【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 一篇圖表作文。根據(jù)題干要求可知，本篇文章主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)寫作，人稱用第三人稱復(fù)數(shù)和第一人稱。內(nèi)容包括：學(xué)生近視原因：（not enough）、做作業(yè)、用電腦等（for a long time）防止近視的方法：，多進(jìn)行體育活動(dòng)（eye exercises）（have the good habit of）個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)：如：我認(rèn)為，我們應(yīng)該了解保護(hù)眼睛的重要性，盡最大努力保護(hù)我們的眼睛。（I think ???；try one39。s best to do sth.）。常用的重點(diǎn)句型和短語(yǔ)有：sb. spend some time doing sth.，in order to do sth.，try to do sth.，the importance of…等。9．（廣州市天河中學(xué)中考模擬）書面表達(dá)請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，以My lowcarbon life為題寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，談?wù)勀愕摹暗吞忌睢?，以及你?duì)“低碳生活”的認(rèn)識(shí)。提示：1. 出行方式2. 不浪費(fèi)紙、水、電等3. 其他低碳生活的方式（補(bǔ)充一點(diǎn)）4. 低碳生活的作用注意：1．詞數(shù)80左右，開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2．回復(fù)須包括所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使全文連貫、通順；3．文中不得提及真實(shí)的人名等相關(guān)信息。My lowcarbon lifeLowcarbon life is a kind of lifestyle. It’s a habit to save all the sources of energy around us. It’s important to protect our environment. ________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My lowcarbon lifeLowcarbon life is a kind of lifestyle. It’s a habit to save all the sources of energy around us. It’s important to protect our environment. First, I always go to school on foot and tell my parents to walk to work instead of driving the car. Second, I save water and electricity by turning off the taps , fans。 TV sets and lights in time when I don39。t need them. What39。s more, water is reused by us in my family all the time. Third, I use the both sides of the paper. I think it is good to make full use of paper. By doing this, we can save many trees. At last, I would go shopping with basket rather than plastic bags. I believe our life will bee better and better if we can do these things. Lower carbon, happier life. Let39。s take actions.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，以My lowcarbon life為題寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，談?wù)勀愕摹暗吞忌睢保约澳銓?duì)“低碳生活”的認(rèn)識(shí)。本文時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。人稱主要為第一人稱。認(rèn)真閱讀所給提示要點(diǎn)，確定主題，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)列出提綱，所寫內(nèi)容必須包括所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無(wú)單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤（時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致等）。本文提綱：我的低碳生活低碳生活是一種生活方式。節(jié)約我們周圍所有的能源是一種習(xí)慣。保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境很重要。首先，我總是步行去上學(xué)，告訴父母步行去上班，而不要開(kāi)車。其次，當(dāng)我不需要的時(shí)候，我會(huì)及時(shí)關(guān)掉水龍頭、風(fēng)扇、電視機(jī)和電燈，以節(jié)約用水和用電。更重要的是，我們家里的水一直都在重復(fù)利用。第三，我使用紙張的兩面。我認(rèn)為充分利用紙張是件好事。通過(guò)這樣做，我們可以拯救許多樹(shù)木。最后，我會(huì)帶著籃子購(gòu)物而不使用塑料袋。我相信如果我們能做這些事情，我們的生活會(huì)越來(lái)越好。低碳，快樂(lè)生活。我們采取行動(dòng)吧?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。語(yǔ)言要規(guī)范，時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用要正確，敘述清楚條里，學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用。注意書寫的規(guī)范：大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等的正確運(yùn)用。注意檢查：?jiǎn)卧~拼寫、語(yǔ)法、動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)序、主謂一致等。寫作六步法：：文體，時(shí)態(tài)，人稱。：要點(diǎn)是否齊全，適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充。：通過(guò)增加狀語(yǔ)，定語(yǔ)，連詞，使句子意思飽滿充實(shí)。，合理使用連詞。：拼寫是否錯(cuò)誤，語(yǔ)法時(shí)態(tài)是否正確，連詞是否恰當(dāng)?shù)取＃鹤⒁鈺鴮懝ふ烙^整潔。10．（天津中考模擬） 作為中學(xué)生該怎么度過(guò)自己的閑暇時(shí)光？