【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 long talk with，on the one/other hand，enough to do，connect with，care about，want you to be better，both …and，be able to，ask for help等。而并列結(jié)構(gòu)Communicate more with you parents, and ask your teacher for help if necessary!和You should let them know that you’re serious about learning art and you’re clever enough to plan the future for yourself./ So this is the best chance for you to achieve your dream, though it’s just the very beginning to enter an art school./ If you fail, both your dream and your parents’ wish won’t be able to be ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。8．（陜西中考模擬） 下周一下午輪到你在英語課上做課堂報(bào)告, 你打算把你爸爸最近網(wǎng)購的音樂機(jī)器人（music robot）介紹給同學(xué)們。下圖是關(guān)于這個(gè)音樂機(jī)器人的廣告, 請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所提供的信息寫一份發(fā)言稿。我是能聽會(huì)說的小音樂機(jī)器人,只要你對(duì)我說歌曲的名字, 我就能唱給你聽。我還有其他本領(lǐng)……參考詞匯:small, clever, ask it about weather, problems in study, remind you of important dates, convenient要求:1. 參考提示, 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 語句涌順, 意思連貫, 書寫工整；3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)個(gè)人真實(shí)信息；Good morning, everyone! Here, I’d like to introduce the music robot my father bought online. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Good morning, everyone! Here, I39。d like to introduce the music robot my father bought online. It is small, so you can even carry it in your backpack. After you connect it to the Internet and speak to it, it can provide different kinds of services. For example, you just say, Ding Dong, I want to listen to SHE39。s songs ,and it will play their songs immediately. You can also ask it about weather or even your problems in study. Besides, it can remind you of important dates and so on.I am so amazed at my music robot because it makes my life more enjoyable and convenient. I really love it!【解析】【分析】這篇書面表達(dá)主要描述爸爸最近給“我”買的音樂機(jī)器人?！驹斀狻窟@是篇材料作文。內(nèi)容上首先要介紹這個(gè)音樂機(jī)器人，其次表達(dá)為什么“我”要介紹這個(gè)機(jī)器人，也就是對(duì)它的喜愛。在寫作時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，這樣才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體。9．（湖南中考模擬）書面表達(dá)假如你是李華，馬上將要中學(xué)畢業(yè)，一路上肯定有很多人幫助或者鼓勵(lì)過你。某英文雜志社正向九年級(jí)畢業(yè)生征文，請(qǐng)用英語寫一篇題為“Thank you, My ________”的短文，將你對(duì)你的父母、老師、朋友或同學(xué)的感謝表達(dá)出來。要求：（1）將標(biāo)題補(bǔ)充完整，80詞左右；（2） 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；（3） 文章中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校名和地名。Thank you, My_______________【答案】Thank you, my teacher! I39。d like to say thanks to my English teacher, Miss Wang, because she39。s helped me a lot. Once, I failed my English exam. When she found I was very worried, she encouraged me to study harder and promised to help me. After that, I turned to her for help every time I had questions. She was always patient to make me understand every single question. With her help, I39。ve had enough courage to face difficulties and made much progress in English.Thank you, my dear teacher! The love and support from you will be with me forever.【解析】【分析】這是一篇話題作文，以“Thank you, My teacher ”為題，寫一篇短文，感謝我的老師?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I39。d like to……，When she found……，She was always patient to……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡(jiǎn)練。開頭介紹了我要感謝我的老師王小姐，接下來介紹她對(duì)我的幫助，最后表示從老師那里得到的愛和支持將永遠(yuǎn)和我在一起。此處would like to, encourage sb to do sth, promise to do sth, turn to sb for help, make progress等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。10．（山東中考模擬）書面表達(dá)今天早上你目睹了一起事件（下圖），你想以Mother Stops Him為題寫一篇短文，向你校英語報(bào)社投稿。短文內(nèi)容如下：1. 描述亊件。2. 發(fā)表你的想法。要求：，以使行文連貫。 、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。3. 100個(gè)詞匯左右。參考詞匯：lift…up扶起， knock…down撞倒，trust信任Mother Stops Him_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】This morning, my mother took me to school. On the way, I saw a car knock an old man down and the car ran away. The old woman fell to the ground and could not move. I saw this situation and immediately went over to help the old man lift up, but my mother stopped me saying, Don39。t lift him up, or he 39。ll say you hit him. But I think helping others is what we should do. That old woman will certainly appreciate me, so I trust that as long as everyone gives a little love, the world will bee a better place.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇看圖作文，所給材料較為詳細(xì)，邏輯清楚，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。根據(jù)要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容可知短語主要應(yīng)用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)，主要是第一人稱，句型以簡(jiǎn)單句為主。寫作時(shí)要靈活運(yùn)用，注意主謂一致，單詞拼寫正確?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文在寫作中使用了很多固定句式，如：The old woman fell to the ground and could not move. I saw this situation and immediately went over to help the old man lift up。所以在學(xué)習(xí)中，我們應(yīng)注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.11．（四川中考模擬）書面表達(dá)。你向往的高中生活即將開始，你將面對(duì)新的學(xué)習(xí)和生活環(huán)境，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示，以“I Expect My Senior High School Life”為題，用英語寫一篇短文environmentclassroom, dining hall, library,…studylearning goals, learning ways,…activitiesduring school time, in the free time,…relationshipclassmates, teachers,…other expectations…要求：，進(jìn)行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。語言通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范，注意句子之間的銜接。、地名及能夠透露你個(gè)人身份的信息。詞數(shù)：90110 詞左右。I Expect My Senior High School Life 【答案】I Expect My Senior High School LifeI hope my senior high school is beautiful with many trees and flowers. And I hope there are many classrooms and a library where I can read. I expect there is a dinning room in my new school .I will go there to eat some nice and healthy food with my new hope there is a big playground because I like doing some sports ,such as playing basketball,playing expect my school life is colorful ,and I can get on well with my classmates and my teachers,and we will make progress on our study .I will discuss learning goals and ways with my school,I hope to do afterclass activities in the free time. I hope these will e ture.【解析】這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如senior high school，go to do，like doing，do some sports，such as，play basketball，play tennis，get on wel