I was ten years old. 這對(duì)我來(lái)說(shuō)很特別，因?yàn)槲規(guī)缀趺刻於荚谕?，直到十歲。句子because I used to play with it almost every day是由because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句?！靖叻志湫投縄 remember when I was six years old, I would never go to bed without it. 我記得當(dāng)我六歲的時(shí)候，沒(méi)有它我永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)去睡覺(jué)。句子when I was six years old是由when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句。10．（安徽中考模擬）近來(lái)，美國(guó)總統(tǒng)特朗普的外孫女由于說(shuō)一口流利的中文而成為“網(wǎng)紅”。你的美國(guó)朋友Sam 看過(guò)相關(guān)報(bào)道之后也很想學(xué)好中文,但是不知道該怎樣做。假如你是大明，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示寫(xiě)一封郵件給他,提一些關(guān)于如何學(xué)好漢語(yǔ)的建議。要點(diǎn)提示 :,做好筆記。,與同學(xué)們用中文交流。、報(bào)紙等,在網(wǎng)上看一些中文語(yǔ)言類節(jié)目。注意 :。,以使行文連貫。,不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。Dear Sam ,I39。m happy to hear from you. I know you want to learn Chinese well. Here are some suggestions.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________