【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 bile phones for a long time, I mean, no more than half an hour a day. Don’t take mobile phones to school. A mobile phone is just a kind of tool, not our whole life.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；再緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。8．（無(wú)錫市江南中學(xué)中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)親子關(guān)系是目前廣受關(guān)注的話(huà)題。假設(shè)你是張華，你正在以“如何與父母更好地相處” 為題進(jìn)行英語(yǔ)自主課程研究。通過(guò)搜集資料，你查找到中國(guó)青少年研究中心（CYCRC）近日就中美兩國(guó)親子關(guān)系進(jìn)行了問(wèn)卷調(diào)查，結(jié)果如下表。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表選取并整合你認(rèn)為有用的信息，結(jié)合你的實(shí)際經(jīng)歷以How to get along well with parents為題寫(xiě)一篇感想。ChinaUSKids often talk to their parents%89%Kids think their parents understand them61%%Kids have different ideas from their parents%76%Kids have different ideas from their parents mostly because of…Schoolwork （%）Pocket money （20%）注意事項(xiàng)：；、意思連貫、符合情境；，首尾已經(jīng)在答題卡上給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；4. 內(nèi)容必須寫(xiě)在答題卡指定的位置?！敬鸢浮縃ow to get along well with parentsMore and more people begin to focus on the parentchild relationship. Here’s my understanding of how to get along well with our parents.CYCRC did a survey in the United States and China. The results showed that % of Chinese children often talk to their parents, far fewer than the Americans. More understanding lies in American parentchild relationship. I think we should not only talk often but open our heart. For example, when I got low marks in exams, I always talked to my parents. They helped me find the reason and encouraged me. I also shared my secrets and worries with them. A good relationship requires efforts from both parents and children. As children, getting well with parents is of great importance to us. We should find a proper way to create a healthy parentchild relationship.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以How to get along well with parents為題，就中國(guó)青少年研究中心（CYCRC）近日對(duì)中美兩國(guó)親子關(guān)系問(wèn)卷調(diào)查的結(jié)果進(jìn)行介紹，并結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際經(jīng)歷，發(fā)表自己的感謝。寫(xiě)作前，應(yīng)仔細(xì)審題，觀(guān)察所給表格，弄清楚表格中每一項(xiàng)的內(nèi)容以及它的意義。然后結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際情況，對(duì)如何與父母良好相處，發(fā)表自己的看法。短文應(yīng)主要以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，第一人稱(chēng)和第三人稱(chēng)來(lái)敘述。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：內(nèi)容應(yīng)密切結(jié)合表格中所給的數(shù)據(jù)以及自己的實(shí)際經(jīng)歷，有敘述，有議論。合理安排各部分內(nèi)容之間的關(guān)系，注意分清結(jié)構(gòu)，表達(dá)要有條理。其次應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)的不同，不能根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)式思維逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句式的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，使用適當(dāng)?shù)膯卧~、短語(yǔ)和句型表達(dá)。句式結(jié)構(gòu)要完整，可以簡(jiǎn)單句為基礎(chǔ)，穿插使用并列句和復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)雜句式。同時(shí)注意語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使行文連貫、自然?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，介紹了中美兩國(guó)親子關(guān)系的對(duì)比，并結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際對(duì)如何與父母相處，發(fā)表了個(gè)人看法。短文有以下幾個(gè)特點(diǎn)：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，符合題目要求。短文分三段：第一段引出文章的話(huà)題parentchild relationship，點(diǎn)明文章主旨Here’s my understanding of how to get along well with our parents；第二段對(duì)調(diào)查結(jié)果的第一項(xiàng)內(nèi)容進(jìn)行了介紹，并結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷，講述了如何與父母相處。這是文章的主體部分，敘述非常詳細(xì)，內(nèi)容也很充實(shí)，所占篇幅也最大；最后一段作者重申主題，點(diǎn)明了良好親子關(guān)系的重要性。其次短文使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng)，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)句通順。句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，也使用了賓語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句、并列句、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞等復(fù)雜句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。行文連貫、自然，表達(dá)流暢。短文中較好的句型有：The results showed that % of Chinese children often talk to their parents, far fewer than the Americans.、I think we should not only talk often but open our heart.、I also shared my secrets and worries with them. A good relationship requires efforts from both parents and children、We should find a proper way to create a healthy parentchild 。9．（河南中考模擬）“苔花如米小，也學(xué)牡丹開(kāi)?！蔽覀兇蠖鄶?shù)人雖微不足道，但也能有所作為。請(qǐng)以“One Thing I Felt Very Proud Of”為題用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，描述你曾做過(guò)的引以自豪的一件事情。要求： 1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；2. 詞數(shù)80左右。One Thing I Felt Very Proud Of________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】I will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday. I tried many times but failed before she came back. Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned. However, I didn’t give up, and finally I succeeded. Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears.I felt proud of cooking on my own.【解析】【分析】本文是一篇話(huà)題作文?！驹斀狻扛鶕?jù)題干““苔花如米小，也學(xué)牡丹開(kāi)?！蔽覀兇蠖鄶?shù)人雖微不足道，但也能有所作為。請(qǐng)以“One Thing I Felt Very Proud Of”為題用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，描述你曾做過(guò)的引以自豪的一件事情?！币罂芍疚挠靡话氵^(guò)去時(shí)，人稱(chēng)用第一人稱(chēng)。英語(yǔ)作文一般分為三個(gè)部分：第一部分：開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題——我將介紹曾做過(guò)的引以自豪的一件事情。第二部分：文章主體——具體介紹這件事情的始末。根據(jù)事情發(fā)展順序，從先到后交代事情的經(jīng)過(guò)，我做了什么，為什么引以為傲。這些內(nèi)容用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，注意動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去式變形。第三部分：總結(jié)全文——我為自己感到驕傲。10．（山東中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)下圖描述了李明和家人去年五一假期（May Day Holiday）外出旅游的經(jīng)歷。請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖片提示，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇100詞左右的短文。要求：1. 完整敘述圖片內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際情況陳述個(gè)人觀(guān)點(diǎn)或給出建議?！敬鸢浮縇ast May Day holiday, Li Ming and his family went to Qingdao seaside. They paid a visit to Qingdao by bus. There are many places of interest in Qingdao. They went to the beach, visited the Museum. But there were many people on the beach. What you see at the seaside is not the scenery, but the numerous shaking heads. At the seaside, people don39。t pay attention to hygiene. There39。s rubbish everywhere. In my opinion, when traveling, people should not only pay attention to safety, but also pay attention to hygiene and not throw rubbish everywhere. We should avoid the rush hour and choose some unknown places.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇看圖作文，根據(jù)圖片的內(nèi)容介紹一下李明和家人去年五一假期（May Day Holiday）外出旅游的經(jīng)歷。主要是要完整敘述圖片內(nèi)容、結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際情況陳述個(gè)人觀(guān)點(diǎn)或給出建議。時(shí)態(tài)為一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱(chēng)為第三人稱(chēng)。在陳述個(gè)人觀(guān)點(diǎn)或給出建議時(shí)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)來(lái)寫(xiě)。注意作文中必須包含圖片上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，避免使用漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語(yǔ)。語(yǔ)法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縒hat you see at the seaside is not the scenery, but the numerous shaking heads. 你在海邊看到的不是風(fēng)景，而是無(wú)數(shù)晃動(dòng)的頭。句子What you see at the seaside做