【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。9．（廣東中考模擬）假設(shè)你是來(lái)自中國(guó)的中學(xué)生李華,打算參加當(dāng)?shù)亟M織的國(guó)外冬令營(yíng),看完了這個(gè)網(wǎng)頁(yè)后,你打算給Liz Payne留言,表達(dá)你在冬令營(yíng)期間想去London Canal Museum參觀的愿望。內(nèi)容包括：；（包含冬令營(yíng)的時(shí)間,聽Liz Payne的講座）；。作文要求：；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實(shí)的名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名；,詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。作文的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù),也不必抄寫在答題卡上。Dear Liz Payne,I’m Li Hua,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Liz Payne,I’m Li Hua, a middle school student learning in Grade 3 in China. I’m writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter vacation. I hope to have a chance to visit London Canal Museum. From , I know you will have a report “An Update on the Cotswold Canals”February 6th, which will happen during the same period of our Winter Camp. And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn Canal. What’s more, I hope to learn more about London Canal Museum and even more about the UK.I’m looking forward to your reply!Yours,Li Hua【解析】這篇作文要求我們以中學(xué)生李華的身份，給Liz Payne寫一個(gè)留言。文章內(nèi)容主要包括三個(gè)部分：首先是介紹自己的身份；然后寫留言的目的，包括冬令營(yíng)的時(shí)間、想要去參觀London Canal Museum以及聽Liz Payne的講座；最后簡(jiǎn)單介紹一下你的預(yù)期的收獲。寫作時(shí)，應(yīng)根據(jù)題目的這些要求，組織語(yǔ)言，串聯(lián)成一篇短文。通過(guò)分析可知，這篇短文應(yīng)使用第一人稱I來(lái)敘述，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)以一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。注意英語(yǔ)句子的表達(dá)和漢語(yǔ)習(xí)慣是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，而應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮，使用正確的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以及適當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語(yǔ)和句型，保證句子的準(zhǔn)確性和語(yǔ)言的地道。另外還應(yīng)注意語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫。穿插一些高級(jí)詞匯和復(fù)雜句式，提升文章檔次和水平，使表達(dá)更加流暢。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目要求的所有信息，沒(méi)有遺漏要點(diǎn)。作者主要從三個(gè)方面敘述：首先介紹了自己的身份和寫留言的目的；接下來(lái)詳細(xì)介紹了自己參加這次冬令營(yíng)的愿望；最后是一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的結(jié)尾。如果分段敘述效果則會(huì)更好，那樣會(huì)使文章的層次更加清晰。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，文章以第一人稱、一般將來(lái)時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式準(zhǔn)發(fā)，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，符合英語(yǔ)句子的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。短文以簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，也使用了一些復(fù)合句和較高級(jí)的句型，如I’m writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter ；From , I know you will have a report “An Update on the Cotswold Canals” February 6th, which will happen during the same period of our Winter ；And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn 。整篇文章語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫、表達(dá)流暢。10．（江蘇泰州中學(xué)附屬初中中考模擬）請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表中的信息用英文介紹你的好友Lily。要求條理清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，可做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。詞數(shù)100字左右，文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。外貌 圓臉，笑瞇瞇的大眼睛；比我矮一點(diǎn)；帶著小圓眼鏡，讓她看上去很機(jī)靈。特點(diǎn)1. 禮貌的女孩，誠(chéng)實(shí)；我信任她，真正的朋友，因?yàn)椤?。?dāng)我憂傷時(shí)，她總是關(guān)心我，而且仔細(xì)傾聽我的問(wèn)題，……。2．有幽默感，擅長(zhǎng)講滑稽的笑話；和她在一起，我很少感到……。3. 喜歡DIY，……3．愿意和別人分享東西，幫助人時(shí)總有耐心，長(zhǎng)大后……。 I would like to tell you something about my close friend Lily.【答案】My good friendI would like to tell you something about my close friend Lily.She has a round face and big, smiling eyes. She is a little shorter than I. She often wears a pair of small round glasses, so she looks very smart.She is a polite and honest girl. I trust her because she never lies. She is my real friend. When I am sad, she always cares about me and listens to my problems carefully.She also has a good sense of humor and is good at telling funny jokes. I seldom get bored with her.She also likes DIY. She once personally made her mother a music box for her birthday. This made his mother very happy.She is willing to share things with others. She is always patient when helping others. She said“ she would like to be a volunteer to help more people when she grows up.“【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如a little，a pair of，trust sb.，care about，listen to，a good sense of humor，be good at，get bored，be willing to，share with，would like to do，grow up等。而She often wears a pair of small round glasses, so she looks very smart./ When I am sad, she always cares about me and listens to my problems carefully./ She said she would like to be a volunteer to help more people when she grows ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。11．（陜西師大附中中考模擬）書面表達(dá)以“My Weekend Housework”為題，寫一篇短文，談一談上星期天你做過(guò)的家務(wù)活，并介紹你喜歡做的家務(wù)活和不喜歡做的家務(wù)活，并談?wù)勀阕黾覄?wù)的感受。提示詞：make the bed, fold the clothes, take out the rubbish, do the dishes,...要求：1. 參考提示語(yǔ)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；，語(yǔ)意連貫，書寫工整；、校名等；，開頭給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。My Weekend HouseworkI was busy last ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My Weekend HouseworkI was busy last weekend. I did housework all the day. In the morning, I cooked breakfast. To be honest, I like cooking very much. Because cooking meals is very interesting. I can do what I want. After breakfast, I went to the store and bought some food for the family. I like doing the shopping. I think it’s fun. Then I swept the floor and took out the rubbish. I didn’t do the laundry and the dishes. I don’t like do any washing. In the afternoon, I cleaned my bedroom. I hate cleaning my room .It is boring and tiring. In the evening, I folded my clothes and made my bed. I think it was a busy weekend.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如all the day，in the morning，to be honest，like cooking，very much，after breakfast，go to the store，do the shopping，take out，do some washing，make my bed等。同時(shí)I can do what I want./ I think it’s fun./ I think it was a busy weekend等賓語(yǔ)從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。12．（北京中考模擬）根據(jù)中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50詞的文段寫作。文中已給出內(nèi)容不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。所給提示詞語(yǔ)僅供選用。請(qǐng)不要寫出你的校名和姓名。假如你是李華，你們學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備組織學(xué)生本周五去中國(guó)科技博物館參觀。你打算邀請(qǐng)交換生Peter參加。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一封郵件，告訴他集合的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)，在那里可以做什么，以及參觀時(shí)需要準(zhǔn)備什么。提示詞語(yǔ): school gate, 8:00, invention, experiment, knowledge, notebook, food and drink提示問(wèn)題:When and where are you going to meet? What are you going to do there? What do you advise Peter to prepare for the visit?Dear Peter,How is it going? I am writing to invite you to visit China Scienc