【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 【答案】A（n） toy gun I haveEveryone has an object that she/ he like best. So do I.In my drawer, there is a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth. It’s a black toy gun and it can shot some small plastic pills for ten meters. When I was young, I played with other kids with my toy gun. They all admired me and put me in the place of leader. I was so happy then. When I was a little boy, I liked watching the war movies best. I was eager to have my own toy gun. One day, it was my birthday. I asked for it when my father came back. My family was poor then and my father didn’t promise me. From then, father worked harder and came back more lately. A week later, father put a box to me. A black toy gun in it! I was moved with tears. In order to get it, father worked late and hurt himself. He died a month later.Now I hope I can be a soldier and own a real gun to protect my country and family. I will remember my father’s love forever. Every time I miss him, I’ll take out the toy gun and say “Thank you, my dear father!【解析】寫(xiě)作分析：這篇作文需要就自己最喜歡的物品展開(kāi)描述，要求是進(jìn)行描述，并談?wù)勀闶侨绾蔚玫剿?，以及它存在的意義。寫(xiě)作的難度是逐漸加深的，在討論其如何獲得的時(shí)候要注意正確使用時(shí)態(tài)，在談?wù)撘饬x的時(shí)候要注意表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確性，避免不熟悉的表達(dá)。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：這篇文章講了自己最喜歡的玩具槍，描述玩具槍的時(shí)候有適當(dāng)?shù)募?xì)節(jié)補(bǔ)充，例如a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth（用黃布包著的玩具槍），這里用到了過(guò)去分詞作定語(yǔ)，作者還描述了玩具槍的功能（small plastic pills），順便還描述了自己小時(shí)候玩槍的經(jīng)歷，準(zhǔn)確使用了時(shí)態(tài)。在描述得到的經(jīng)歷的時(shí)候不落俗套，講到了自己的家庭那時(shí)比較困難，父親是通過(guò)努力工作為我賺錢買槍的，寫(xiě)作是富有感情的，也通過(guò)這段經(jīng)歷為這把玩具槍賦予了一定的意義。最后玩具的意義得到了升華，表達(dá)了作者的期望（I hope I can be a soldier），上升到了保家衛(wèi)國(guó)的層面，這樣的一篇作文是有深度的，能夠讓人感動(dòng)的，是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文。6．題目②“持之以恒，方得始。”堅(jiān)持是一種可貴的品格。生活中想要做成任何一件事情，都需要持之以恒的精神。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開(kāi)展以“堅(jiān)持”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿。談淡你在初中生活中堅(jiān)持的一件事（愛(ài)好，習(xí)慣……），你是怎樣做的，以及你的感受。提示詞語(yǔ)：keep, practice, difficult, give up, proud提示問(wèn)題：1. What did you do?2. How do you feel?It s important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals. 【答案】It39。s important for us to keep trying to achieve our love running and I have kept running for three years.When I was in Grade 7，I was not good at sports and running was always my often failed in my running order to catch up with my classmates，I began to practice running every day after ，I was so tired that I really wanted to give I kept telling myself that I could make matter what kind of difficulties I faced，I tried my best to keep I do much better in running and I39。m very proud of feel more confident and I39。m ready for any challenges in the future.【解析】【分析】本篇是材料作文，根據(jù)所給提示寫(xiě)一篇自己在初中生活中堅(jiān)持做的事；文中寫(xiě)明自己是怎么做的并談?wù)勛约旱母惺?。【詳解】，用第一人稱寫(xiě)初中生活中自己堅(jiān)持做的一件事，根據(jù)提示，描寫(xiě)“What did you do?用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，描寫(xiě)How do you feel?用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。書(shū)寫(xiě)時(shí)要緊扣主題，文句通順。“跑步”，正文部分詳細(xì)地描寫(xiě)了自己起初跑步總是不及格，通過(guò)克服困難、不懈地努力，堅(jiān)持跑步，到現(xiàn)在比以前會(huì)跑；結(jié)尾談了這件事對(duì)自己的影響；文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，前后呼應(yīng)。比如：固定搭配、固定句型It39。s +adj+ for us +to do sth、love doing sth、keep doing 、be good at、 catch up with、be proud of；不定式in order to；try my best to；狀語(yǔ)從句so…that …；比較級(jí)do much better in …、feel more confident等；短語(yǔ)多彩、文句表達(dá)多樣。 ”7．書(shū)面表達(dá)假如你是英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部的Cathy,上周五你們收到了外教Angel為同學(xué)們網(wǎng)購(gòu)的英文書(shū)籍。俱樂(lè)部的同學(xué)們很喜歡網(wǎng)購(gòu)圖書(shū)這種便捷的方式，并打算在本周五交流讀書(shū)后的感受。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下信息, 給Angel寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，告訴她俱樂(lè)部的活動(dòng)情況，并說(shuō)說(shuō)網(wǎng)購(gòu)圖書(shū)的好處。寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1表達(dá)收到圖書(shū)后的喜悅與感激之情。2介紹活動(dòng)的情況：（l）上周五，俱樂(lè)部成員們一起讀英文書(shū)。（2）本周五的下午3點(diǎn)，大家將共同交流讀書(shū)的體會(huì)。（3）同學(xué)們將在下個(gè)月網(wǎng)購(gòu)其他的英文書(shū)。3說(shuō)一說(shuō)網(wǎng)上購(gòu)書(shū)有什么好處。寫(xiě)作要求：1不得使用真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名。2可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫。3字跡工整、語(yǔ)言精練、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、條理清晰。4至少80詞。Dear Angel,How are you doing? Best wishes!Yours,Cathy【答案】Dear Angel,How are you doing? I’m writing to tell you that we received the books that you bought for us. We are grateful to you and all of us are very happy。Last Friday，we had a reading party, which was held on Friday in our reading room. Then we are going to hold an activity to share the feeling with others at 3:00 on Friday afternoon. All of us are fond of buying books on the Internet. We are going t