【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My opinions about school bullyingSchool bullying is a big problem that has got more and more attention in society. Being bullied can make students feel scared or upset. Some students are afraid of going to school. School bullying can even lead to more serious mental health problems. So how should we stop school bullying?If I see somebody being bullied or I am bullied, I will tell the teachers or my parents at once. It is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my own.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，談?wù)勀銓π@欺凌的看法。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如make sb do, be afraid of, lead to, mental health problem, at once, on one’s own, it is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my own中it作形式主語以及“比較級and比較級”。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。【點(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。8．（武漢外國語學(xué)校中考模擬）書面表達(dá)長跑是人們熱衷的體育活動之一。武漢馬拉松（Wuhan Marathon）因獨(dú)具特色的賽道及賽事組織已成為一年一度的全程盛事。假如你是李華，你的筆友Tom想知道關(guān)于武漢馬拉松的一些事情。請用英文給他回一封電子郵件，介紹這項(xiàng)賽事。內(nèi)容包括以下要點(diǎn)：；，人們可以強(qiáng)身健體，還可以結(jié)識新朋友；，吸引了很多人的關(guān)注；,如：中山大道、東湖綠道、黃鶴樓，被視為最美的馬拉松賽道；。注意：；，郵件的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總次數(shù)；，不要逐條翻譯參考詞匯： event track Greenway Hi Tom，I hope you39。re doing well. In your , you asked me someting about Wuhan Marathon. Here is the information.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Li Hua【答案】Hi Tom，I hope you39。re doing well. In your , you asked me something about Wuhan Marathon. Here is the information. Marathon is a very popular international sport. Through the marathon, people can keep fit and make new friends. The first Wuhan marathon was held in and attracted a lot of attention. The players will pass by many famous scenic spots in Wuhan, such as Zhongshan Avenue, Donghu green road and Yellow Crane Tower, which are regarded as the most beautiful marathon course.I think the people in Wuhan likes the of them want to take part in it.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以李華的身份給自己的筆友Tom寫一封電子郵件，給他介紹關(guān)于武漢馬拉松的一些事情。題目中給我們列出了具體的寫作內(nèi)容，我們可以按照這些提示來組織語言，并增加一些內(nèi)容，使文章更加充實(shí)。其中第五條需要學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力，補(bǔ)充一到兩點(diǎn)的個(gè)人想法，這一部分是不受限制的，學(xué)生們可以自由發(fā)揮，但需要注意內(nèi)容需要與全文大意連貫起來。通過審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主，根據(jù)表達(dá)需要靈活運(yùn)用，并使用適當(dāng)?shù)娜朔Q，注意謂語動詞的正確形式。寫作時(shí)需注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯題目中的內(nèi)容，應(yīng)從句式的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語和句型。在文章中還應(yīng)使用一、兩個(gè)高級句型或復(fù)雜句式，提升文章檔次。語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、表達(dá)流暢。【點(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求給Tom寫電子郵件，介紹了關(guān)于武漢馬拉松的事情。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有信息，并對信息進(jìn)行加工、處理和補(bǔ)充，使文意更加清楚、連貫。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，文章以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主，個(gè)別句子使用了過去時(shí)態(tài)，謂語動詞形式準(zhǔn)確，語法規(guī)范。文章句式以簡單句為主，表達(dá)簡潔、明了，穿插使用了復(fù)雜句式，如賓語從句、定語從句等。調(diào)整文章節(jié)奏，提升了文章檔次。文章中使用了一些較好的短語和句型，如Through the marathon, people can keep fit and make new friends. 、The first Wuhan marathon was held in and attracted a lot of attention. 、The players will pass by many famous scenic spots in Wuhan, such as Zhongshan Avenue, Donghu green road and Yellow Crane Tower, which are regarded as the most beautiful marathon course.、I think the people in Wuhan likes the 。9．（湖北初三） 童年是人生最美好的時(shí)光。小時(shí)候你一定接收了許多心愛的禮物，你最喜歡的禮物是什么？你擁有它多長時(shí)間了？它是誰送給你的？它有什么特別的意思？它給你帶來了怎樣的回憶？請你以“My favorite gift”為題寫一篇80至100詞的英語短文。要求：行文連貫、條理清楚、語句通順、語法正確、書寫規(guī)范；依據(jù)提示可適度發(fā)揮，文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名。My favorite giftMy favorite gift from childhood is ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My favorite giftMy favorite thing from childhood is a toy bear. I have had it for ten years. My mother gave it to me on my fifth birthday. I like it very much because it is so cute. It39。s special to me because I used to play with it almost every day until I was ten years old. I thought it was one of my best friends.The toy bear has left me so many memories. I remember when I was six years old, I would never go to bed without it. Now, I don39。t want to give it up, but to be honest, I have to. Because I39。m getting older!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下你的心愛禮物。主要從：你最喜歡的禮物是什么？你擁有它多長時(shí)間了？它是誰送給你的？它有什么特別的意思？它給你帶來了怎樣的回憶？這幾個(gè)方面去介紹。時(shí)態(tài)為一般過去在時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時(shí)，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縄t39。s special to me because I used to play with it almost every day until I was ten years old. 這對我來說很特別，因?yàn)槲規(guī)缀趺刻於荚谕妫钡绞畾q。句子because I used to play with it almost every day是由because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句?！靖叻志湫投縄 remember when I was six years old, I would never go to bed without it. 我記得當(dāng)我六歲的時(shí)候，沒有它我永遠(yuǎn)不會去睡覺。句子when I was six years old是由when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句。10．（安徽中考模擬）書面表達(dá)共享單車為我們的生活帶來了極大的便利。假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)九年級學(xué)生李華，你的美國朋友Jim在給你的郵件中提到他對中國最新出現(xiàn)的一種共享單車“mobike”很感興趣，并請你做個(gè)簡要介紹。請你給Jim回信，內(nèi)容包括：1. 這種單車的使用方法（如：APP查看車輛、掃碼開鎖等）；2. 這種單車的優(yōu)勢；3. 你對這種單車的看法。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：智能手機(jī)smartphone；掃碼scan the QR code；交通工具a means of transportation。Dear Jim,I’m siting to tell you more about the new form of sharing bike