你會(huì)推薦什么樣的放松方式？理由是什么？請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下表格中的信息寫一篇文章。觀點(diǎn)理由一部分同學(xué)喜歡網(wǎng)絡(luò)和電視1. 放松,信息量大…………另一部分同學(xué)喜歡親近家人、自然和讀書1. 與家人相處更加和睦2. 增長(zhǎng)見(jiàn)識(shí)，開(kāi)闊視野你的思考……（不少于一點(diǎn)）參考詞匯：增長(zhǎng)見(jiàn)識(shí) increase one’s knowledge 開(kāi)闊視野 open one’s mind要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80～100個(gè)。（2）短文的題目和開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。（3）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。Our society is developing fast. People are getting busier too. As a result, people try to relax in their free time. We students have different ideas of spending our free time._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Our society is developing fast People are getting busier too. As a result, people try to relax in their free time. We students have different ideas of spending our free time.Some classmates like surfing on the Internet and watching TV. They think they can get plenty of information through the Internet and make them relaxed. Besides,it is easy for them to municate and play with classmates and even strangers without going outside. Others think they should get close to their family,nature,and read a lot. In fact,they are not only good ways to get along better with family members,but also open up their mind and increase their knowledge.I think we should do sports after school in order to keep healthy. What39。s more,we also do after?class activities so that we will have a rich and colourful life.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇議論文。以第三人稱陳述觀點(diǎn)，以第一人稱提出思考。主體時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作。在寫作時(shí)，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。11．（江蘇中考模擬）臨近畢業(yè)，學(xué)校在學(xué)習(xí)小組內(nèi)開(kāi)展了初中階段自評(píng)和組評(píng)活動(dòng)，假設(shè)你是 Moonlight 小組 的組長(zhǎng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格中的信息和提示，為你的組員 Tommy 進(jìn)行綜合素質(zhì)的評(píng)價(jià)，寫一 份素質(zhì)報(bào)告．NameTommyCharacteristics聰明、大方（各舉一例）Hobbies喜歡看書，認(rèn)為看書有很多好處（請(qǐng)列舉2個(gè)好處）Honour他在家?guī)椭黾覄?wù)。在學(xué)校和同學(xué)相處融洽。上學(xué)途中遵守交通規(guī)則（舉一例）。今年，學(xué)校授予了他優(yōu)秀學(xué)生獎(jiǎng)（Award for Best Student）Problems面臨考試，遭受壓力痛苦，他沒(méi)有充足的睡眠．Your suggestions（根據(jù)實(shí)際情況提2點(diǎn)建議）…要求：表達(dá)清楚、語(yǔ)法正確、上下文連貫；要點(diǎn)必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；詞數(shù)：100 詞左右；不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight.【答案】Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good at all his lessons. He is so generous that he shares everything with his likes reading because he thinks he can get much knowledge and learn more about the world by reading. And reading has a good effect on children’s growth. At home, he can help his parents do some housework. At school, he gets on well with his classmates. On the way to school, he obeys the traffic rules. He crosses the road when the light is green. Our school presented him with Award for Best Student this year. However, Tommy is stressed when the exam es. And he doesn’t have enough sleep. I think he should go over what he has learned before exams. It’s better for him to manage his time wisely so that he can have enough time to rest.【解析】這篇作文要求我們按照表格里的內(nèi)容介紹一下Tommy的情況，為Tommy寫一篇綜合素質(zhì)的評(píng)價(jià)報(bào)告。在表格中有非常詳細(xì)的關(guān)于Tommy各方面的內(nèi)容，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容有條理的表達(dá)出來(lái)。表格中涉及的內(nèi)容較多，寫作時(shí)要注意表達(dá)的條理性。這篇作文應(yīng)主要使用第三人稱來(lái)寫。在最后要給Tommy提一些建議，這一部分應(yīng)該用第一人稱。同時(shí)注意表達(dá)的