【文章內容簡介】 bile phones for a long time, I mean, no more than half an hour a day. Don’t take mobile phones to school. A mobile phone is just a kind of tool, not our whole life.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據提示內容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；再緊扣要點，動筆寫作，可適當發(fā)揮。在寫作時，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點分明，中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細心復核檢查，確保正確無誤。8．（無錫市江南中學中考模擬）書面表達親子關系是目前廣受關注的話題。假設你是張華，你正在以“如何與父母更好地相處” 為題進行英語自主課程研究。通過搜集資料，你查找到中國青少年研究中心（CYCRC）近日就中美兩國親子關系進行了問卷調查，結果如下表。請你根據下表選取并整合你認為有用的信息，結合你的實際經歷以How to get along well with parents為題寫一篇感想。ChinaUSKids often talk to their parents%89%Kids think their parents understand them61%%Kids have different ideas from their parents%76%Kids have different ideas from their parents mostly because of…Schoolwork （%）Pocket money （20%）注意事項：；、意思連貫、符合情境；，首尾已經在答題卡上給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；4. 內容必須寫在答題卡指定的位置。【答案】How to get along well with parentsMore and more people begin to focus on the parentchild relationship. Here’s my understanding of how to get along well with our parents.CYCRC did a survey in the United States and China. The results showed that % of Chinese children often talk to their parents, far fewer than the Americans. More understanding lies in American parentchild relationship. I think we should not only talk often but open our heart. For example, when I got low marks in exams, I always talked to my parents. They helped me find the reason and encouraged me. I also shared my secrets and worries with them. A good relationship requires efforts from both parents and children. As children, getting well with parents is of great importance to us. We should find a proper way to create a healthy parentchild relationship.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以How to get along well with parents為題，就中國青少年研究中心（CYCRC）近日對中美兩國親子關系問卷調查的結果進行介紹，并結合自己的實際經歷，發(fā)表自己的感謝。寫作前，應仔細審題，觀察所給表格，弄清楚表格中每一項的內容以及它的意義。然后結合自己的實際情況，對如何與父母良好相處，發(fā)表自己的看法。短文應主要以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，第一人稱和第三人稱來敘述。寫作時應注意：內容應密切結合表格中所給的數(shù)據以及自己的實際經歷，有敘述，有議論。合理安排各部分內容之間的關系，注意分清結構，表達要有條理。其次應注意英語表達習慣和漢語的不同，不能根據漢語式思維逐詞翻譯，應從句式的整體結構出發(fā)，使用適當?shù)膯卧~、短語和句型表達。句式結構要完整，可以簡單句為基礎，穿插使用并列句和復合句以及其他復雜句式。同時注意語句之間使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分，使行文連貫、自然。【點睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據題目要求，介紹了中美兩國親子關系的對比，并結合自己的實際對如何與父母相處，發(fā)表了個人看法。短文有以下幾個特點：首先文章內容完整，符合題目要求。短文分三段：第一段引出文章的話題parentchild relationship，點明文章主旨Here’s my understanding of how to get along well with our parents；第二段對調查結果的第一項內容進行了介紹，并結合自己的經歷，講述了如何與父母相處。這是文章的主體部分，敘述非常詳細，內容也很充實，所占篇幅也最大；最后一段作者重申主題，點明了良好親子關系的重要性。其次短文使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范，用詞準確，語句通順。句式結構完整，以簡單句為主，也使用了賓語從句、狀語從句、并列句、非謂語動詞等復雜句式和結構。行文連貫、自然，表達流暢。短文中較好的句型有：The results showed that % of Chinese children often talk to their parents, far fewer than the Americans.、I think we should not only talk often but open our heart.、I also shared my secrets and worries with them. A good relationship requires efforts from both parents and children、We should find a proper way to create a healthy parentchild 。9．（河南中考模擬）“苔花如米小，也學牡丹開?！蔽覀兇蠖鄶?shù)人雖微不足道，但也能有所作為。請以“One Thing I Felt Very Proud Of”為題用英語寫一篇短文，描述你曾做過的引以自豪的一件事情。要求： 1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱；2. 詞數(shù)80左右。One Thing I Felt Very Proud Of________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】I will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday. I tried many times but failed before she came back. Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned. However, I didn’t give up, and finally I succeeded. Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears.I felt proud of cooking on my own.【解析】【分析】本文是一篇話題作文?！驹斀狻扛鶕}干““苔花如米小，也學牡丹開?！蔽覀兇蠖鄶?shù)人雖微不足道，但也能有所作為。請以“One Thing I Felt Very Proud Of”為題用英語寫一篇短文，描述你曾做過的引以自豪的一件事情?！币罂芍?，本文用一般過去時，人稱用第一人稱。英語作文一般分為三個部分：第一部分：開篇點題——我將介紹曾做過的引以自豪的一件事情。第二部分：文章主體——具體介紹這件事情的始末。根據事情發(fā)展順序，從先到后交代事情的經過，我做了什么，為什么引以為傲。這些內容用一般過去時，注意動詞的過去式變形。第三部分：總結全文——我為自己感到驕傲。10．（山東中考模擬）書面表達下圖描述了李明和家人去年五一假期（May Day Holiday）外出旅游的經歷。請根據圖片提示，用英語寫一篇100詞左右的短文。要求：1. 完整敘述圖片內容，可適當發(fā)揮；2. 結合自己的實際情況陳述個人觀點或給出建議?！敬鸢浮縇ast May Day holiday, Li Ming and his family went to Qingdao seaside. They paid a visit to Qingdao by bus. There are many places of interest in Qingdao. They went to the beach, visited the Museum. But there were many people on the beach. What you see at the seaside is not the scenery, but the numerous shaking heads. At the seaside, people don39。t pay attention to hygiene. There39。s rubbish everywhere. In my opinion, when traveling, people should not only pay attention to safety, but also pay attention to hygiene and not throw rubbish everywhere. We should avoid the rush hour and choose some unknown places.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇看圖作文，根據圖片的內容介紹一下李明和家人去年五一假期（May Day Holiday）外出旅游的經歷。主要是要完整敘述圖片內容、結合自己的實際情況陳述個人觀點或給出建議。時態(tài)為一般過去時，人稱為第三人稱。在陳述個人觀點或給出建議時用一般現(xiàn)在時來寫。注意作文中必須包含圖片上的所有信息，并適當發(fā)揮。寫作時，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達要符合英語習慣，注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系，表達具有條理性?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縒hat you see at the seaside is not the scenery, but the numerous shaking heads. 你在海邊看到的不是風景，而是無數(shù)晃動的頭。句子What you see at the seaside做