【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 ver forget my English teacherIn my junior school life, many people have helped me. The person I want to thank most is My English teacherMs Lee.Ms Lee is kind and outgoing. She often helps me with my English. When I am in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties. With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it.I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset, she cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it.I’m very thankful for all that she has done for me.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，談?wù)勀阕铍y忘的人。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如help sb with, be in trouble, encourage sb to do, with one’s help, make great progress, bee interested in, once以及cheer up。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫(xiě)好書(shū)面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料。通常書(shū)面表達(dá)給出的話題是開(kāi)放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫(xiě)短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作了，在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。9．（廣東南方求實(shí)教育集團(tuán)中考模擬） 《朗讀者》、《中國(guó)詩(shī)詞大會(huì)》等文化類節(jié)目喚醒了中國(guó)人的閱讀情結(jié)。為了激發(fā)市民們的閱讀興趣,廣州開(kāi)展了“書(shū)香羊城”活動(dòng)。 請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文,談?wù)勀銓?duì)閱讀的看法,并對(duì)如何培養(yǎng)閱讀習(xí)慣和開(kāi)展班級(jí)閱讀活動(dòng)提出建議。閱讀的好處 閱讀使人睿智補(bǔ)充12個(gè)看法 培養(yǎng)閱讀習(xí)慣每天至少閱讀20分鐘補(bǔ)充12個(gè)建議開(kāi)展班級(jí)閱讀活動(dòng)觀看《朗讀者》,分享節(jié)目推薦的好作品。補(bǔ)充12個(gè)建議注意::《朗讀者》（Readers）: 作品: works （n.）:（文章的開(kāi)頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）:、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息,否則不予評(píng)分.The activity of “Reading in Guangzhou “has been held in Guangzhou for quite a while.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】The activity of “Reading in Guangzhou” has been held in Guangzhou for quite a while. Reading makes us wise . It can not only help us learn more about the world but also bring us happiness. Keeping reading every day is a good habit. We should spend at least twenty minutes in reading after class. What’s more, try to make notes for good points while reading. We can also hold some reading activities in our class. For example, watch some good programs such as Readers and then share some good books introduced by the readers. Also, a book corner can be set up in our classroom so that we can read at any time after class.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文，內(nèi)容包括提示內(nèi)容以及談?wù)勛约簩?duì)閱讀的看法，并對(duì)培養(yǎng)閱讀習(xí)慣和開(kāi)展班級(jí)閱讀活動(dòng)方面提出建議，人稱為第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，同時(shí)注意恰當(dāng)使用連詞使文章邏輯關(guān)系更為緊密。高分句型：1. It can not only help us learn more about the world but also bring us happiness. 它不僅能幫助我們更多地了解這個(gè)世界，而且能帶給我們幸福。not only …but also… 不但……而且……，并列連詞短語(yǔ)。2. Keeping reading every day is a good habit. 每天堅(jiān)持閱讀是一個(gè)好習(xí)慣。Keeping reading every day動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)作主語(yǔ)。3. Also, a book corner can be set up in our classroom so that we can read at any time after ，我們的教室里還可以設(shè)置一個(gè)讀書(shū)角，以便課后隨時(shí)閱讀。此句是一個(gè)復(fù)合句，主句是含有情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，so that引導(dǎo)的是目的狀語(yǔ)從句。10．（湖南中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)假如你校英語(yǔ)社團(tuán)即將舉辦為“My hobby” 的征文活動(dòng)， 請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的提示問(wèn)題寫(xiě)一篇短文介紹你的愛(ài)好，然后參加此活動(dòng)。提示問(wèn)題：1. What’s your hobby?2. Why do you like it?3. When did you start it?4. How do you benefit from（得益于） it?要求：1. 緊扣主題，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)要準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)意要通順、連貫；2. 不少于80詞。My hobby 【答案】My? HobbyI have many hobbies, such as singing, listening to music, reading and so on. But my favorite hobby is swimming. Because I think it is cool and relaxing. In summer days, it39。s always very hot. We can’t do any sports but swim. So I often go swimming with my friends in my hot summer. I began to learn swimming when I was eight years old. And now I am a good swimmer. Last year I got the first prize in a swimming petition. And I hope I can swim in the sea one day.【解析】【詳解】本篇作文按照要求可分為4塊兒內(nèi)容，首先指出我的愛(ài)好是什么But my favorite hobby is swimming.，接著說(shuō)明為什么喜歡這個(gè)愛(ài)好Because I think it is cool and relaxing....., 然后I began to learn swimming when I was eight years ，最后Last year I got the first prize in a swimming petition. And I hope I can swim in the sea one . 中間用到短語(yǔ)such as…,以及連詞because…., when….and…等，使文章表達(dá)清晰，也具有連貫性，時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。11．（安徽中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)你看過(guò)中央電視臺(tái)董卿主持的節(jié)目《朗讀者》嗎？這是一檔非常受歡迎的節(jié)目，讓我們看到生活中讀書(shū)的美好、讀書(shū)的重要。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格中所列的要點(diǎn)，以“Growing Up with Reading”為題寫(xiě)一篇短文。要求：1．語(yǔ)言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，短文連貫、通順；2．短文應(yīng)包括所有內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要逐句翻譯；3．詞數(shù)80詞左右；文章開(kāi)頭部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)?！敬鸢浮縃ave you watched the program The Reader hosted by Dong Qing on CCTV? The program is very popular, and it makes us find the beauty and the importance about reading in our life.Reading is wonderful. We can get knowledge by reading. Reading can open our minds. Reading makes us confident and happy.Read good books. Proper books that can improve ourselves are better choice. You should read in a right way. Try to think about more while reading.Keep a love for reading. However, some of us spend much time watching TV or playing games online in our spare time. I’d like to suggest that everyone should read more and develop a reading habit.Let’s grow up with reading. Let reading bee a part of our life!【解析】試題分析：本文是材料作文，也是話題作文，話題是“讀書(shū)伴我成長(zhǎng)”，以“Growing Up with Reading（讀書(shū)伴我成長(zhǎng)）”為題寫(xiě)一篇短文。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文使用的時(shí)態(tài)有一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，列好提綱，注意使用連詞，句型、句式，使文章整體意思連貫，表達(dá)流暢。寫(xiě)完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)，語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤（時(shí)態(tài)，主謂一致等）。（一）列提綱，本文給詞的要點(diǎn)就是提綱，把要點(diǎn)中的重要短語(yǔ)翻譯成英文：the beauty and the importance/ get knowledge/ open our minds/ makes us confident and happy/ proper books that can improve ourselves/ read in a right way/ think about more/ spend much time watching TV or play