【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 致問(wèn)題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縒hen children find themselves under surveillance, how can they confide in us in the future? 當(dāng)孩子們發(fā)現(xiàn)自己受到監(jiān)視時(shí)，他們將來(lái)怎么能向我們吐露心聲呢？句子When children find themselves under surveillance是由when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句。【高分句型二】It will also affect the future selfconfidence building, which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parentchild relationship. 這也會(huì)影響未來(lái)的自信心建設(shè)，也會(huì)導(dǎo)致更多的擔(dān)憂兒童，形成影響親子關(guān)系的惡性循環(huán)。which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parentchild 。7．（陜西師大附中中考模擬）書面表達(dá)每個(gè)人都有自己的夢(mèng)想和理想，為了理想而努力可以成就一個(gè)人的事業(yè)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，以“My Dream”為題，寫一篇英文短文，向同學(xué)們介紹一下自己的夢(mèng)想。要求：，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮2. 語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫， 書寫工整3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)（姓名、校名和地名等）；4. 詞數(shù)：不少于70詞。（開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。）My DreamEverybody has his dream. My dream is to be____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My DreamEverybody has his dream. My dream is to be a writer when I grow really like writing becauseit is amazing to share my thoughts and feelings with others. To realize my dream,I’m going to study Chinese hard. It’s very important for am going to read a are so many great writers that I can always learn a lot from their ’s more,I plan to keep on writing so that I can improve my writing through practice.All in all,I know it is not easy to realize my dream but I will try my best and never give up.【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇話題作文。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，以“My Dream”為題，寫一篇英文短文，向同學(xué)們介紹一下自己的夢(mèng)想。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要為第一人稱。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫作時(shí)，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤?！军c(diǎn)睛】點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作，在寫作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。8．（安徽中考模擬）書面表達(dá)某英文雜志社正面向九年級(jí)畢業(yè)生征文，請(qǐng)從以下要點(diǎn)中選擇一至兩個(gè)方面，并結(jié)合具體事例，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇題為Thank you，my teacher!的短文參加此次活動(dòng)．要點(diǎn)如下：（1）嚴(yán)格要求（2）耐心指導(dǎo)（3）熱情鼓勵(lì)；注意：（1）詞數(shù)80～100；（2）可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫（3）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及學(xué)校名稱．（4）…注意：（1）詞數(shù)80100；（2）可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫（3）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及學(xué)校名稱【答案】Thank you，my teacher!Leaving youlovely junior school life，I have som any words from my heart to say．I still remember that you became our English teacher three years ago．You always work hard and treat us well．You are strict with us in studyand also take care of us kindly．It is easy and interesting for us to learn English well because your class is very interesting and lively．（嚴(yán)格要求）【高分句型一】During my school life，we can get along well with each other．When I failed in an exam，you encouraged me to keep trying．【高分句型一】When I had trouble in life，you told me to be brave．（耐心指導(dǎo)）Because of your help and encouragement，many students，including me，are more and more interested in English and make much progress，too．