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在比較的時(shí)候,作者用了多種方式,使句子不單調(diào),比如在比較溫度時(shí),直接用比較級(jí)“higher”在說旅館時(shí)用了“l(fā)ess fortable ”,比較食物時(shí),用了“as…as”等。雖然字?jǐn)?shù)要求不多,但可以很好地考查考生英語(yǔ)寫作的基本功,需要考生對(duì)常用的英語(yǔ)句型熟練掌握。目的是宣傳和弘揚(yáng)中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化。例文點(diǎn)評(píng):例文采用的是一段式,寫的是閱讀的好處,時(shí)態(tài)采用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),描述倡議時(shí),描寫細(xì)致,條理清晰。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系。句子結(jié)構(gòu)以簡(jiǎn)單句為主,也使用了一些并列句和復(fù)合句,長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合,使文章富有節(jié)奏。因此文章應(yīng)主要分成三段,一個(gè)內(nèi)容一段。所以,考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn),要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式,盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。【點(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練文中運(yùn)用了一些好的句型:We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this 。用的短語(yǔ)、句型:both kinds of、If we choose a boarding school、At the same time、As for me, I prefer a boarding school、pay attention to、來(lái)增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)。第一段要寫總體交代你即將升入高中,面臨寄宿(a boarding school)和走讀(a day school)兩類學(xué)校的選擇。所以,考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn),要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式,盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。s best to do sth.)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表所提示的內(nèi)容,用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文,并發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)。根據(jù)題干要求可知,本篇文章主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)寫作,人稱用第三人稱復(fù)數(shù)和第一人稱。而Thank you for attending our robot show./ I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. / I think in the future people will live a more fortable life with the help of new ,豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容,使表達(dá)多樣化,是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。100詞左右(文章開頭結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù));2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息;3. 文章必須包含提示中的所有信息,并按要求適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。并運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)木湫秃瓦^渡詞銜接。The Changes in ClassThanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in 【答案】 The Changes in ClassThanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in class. I like the class like think it is very interesting and lively. We can tell stories, play games and listen to music.I think it is open and free. We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this class. The changes in Class are good for us.【解析】【詳解】假如你是李華,你們學(xué)校正在進(jìn)行課堂教學(xué)改革,經(jīng)過一段時(shí)間的適應(yīng),同學(xué)們發(fā)現(xiàn)現(xiàn)在的課堂跟以前比較發(fā)生了一些變化,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所給提示以“The Changes in Class”為題目,用英語(yǔ)寫一篇100詞左右的文章,談?wù)勀愕母惺芎拖敕ǎ_頭和結(jié)尾已給出(不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。s still important to remember the past/It tells that we should cherish the present ,豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容,使表達(dá)多樣,是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。Dear Jack,I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,Li Ming【答案】Dear Jack,I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze.The hazy weather has occurred a lot of times in my hometown since last year. It was bad for our daily life. More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze. A great number of people have to stay at home .People all over the country are taking