【文章內容簡介】 ver forget my English teacherIn my junior school life, many people have helped me. The person I want to thank most is My English teacherMs Lee.Ms Lee is kind and outgoing. She often helps me with my English. When I am in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties. With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it.I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset, she cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it.I’m very thankful for all that she has done for me.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，談談你最難忘的人。根據(jù)要表達的內容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內容。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如help sb with, be in trouble, encourage sb to do, with one’s help, make great progress, bee interested in, once以及cheer up。增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達的關鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。構思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關的寫作材料。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內容要求學生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關鍵。初寫短文。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。9．（廣東南方求實教育集團中考模擬） 《朗讀者》、《中國詩詞大會》等文化類節(jié)目喚醒了中國人的閱讀情結。為了激發(fā)市民們的閱讀興趣,廣州開展了“書香羊城”活動。 請根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英語短文,談談你對閱讀的看法,并對如何培養(yǎng)閱讀習慣和開展班級閱讀活動提出建議。閱讀的好處 閱讀使人睿智補充12個看法 培養(yǎng)閱讀習慣每天至少閱讀20分鐘補充12個建議開展班級閱讀活動觀看《朗讀者》,分享節(jié)目推薦的好作品。補充12個建議注意::《朗讀者》（Readers）: 作品: works （n.）:（文章的開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)）:、姓名等任何個人信息,否則不予評分.The activity of “Reading in Guangzhou “has been held in Guangzhou for quite a while.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】The activity of “Reading in Guangzhou” has been held in Guangzhou for quite a while. Reading makes us wise . It can not only help us learn more about the world but also bring us happiness. Keeping reading every day is a good habit. We should spend at least twenty minutes in reading after class. What’s more, try to make notes for good points while reading. We can also hold some reading activities in our class. For example, watch some good programs such as Readers and then share some good books introduced by the readers. Also, a book corner can be set up in our classroom so that we can read at any time after class.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文，內容包括提示內容以及談談自己對閱讀的看法，并對培養(yǎng)閱讀習慣和開展班級閱讀活動方面提出建議，人稱為第一人稱，時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時，同時注意恰當使用連詞使文章邏輯關系更為緊密。高分句型：1. It can not only help us learn more about the world but also bring us happiness. 它不僅能幫助我們更多地了解這個世界，而且能帶給我們幸福。not only …but also… 不但……而且……，并列連詞短語。2. Keeping reading every day is a good habit. 每天堅持閱讀是一個好習慣。Keeping reading every day動名詞短語作主語。3. Also, a book corner can be set up in our classroom so that we can read at any time after ，我們的教室里還可以設置一個讀書角，以便課后隨時閱讀。此句是一個復合句，主句是含有情態(tài)動詞的被動語態(tài)，so that引導的是目的狀語從句。10．（湖南中考模擬）書面表達假如你校英語社團即將舉辦為“My hobby” 的征文活動， 請你根據(jù)下面的提示問題寫一篇短文介紹你的愛好，然后參加此活動。提示問題：1. What’s your hobby?2. Why do you like it?3. When did you start it?4. How do you benefit from（得益于） it?要求：1. 緊扣主題，語言表達要準確，語意要通順、連貫；2. 不少于80詞。My hobby 【答案】My? HobbyI have many hobbies, such as singing, listening to music, reading and so on. But my favorite hobby is swimming. Because I think it is cool and relaxing. In summer days, it39。s always very hot. We can’t do any sports but swim. So I often go swimming with my friends in my hot summer. I began to learn swimming when I was eight years old. And now I am a good swimmer. Last year I got the first prize in a swimming petition. And I hope I can swim in the sea one day.【解析】【詳解】本篇作文按照要求可分為4塊兒內容，首先指出我的愛好是什么But my favorite hobby is swimming.，接著說明為什么喜歡這個愛好Because I think it is cool and relaxing....., 然后I began to learn swimming when I was eight years ，最后Last year I got the first prize in a swimming petition. And I hope I can swim in the sea one . 中間用到短語such as…,以及連詞because…., when….and…等，使文章表達清晰，也具有連貫性，時態(tài)運用正確，是一篇不錯的文章。11．（安徽中考模擬）書面表達你看過中央電視臺董卿主持的節(jié)目《朗讀者》嗎？這是一檔非常受歡迎的節(jié)目，讓我們看到生活中讀書的美好、讀書的重要。請根據(jù)下面表格中所列的要點，以“Growing Up with Reading”為題寫一篇短文。要求：1．語言表達準確，短文連貫、通順；2．短文應包括所有內容，可適當發(fā)揮，不要逐句翻譯；3．詞數(shù)80詞左右；文章開頭部分已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)?！敬鸢浮縃ave you watched the program The Reader hosted by Dong Qing on CCTV? The program is very popular, and it makes us find the beauty and the importance about reading in our life.Reading is wonderful. We can get knowledge by reading. Reading can open our minds. Reading makes us confident and happy.Read good books. Proper books that can improve ourselves are better choice. You should read in a right way. Try to think about more while reading.Keep a love for reading. However, some of us spend much time watching TV or playing games online in our spare time. I’d like to suggest that everyone should read more and develop a reading habit.Let’s grow up with reading. Let reading bee a part of our life!【解析】試題分析：本文是材料作文，也是話題作文，話題是“讀書伴我成長”，以“Growing Up with Reading（讀書伴我成長）”為題寫一篇短文。根據(jù)內容提示可知本文使用的時態(tài)有一般現(xiàn)在時。寫作時，列好提綱，注意使用連詞，句型、句式，使文章整體意思連貫，表達流暢。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無拼寫，語法錯誤（時態(tài)，主謂一致等）。（一）列提綱，本文給詞的要點就是提綱，把要點中的重要短語翻譯成英文：the beauty and the importance/ get knowledge/ open our minds/ makes us confident and happy/ proper books that can improve ourselves/ read in a right way/ think about more/ spend much time watching TV or play