【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 ling got too angry to forgive him. In my opinion, it was really his fault. Forgetting the date not only led to Lingling’s anger, but also made her lose trust in him. Keeping promises is always the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. What Daming should do now is to ask for forgiveness and promise that he will never do that again.Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it. Yours,Tony【解析】【分析】本文為一篇稿件，需要學(xué)生通過大明和玲玲之間，大明沒有信守承諾的事情，談自己的看法。信守承諾是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德，在寫作過程中，注意文章結(jié)構(gòu)，先寫出大明和玲玲之間的事情，然后再說自己對(duì)此的看法?！驹斀狻渴紫?，第一句話直接點(diǎn)明作者的觀點(diǎn)，大明是犯錯(cuò)了的。然后仔細(xì)闡述了事情發(fā)生的經(jīng)過。接下來說出自己對(duì)此事件的看法，不信守承諾會(huì)導(dǎo)致失去別人的信任，對(duì)大明的建議是除了認(rèn)錯(cuò)之外，還需要再次保證永不再犯?！军c(diǎn)睛】文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，符合邏輯，先表明自己觀點(diǎn)，然后闡述事情，提出自己的觀點(diǎn)和建議。整篇文章在謀篇布局上，比較嚴(yán)密。除此之外，中間也使用了一些連接詞，例如but，so，because of等，使文章更加通順。8．（揚(yáng)州中學(xué)教育集團(tuán)樹人學(xué)校初三）現(xiàn)在有些學(xué)生缺乏“感恩”意識(shí)，對(duì)待家人、朋友、老師等很冷漠，而且行為方式和價(jià)值觀令人擔(dān)憂。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表中所提供的信息，以 “Learn to Express Thanks” 為題，用英語寫一篇演講稿。學(xué)生現(xiàn)狀認(rèn)為父母供他們吃好穿好是應(yīng)當(dāng)?shù)?，不知道感恩為什么要感恩父母的養(yǎng)育之恩；老師的授業(yè)之恩；朋友的……怎樣感恩……（至少兩點(diǎn)） 要求：1）表達(dá)清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；2）必須包括表格中的相關(guān)信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；4）不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。Good morning, boys and girls! The topic of my speech today is “Learn to express thanks.”__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for your listening.【答案】Good morning, boys and girls! The topic of my speech today is “Learn to express thanks.” Nowadays some students consider it natural to eat well and wear fashionable clothes. They think it is their parents’ duty to provide a happy life for them. However, they don’t show any sense of “Thanks”.I don’t think it’s right. It’s our parents who take good care of us and love us very much. In addition, we are supposed to be thankful to our teachers for teaching us so much knowledge. What’s more, we should say thanks to our friends because they share joy with us and give us courage to overe many difficulties.In my opinion, it’s time for us to learn to express thanks to them. First of all, we should be polite to our parents and teachers. Besides, we should try our best to help others when they are in trouble. Last but not least, we must study harder to make a great contribution to our country in the future. And only in this way can we better reward our parents, teachers, friends and so on.Thanks for your listening.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如provide a happy life，any sense of，take good care of；very much，be supposed to do；be thankful to，so much，share with，what’s more，say thanks to，in my opinion，be polite to，try our best，in trouble，in the future，and so on 等。而固定句型it’s time for us to learn to express thanks to think it is their parents’ duty to provide a happy life for them,/ It’s our parents who take good care of us and love us very much./ we should try our best to help others when they are in ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。【點(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。9．（浙江中考模擬）假如你是李華，是某英文電臺(tái)“ Say it”欄目的兼職編輯。最近你收到一名叫王平的中學(xué)生發(fā)來的電子郵件，向你們欄目組求助。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)電子郵件內(nèi)容給她回復(fù)一封電子郵件，幫助她解答困惑。Dear Li Hua,I39。 m a middle school student. Recently I argued with my parents over using Wechat. You know Wechat has bee a part of our everyday life, but my parents don’t allow me to use it. What 39。s worse, they have changed my password（密碼） so that I can’t use it. There has been a cold war between us for over a week. What should I do?Yours,Wang Ping要求：1．語言表達(dá)要準(zhǔn)確，語意要通順、連貫；2．詞數(shù)80100左右，電子郵件的格式、開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：欺騙tick；許可permissionDear Wang Ping,I39。m sorry to hear that you are having problems with your parents because of using I believe things will get better, Yours Li Hua【答案】Dear Wang PingI‘m sorry to hear that you are having problems with your parents because of using Wechat. In fact, your problem is very mon . Cheer up and let’s find a good way to solve it.You may be tricked or get into trouble when you use Wechat. Also, using it for a long time is bad for your health, especially for your eyes. Maybe your parents worry about these things. In my opinion, munication is very important. Why not have a good talk with your parents about how to use Wechat properly? Try telling them you won’t use it for too long and won’t use it when you are studying. What more. tell them you’ll never add strangers without their permission.I believe things will get better.YoursLi Hu【解析】【詳解】這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作，寫一封回信。本題給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，確定寫作內(nèi)容，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)和將來時(shí)態(tài)，寫作中注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇比較不錯(cuò)的作文。作者根據(jù)題目要求,層次非常的清晰。短文中需要作者自己補(bǔ)充的內(nèi)容完成得也不錯(cuò)這些內(nèi)容都比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型Maybe your parents worry about these things. In my opinion, munication is very important.；Why not have a good talk with your parents about how to use Wechat properly?10．（江西中考模擬）健康的體魄離不開好的生活習(xí)慣。同樣，對(duì)于學(xué)生來說優(yōu)異成績的取得也需要好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，以“How to Develop Good Study Habits”為題寫一篇英語短文談?wù)勛约旱目捶?。提示?. 養(yǎng)成好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣的好處；2. 學(xué)生中不良學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣的表現(xiàn)；3. 對(duì)養(yǎng)成好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣的建議（至少提三條建議）。要求：1. 內(nèi)容必須包括以上提示要點(diǎn)可以，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 90詞左右，短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。How to Develop Good Study Habits Every student wants to study well, but it′s not 【答案】How to Develop Good Study Habits