【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達具有條理性?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縒hen children find themselves under surveillance, how can they confide in us in the future? 當(dāng)孩子們發(fā)現(xiàn)自己受到監(jiān)視時，他們將來怎么能向我們吐露心聲呢？句子When children find themselves under surveillance是由when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句?！靖叻志湫投縄t will also affect the future selfconfidence building, which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parentchild relationship. 這也會影響未來的自信心建設(shè)，也會導(dǎo)致更多的擔(dān)憂兒童，形成影響親子關(guān)系的惡性循環(huán)。which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parentchild 。7．（陜西師大附中中考模擬）書面表達每個人都有自己的夢想和理想，為了理想而努力可以成就一個人的事業(yè)。請根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，以“My Dream”為題，寫一篇英文短文，向同學(xué)們介紹一下自己的夢想。要求：，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮2. 語句通順，意思連貫， 書寫工整3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實（姓名、校名和地名等）；4. 詞數(shù)：不少于70詞。（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。）My DreamEverybody has his dream. My dream is to be____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My DreamEverybody has his dream. My dream is to be a writer when I grow really like writing becauseit is amazing to share my thoughts and feelings with others. To realize my dream,I’m going to study Chinese hard. It’s very important for am going to read a are so many great writers that I can always learn a lot from their ’s more,I plan to keep on writing so that I can improve my writing through practice.All in all,I know it is not easy to realize my dream but I will try my best and never give up.【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇話題作文。請根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，以“My Dream”為題，寫一篇英文短文，向同學(xué)們介紹一下自己的夢想。文章時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要為第一人稱。動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫作時，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點分明，中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤?！军c睛】點睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當(dāng)運用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標(biāo)點符號誤用等，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。8．（安徽中考模擬）書面表達某英文雜志社正面向九年級畢業(yè)生征文，請從以下要點中選擇一至兩個方面，并結(jié)合具體事例，用英語寫一篇題為Thank you，my teacher!的短文參加此次活動．要點如下：（1）嚴(yán)格要求（2）耐心指導(dǎo)（3）熱情鼓勵；注意：（1）詞數(shù)80～100；（2）可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫（3）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名及學(xué)校名稱．（4）…注意：（1）詞數(shù)80100；（2）可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫（3）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名及學(xué)校名稱【答案】Thank you，my teacher!Leaving youlovely junior school life，I have som any words from my heart to say．I still remember that you became our English teacher three years ago．You always work hard and treat us well．You are strict with us in studyand also take care of us kindly．It is easy and interesting for us to learn English well because your class is very interesting and lively．（嚴(yán)格要求）【高分句型一】During my school life，we can get along well with each other．When I failed in an exam，you encouraged me to keep trying．【高分句型一】When I had trouble in life，you told me to be brave．（耐心指導(dǎo)）Because of your help and encouragement，many students，including me，are more and more interested in English and make much progress，too．You have given me so much．（熱情鼓勵）Thank you again for what you39。ve done for us!All the best to you!（表示感謝）【解析】【分析】本文是一篇抒情記敘文。【詳解】英語作文一般分為三個部分第一部分：開篇點題，交代寫作目的——感謝老師為我做的一切。第二部分：交代感謝英語老師的原因老師是一個認(rèn)真工作的人。老師對我嚴(yán)格要求。在我考試失利時鼓勵我。第三部分：再次點題，對老師表示由衷的謝意。高分句型一：It is easy and interesting for us to learn English well because your class is very interesting and lively．因為你的課非常生動有趣，對我們來說學(xué)好英語很簡單有趣．句中because your class is very interesting and lively為原因狀語從句，主句為itis+形容詞+for sb to do sth對某人來說做某事…結(jié)構(gòu)．高分句型二：When I failed in an exam，you encouraged me to keep trying．當(dāng)我考試失敗的時候，你鼓勵我不斷努力．句中When I failed in an exam為條件狀語從句，主句you encouraged me to keep trying中有短語encourage sb to do sth鼓勵某人做某事、keep doing sth一直做某事．提綱類作文的要點都給了出來，在寫作的時候需要使用合適的連接詞把這些要點連接成一個整體．同時注意使用高級詞匯和句式讓文章更有亮點．9．（安徽中考模擬）書面表達某英文報社組織了題為“我喜歡的英語諺語”征文活動，你有意參加。請從下面兩句諺語中任選一句作為標(biāo)題寫一篇英語作文，內(nèi)容須包括：1. 該諺語的含義；2. 體現(xiàn)該諺語含義的個人經(jīng)歷。a） A friend in need is a friend indeed.b） Where there’s a will, there’s a way.參考詞匯：諺語 proverb____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】A Friend in Need is a Friend IndeedA life without friends is a life without sunshine! Friends try their best to help you without thinking of what they can get from it.Once I doubted the usefulness of study, losing my interests and direction, even confidence. Finally, I decided to stop studying. After knowing the news, my friend encouraged me patiently. She insisted on persuading me until I promised to give up this thought.Later, I made up my mind to study hard so as to enter my dream university.Many people will be in and out of your life, but only true friends will leave footprints in your hear. True friends always e to you when you need help.【解析】【分析】這是命題作文。二選一，第一個是“患難見真情”，第二個是“有志者事競成”。【詳解】標(biāo)題都是以諺語的形式出現(xiàn)，所以考生第一步做的是理解這兩個言語的意思，選擇自己較有把握的。在選擇標(biāo)題之后，根據(jù)所給內(nèi)容提示，進行寫作。寫作時，先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，這樣才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體10．（寧夏銀川二中中考模擬）假設(shè)你是李華。上周末你和同班同學(xué)去綠色農(nóng)場郊游,大家玩的很開心。請你通過將此活動過程告知你的好友Tom，并簡要談?wù)勀愕母惺?。要點如下：The trip to the Green FarmWhen4月22日早上8:00出發(fā)。下午5:00返回。Where學(xué)校大門口集合。綠色農(nóng)場效游。How乘坐校車。What野炊、摘西紅柿，放風(fēng)箏等（至少提及三項活動）?！璖afety tips不要到河里游泳；不要單獨行動……:參考詞匯：get close to the nature（親近大自然）寫作要求：詞數(shù)60－80；（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出）文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的校名或人名；所給的要點必須都用上；緊扣主題，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。Dear Tom,How’s it going? Last weekend, I went to_______________ Yours, Li Hua【答案】Dear TomHow’s it going?Last weekend ,I went to the Green Farm for a trip with my set off at 8:00 in the morning on 22nd came back at 5:00 in the met at the school went there by school bus . We had a piic,picked tomatoes,flied kites and so teacher told us not to swim in the river and do anything had a chance to get close to the had a good trip.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖表，要求介紹自己上周末和同班同學(xué)去綠色農(nóng)場郊游,大