You have given me so much．（熱情鼓勵(lì)）Thank you again for what you39。ve done for us!All the best to you!（表示感謝）【解析】【分析】本文是一篇抒情記敘文?！驹斀狻坑⒄Z(yǔ)作文一般分為三個(gè)部分第一部分：開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題，交代寫作目的——感謝老師為我做的一切。第二部分：交代感謝英語(yǔ)老師的原因老師是一個(gè)認(rèn)真工作的人。老師對(duì)我嚴(yán)格要求。在我考試失利時(shí)鼓勵(lì)我。第三部分：再次點(diǎn)題，對(duì)老師表示由衷的謝意。高分句型一：It is easy and interesting for us to learn English well because your class is very interesting and lively．因?yàn)槟愕恼n非常生動(dòng)有趣，對(duì)我們來(lái)說(shuō)學(xué)好英語(yǔ)很簡(jiǎn)單有趣．句中because your class is very interesting and lively為原因狀語(yǔ)從句，主句為itis+形容詞+for sb to do sth對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)做某事…結(jié)構(gòu)．高分句型二：When I failed in an exam，you encouraged me to keep trying．當(dāng)我考試失敗的時(shí)候，你鼓勵(lì)我不斷努力．句中When I failed in an exam為條件狀語(yǔ)從句，主句you encouraged me to keep trying中有短語(yǔ)encourage sb to do sth鼓勵(lì)某人做某事、keep doing sth一直做某事．提綱類作文的要點(diǎn)都給了出來(lái)，在寫作的時(shí)候需要使用合適的連接詞把這些要點(diǎn)連接成一個(gè)整體．同時(shí)注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式讓文章更有亮點(diǎn)．9．（安徽中考模擬）書面表達(dá)某英文報(bào)社組織了題為“我喜歡的英語(yǔ)諺語(yǔ)”征文活動(dòng)，你有意參加。請(qǐng)從下面兩句諺語(yǔ)中任選一句作為標(biāo)題寫一篇英語(yǔ)作文，內(nèi)容須包括：1. 該諺語(yǔ)的含義；2. 體現(xiàn)該諺語(yǔ)含義的個(gè)人經(jīng)歷。a） A friend in need is a friend indeed.b） Where there’s a will, there’s a way.參考詞匯：諺語(yǔ) proverb____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】A Friend in Need is a Friend IndeedA life without friends is a life without sunshine! Friends try their best to help you without thinking of what they can get from it.Once I doubted the usefulness of study, losing my interests and direction, even confidence. Finally, I decided to stop studying. After knowing the news, my friend encouraged me patiently. She insisted on persuading me until I promised to give up this thought.Later, I made up my mind to study hard so as to enter my dream university.Many people will be in and out of your life, but only true friends will leave footprints in your hear. True friends always e to you when you need help.【解析】【分析】這是命題作文。二選一，第一個(gè)是“患難見(jiàn)真情”，第二個(gè)是“有志者事競(jìng)成”。【詳解】標(biāo)題都是以諺語(yǔ)的形式出現(xiàn)，所以考生第一步做的是理解這兩個(gè)言語(yǔ)的意思，選擇自己較有把握的。在選擇標(biāo)題之后，根據(jù)所給內(nèi)容提示，進(jìn)行寫作。寫作時(shí)，先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，這樣才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體10．（寧夏銀川二中中考模擬）假設(shè)你是李華。上周末你和同班同學(xué)去綠色農(nóng)場(chǎng)郊游,大家玩的很開(kāi)心。請(qǐng)你通過(guò)將此活動(dòng)過(guò)程告知你的好友Tom，并簡(jiǎn)要談?wù)勀愕母惺?。要點(diǎn)如下：The trip to the Green FarmWhen4月22日早上8:00出發(fā)。下午5:00返回。Where學(xué)校大門口集合。綠色農(nóng)場(chǎng)效游。How乘坐校車。What野炊、摘西紅柿，放風(fēng)箏等（至少提及三項(xiàng)活動(dòng)）。……Safety tips不要到河里游泳；不要單獨(dú)行動(dòng)……:參考詞匯：get close to the nature（親近大自然）寫作要求：詞數(shù)60－80；（開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出）文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名或人名；所給的要點(diǎn)必須都用上；緊扣主題，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。Dear Tom,How’s it going? Last weekend, I went to_______________ Yours, Li Hua【答案】Dear TomHow’s it going?Last weekend ,I went to the Green Farm for a trip with my set off at 8:00 in the morning on 22nd came back at 5:00 in the met at the school went there by school bus . We had a piic,picked tomatoes,flied kites and so teacher told us not to swim in the river and do anything had a chance to get close to the had a good trip.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖表，要求介紹自己上周末和同班同學(xué)去綠色農(nóng)場(chǎng)郊游,大