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上班4道路狹窄(narrow).4街道寬闊(wide),干凈整潔5居住條件(livingconditions)差5生活越來(lái)越好,環(huán)境(environment)越來(lái)越舒適.6你的感想…(寫兩到三句)Changes in Our HometownIn the past ten years,great changes have taken place in our hometown. 【答案】Changes in Our HometownIn the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past, there used to be old houses. The river was very dirty. The roads were narrow and the living conditions were terrible. People were not rich. They went to work on foot or by bike. But now, there are many tall buildings in our hometown. We can see the clean river and the clear water . Even we can see fish in the water. There are many wide and clean roads. Our life is better and better The environment around us is more and more fortable. People usually go to work by bus or by car.I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. But I think it’s still important to remember the past. It tells that we should cherish the present life.【解析】【詳解】亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明:這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰,內(nèi)容飽滿,表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ),例如take place,in our hometown,in the past,used to be,go to do,on foot,by bike,better and better,more and more等。而I think it39。s still important to remember the past/It tells that we should cherish the present ,豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容,使表達(dá)多樣,是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)?!军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維,考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn),要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式,盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。6.書面表達(dá)假如你是李明,你的英國(guó)筆友Jack來(lái)信詢問(wèn)你的家鄉(xiāng)是否有霧霾天氣,情況如何。請(qǐng)你按照以下提示給他回一封。內(nèi)容如下:1. 由于大氣污染程度十分嚴(yán)重,去年已發(fā)生數(shù)次霧霾天氣;2. 人們已經(jīng)意識(shí)到霧霾天氣的危害,正在采取各種措施減少其發(fā)生;3. 你在日常生活中打算為此做些什么。參考詞匯:霧霾haze注意:1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱;2. 語(yǔ)言通順,句子連貫,條理清楚,書寫規(guī)范;3. 詞數(shù)80左右,信件的開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Jack,I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,Li Ming【答案】Dear Jack,I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze.The hazy weather has occurred a lot of times in my hometown since last year. It was bad for our daily life. More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze. A great number of people have to stay at home .People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway.As for me, I will go to school by bike or on foot. In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment. Woul