【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 ______ 【答案】I’ll never forget my English teacherIn my junior school life, many people have helped me. The person I want to thank most is My English teacherMs Lee.Ms Lee is kind and outgoing. She often helps me with my English. When I am in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties. With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it.I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset, she cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it.I’m very thankful for all that she has done for me.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，談?wù)勀阕铍y忘的人。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如help sb with, be in trouble, encourage sb to do, with one’s help, make great progress, bee interested in, once以及cheer up。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。8．（重慶中考模擬）假如你是李華，你校正舉辦英語(yǔ)讀書節(jié)活動(dòng),你在參與活動(dòng)的過程中遇到一些困難。請(qǐng)給你的英國(guó)朋友Nick寫一封向他求助。要求：—120 詞，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考要點(diǎn)：（時(shí)間、內(nèi)容……）。（如：缺少相關(guān)書籍、英語(yǔ)閱讀困難……）；。Dear Nick,How’s everything going?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Nick,How’s everything going?Our school is holding an English reading festival this June. I’m very interested in it. There are many different activation in the festival such as reading good English books. sharing good stories and so on. It’s a good chance for us to learn more about western cultures. However, I have some problems. First, I don’t have enough books. For example, I want to get some books about western history. Next, I’m not so good at English, I have trouble in reading. Would you please share some good books with me and give me some advice on reading?I expect to hear from you soon.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】這是一篇書信作文。假如你是李華，你校正舉辦英語(yǔ)讀書節(jié)活動(dòng),你在參與活動(dòng)的過程中遇到一些困難。請(qǐng)給你的英國(guó)朋友Nick寫一封向他求助。首先要注意書信的書寫格式，文章時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要為第一人稱。在寫作時(shí)，要注意理順要點(diǎn)，防止漏寫；注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查字?jǐn)?shù)是否符合要求。參考要點(diǎn)：（時(shí)間、內(nèi)容……）。（如：缺少相關(guān)書籍、英語(yǔ)閱讀困難……）；。9．（廣州市第十六中學(xué)中考模擬）書面表達(dá)初中就要畢業(yè)了，校報(bào)“英語(yǔ)角”欄目向同學(xué)們征集畢業(yè)晚會(huì)的計(jì)劃。假定你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)要點(diǎn) 寫一封信，說說你的計(jì)劃。活動(dòng)畢業(yè)晚會(huì)時(shí)間6月28日晚上七點(diǎn)地點(diǎn)學(xué)校禮堂school hall參與者全體初三學(xué)生和老師活動(dòng)內(nèi)容1.邀請(qǐng)校長(zhǎng)作演講；2.互贈(zèng)禮物送祝福；3.各班表演精彩節(jié)目4. 要求：，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使句子通順，連貫。 ，語(yǔ)法正確，書寫整潔。 ，開頭結(jié)尾己給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 。Dear editor,I am very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation party.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes,Yours Lihua【答案】Dear editor,I39。m very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation ceremony. The ceremony will be held in our school hall at 7 o’clock on June have planned three activities for it. First of all, we would like to invite our headmaster to make a speech and give us his best wishes for a bright future. After that, every one give each other gifts and blessings. And then each class will give a wonderful performance. In the end, some pictures will be shown to share the happy time we have had together.This is what we will do. I hope you will choose my plan.Best wishes,Yours,Li hua【解析】【分析】這篇書面表達(dá)主要是推薦自己的畢業(yè)晚會(huì)計(jì)劃?！驹斀狻窟@是一篇給材料作文，介紹畢業(yè)典禮活動(dòng)計(jì)劃。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。10．（湖北中考模擬）書面表達(dá)近年來，越來越多的中學(xué)將一些電子產(chǎn)品例如電腦、手機(jī)，甚至iPad 等引入了課堂。在提高教學(xué)質(zhì)量的同時(shí)也使得教育更加多樣化。但人們對(duì)此的看法褒貶不一。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下表格，在英語(yǔ)課上和同學(xué)談?wù)勀愕目捶?。要點(diǎn)：AgreeSave time, protect the environmentDisagreeToo expensive, easily to fall into the games。Your opinion…要求：，短文連貫通順； ，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。Nowadays, more and more electronic products are introduced into class．We can get our homework on the mobile phone and hand it in by 【答案】Nowadays, more and more electronic products are introduced into class．We can get our homework on the mobile phone and hand it in by save some people and protect the environment. Students can watch videos on the they are active in class.Some people think students shouldn’t use puters in are too is easy for students to fall into the games.I think students should use iPad in teachers don’t allow students to play games in is good for students to use iPad in class.【解析】【詳解】根據(jù)題意近年來，越來越多的中學(xué)將一些電子產(chǎn)品例如電腦、手機(jī)，甚至iPad 等引入了課堂。在提高教學(xué)質(zhì)量的同時(shí)也使得教育更加多樣化。但人們對(duì)此的看法褒貶不一。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下表格，在英語(yǔ)課上和同學(xué)談?wù)勀愕目捶?。我們所要做的首先是?yīng)用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。寫作前先結(jié)合要表達(dá)的事情確定句子的人稱時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語(yǔ)，可見該生英語(yǔ)功底扎實(shí)。如Some people think students shouldn’t use puters in are too is easy for students to fall into the games. The teachers don’t allow students to play games in ，使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。11．（北京中考模擬）（題文）假如你是李華，本周六與好友相約去北京植物園。你的美國(guó)網(wǎng)友Fred正好也在北京，你邀他同去。請(qǐng)你向他發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)，告訴他去哪兒，做什么以及你的建議。提示詞語(yǔ)：Beijing Botanical Garden, have a piic 提示問題：When and where are you going this Saturday? What will you do there? What do you advise him to do?【答案】I’m writing to invite you to join us this Saturday. This Saturday, I’m going to Beijing Botanic