【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。9．（廣東中考模擬）假設你是來自中國的中學生李華,打算參加當?shù)亟M織的國外冬令營,看完了這個網(wǎng)頁后,你打算給Liz Payne留言,表達你在冬令營期間想去London Canal Museum參觀的愿望。內(nèi)容包括：；（包含冬令營的時間,聽Liz Payne的講座）；。作文要求：；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學校真實的名稱和學生的真實姓名；,詞數(shù)80個左右。作文的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,不計入總詞數(shù),也不必抄寫在答題卡上。Dear Liz Payne,I’m Li Hua,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Liz Payne,I’m Li Hua, a middle school student learning in Grade 3 in China. I’m writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter vacation. I hope to have a chance to visit London Canal Museum. From , I know you will have a report “An Update on the Cotswold Canals”February 6th, which will happen during the same period of our Winter Camp. And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn Canal. What’s more, I hope to learn more about London Canal Museum and even more about the UK.I’m looking forward to your reply!Yours,Li Hua【解析】這篇作文要求我們以中學生李華的身份，給Liz Payne寫一個留言。文章內(nèi)容主要包括三個部分：首先是介紹自己的身份；然后寫留言的目的，包括冬令營的時間、想要去參觀London Canal Museum以及聽Liz Payne的講座；最后簡單介紹一下你的預期的收獲。寫作時，應根據(jù)題目的這些要求，組織語言，串聯(lián)成一篇短文。通過分析可知，這篇短文應使用第一人稱I來敘述，時態(tài)應以一般將來時態(tài)和一般現(xiàn)在時為主。注意英語句子的表達和漢語習慣是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，而應從句子的整體考慮，使用正確的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以及適當?shù)脑~匯、短語和句型，保證句子的準確性和語言的地道。另外還應注意語句之間使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫。穿插一些高級詞匯和復雜句式，提升文章檔次和水平，使表達更加流暢。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目要求的所有信息，沒有遺漏要點。作者主要從三個方面敘述：首先介紹了自己的身份和寫留言的目的；接下來詳細介紹了自己參加這次冬令營的愿望；最后是一個簡單的結(jié)尾。如果分段敘述效果則會更好，那樣會使文章的層次更加清晰。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章以第一人稱、一般將來時和一般現(xiàn)在時為主，謂語動詞形式準發(fā)，語法規(guī)范，符合英語句子的表達習慣。短文以簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，也使用了一些復合句和較高級的句型，如I’m writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter ；From , I know you will have a report “An Update on the Cotswold Canals” February 6th, which will happen during the same period of our Winter ；And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn 。整篇文章語句通順、意思連貫、表達流暢。10．（江蘇泰州中學附屬初中中考模擬）請根據(jù)下表中的信息用英文介紹你的好友Lily。要求條理清楚，語句通順，可做適當發(fā)揮。詞數(shù)100字左右，文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。外貌 圓臉，笑瞇瞇的大眼睛；比我矮一點；帶著小圓眼鏡，讓她看上去很機靈。特點1. 禮貌的女孩，誠實；我信任她，真正的朋友，因為……。當我憂傷時，她總是關(guān)心我，而且仔細傾聽我的問題，……。2．有幽默感，擅長講滑稽的笑話；和她在一起，我很少感到……。3. 喜歡DIY，……3．愿意和別人分享東西，幫助人時總有耐心，長大后……。 I would like to tell you something about my close friend Lily.【答案】My good friendI would like to tell you something about my close friend Lily.She has a round face and big, smiling eyes. She is a little shorter than I. She often wears a pair of small round glasses, so she looks very smart.She is a polite and honest girl. I trust her because she never lies. She is my real friend. When I am sad, she always cares about me and listens to my problems carefully.She also has a good sense of humor and is good at telling funny jokes. I seldom get bored with her.She also likes DIY. She once personally made her mother a music box for her birthday. This made his mother very happy.She is willing to share things with others. She is always patient when helping others. She said“ she would like to be a volunteer to help more people when she grows up.“【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如a little，a pair of，trust sb.，care about，listen to，a good sense of humor，be good at，get bored，be willing to，share with，would like to do，grow up等。而She often wears a pair of small round glasses, so she looks very smart./ When I am sad, she always cares about me and listens to my problems carefully./ She said she would like to be a volunteer to help more people when she grows ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，是本文的亮點。在學習中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。【點睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。11．（陜西師大附中中考模擬）書面表達以“My Weekend Housework”為題，寫一篇短文，談一談上星期天你做過的家務活，并介紹你喜歡做的家務活和不喜歡做的家務活，并談談你做家務的感受。提示詞：make the bed, fold the clothes, take out the rubbish, do the dishes,...要求：1. 參考提示語，可適當發(fā)揮；，語意連貫，書寫工整；、校名等；，開頭給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。My Weekend HouseworkI was busy last ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My Weekend HouseworkI was busy last weekend. I did housework all the day. In the morning, I cooked breakfast. To be honest, I like cooking very much. Because cooking meals is very interesting. I can do what I want. After breakfast, I went to the store and bought some food for the family. I like doing the shopping. I think it’s fun. Then I swept the floor and took out the rubbish. I didn’t do the laundry and the dishes. I don’t like do any washing. In the afternoon, I cleaned my bedroom. I hate cleaning my room .It is boring and tiring. In the evening, I folded my clothes and made my bed. I think it was a busy weekend.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如all the day，in the morning，to be honest，like cooking，very much，after breakfast，go to the store，do the shopping，take out，do some washing，make my bed等。同時I can do what I want./ I think it’s fun./ I think it was a busy weekend等賓語從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，是本文的最大亮點。在學習中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。【點睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。12．（北京中考模擬）根據(jù)中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50詞的文段寫作。文中已給出內(nèi)容不計入總詞數(shù)。所給提示詞語僅供選用。請不要寫出你的校名和姓名。假如你是李華，你們學校準備組織學生本周五去中國科技博物館參觀。你打算邀請交換生Peter參加。請用英語寫一封郵件，告訴他集合的時間和地點，在那里可以做什么，以及參觀時需要準備什么。提示詞語: school gate, 8:00, invention, experiment, knowledge, notebook, food and drink提示問題:When and where are you going to meet? What are you going to do there? What do you advise Peter to prepare for the visit?Dear Peter,How is it going? I am writing to invite you to visit China Scienc