【正文】 部的活動(dòng)情況，并說說網(wǎng)購圖書的好處。2介紹活動(dòng)的情況：（l）上周五，俱樂部成員們一起讀英文書。（3）同學(xué)們將在下個(gè)月網(wǎng)購其他的英文書。寫作要求：1不得使用真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名。3字跡工整、語言精練、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、條理清晰。Dear Angel,How are you doing? Best wishes!Yours,Cathy【答案】Dear Angel,How are you doing? I’m writing to tell you that we received the books that you bought for us. We are grateful to you and all of us are very happy。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。構(gòu)思提綱。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。6．（請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面內(nèi)容寫一篇短文。反對(duì)者的觀點(diǎn)1. 學(xué)生需要時(shí)間休息；2. 壓力過大不利于身體健康。Nowadays, many middle school students are taking all kinds of afterschool classes at weekends or on holidays. There are two different opinions about it.Some people think that________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Nowadays, many middle school students are taking all kinds of afterschool classes at weekends or on holidays. There are two different opinions about it. Some people think that students can get better exam results and go to better senior high schools by taking extra classes. They also believe that students can avoid watching too much TV or playing puter games in this way. But others have a different opinion. They think that students need more time to rest. If they take too many classes, they might feel too stressed. That’s not good for their health. As for me, I don’t think taking extra classes is necessary. Learning hard in class is enough. We just need to go over our lessons after class. We can also teach ourselves as it is very important for us to have a lifelong learning ability.【解析】【分析】整體分析：這是一篇提綱話題作文。第二段要寫中學(xué)生利用周末和節(jié)假日上課外補(bǔ)習(xí)班贊同者的觀點(diǎn)。第四段要表述作者自己的觀點(diǎn)。、短語、句型。寫完后反復(fù)閱讀修改推敲潤色，人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、單復(fù)數(shù)一致等。用短語、句型：all kinds of ，Some They also believe thatIt is very important for us to have a lifelong learning 。注意過渡性語言的使用。7．（而你的朋友Daming最近卻被誠信危機(jī)所困擾。因此，Lingling很生氣，并且不愿接受Daming的道歉。注意：詞數(shù)80—100；行文連貫，邏輯合理；文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名； 文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。信守承諾是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德，在寫作過程中，注意文章結(jié)構(gòu)，先寫出大明和玲玲之間的事情，然后再說自己對(duì)此的看法。然后仔細(xì)闡述了事情發(fā)生的經(jīng)過?！军c(diǎn)睛】文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，符合邏輯，先表明自己觀點(diǎn)，然后闡述事情，提出自己的觀點(diǎn)和建議。除此之外，中間也使用了一些連接詞，例如but，so，because of等，使文章更加通順。揚(yáng)州中學(xué)教育集團(tuán)樹人學(xué)校初三）現(xiàn)在有些學(xué)生缺乏“感恩”意識(shí)，對(duì)待家人、朋友、老師等很冷漠，而且行為方式和價(jià)值觀令人擔(dān)憂。學(xué)生現(xiàn)狀認(rèn)為父母供他們吃好穿好是應(yīng)當(dāng)?shù)模恢栏卸鳛槭裁匆卸鞲改傅酿B(yǎng)育之恩；老師的授業(yè)之恩；朋友的……怎樣感恩……（至少兩點(diǎn)） 要求：1）表達(dá)清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；2）必須包括表格中的相關(guān)信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；4）不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。而固定句型it’s time for us to learn to express thanks to think it is their parents’ duty to provide a happy life for them,/ It’s our parents who take good care of us and love us very much./ we should try our best to help others when they are in ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。浙江中考模擬）假如你是李華，是某英文電臺(tái)“ Say it”欄目的兼職編輯。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)電子郵件內(nèi)容給她回復(fù)一封電子郵件，幫助她解答困惑。 m a middle school student. Recently I argued with my parents over using Wechat. You know Wechat has bee a part of our everyday life, but my parents don’t allow me to use it. What 39。參考詞匯：欺騙tick；許可permissionDear Wang Ping,I39。本題給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，確定寫作內(nèi)容，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。作者根據(jù)題目要求,層次非常的清晰。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型Maybe your parents worry about these things. In my opinion, munication is very important.；Why not have a good talk with your parents about how to use Wechat properly?10．（同樣，對(duì)于學(xué)生來說優(yōu)異成績的取得也需要好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣。提示：1. 養(yǎng)成好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣的好處；2. 學(xué)生中不良學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣的表現(xiàn)；3. 對(duì)養(yǎng)成好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣的建議（至少提三條建議）。How to Develop Good Study Habits Every student wants to study well, but it′s not 【答案】How to Develop Good Study HabitsEvery student wants to study well, but it s not easy. Good study habits help us learn better and more quickly. However, not all students have developed good study habits. Some are too lazy to finish their homework on time. Some always want to play instead of studying. So how can we develop good study habits?First, you should pay attention to the study time. The best time to study is when you aren39。d better ask for help when having trouble studying.Always remember these suggestions and follow them. Then you’ll find it not so hard to study well.【解析】【分析】這篇書面表達(dá)要求學(xué)生寫出如何培養(yǎng)良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣。在內(nèi)容方面，首先要寫出好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣的好處，也就是為什么要培養(yǎng)好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣；其次是在學(xué)習(xí)中發(fā)現(xiàn)的不好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣；最后提出自己對(duì)養(yǎng)成好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣的建議；在語言方面，使用考生自己熟悉的句型，簡潔無錯(cuò)；在規(guī)范方面，注意單詞拼寫，標(biāo)點(diǎn)防護(hù)好的正確使用。江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)學(xué)校英語社團(tuán)正在舉辦英語征文比賽，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所列的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，用英語以“Learn to Smile”為題寫一篇短文，參加比賽。對(duì)他人微笑使人與人更親近，帶來友誼。注意：1．短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，不要逐句翻譯；2．表格中省略部分須用2至3句話作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順；3．詞數(shù)90左右。Learn to SmileSmile is an attitude （態(tài)度） to life．____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Learn to SmileSmile is an attitude to life．In our life, there may be something unpleasant．For example, we may fail in an exam or we may be laughed at for some reason．These unpleasant things may make us feel bad．Why not learn to smile? Smiling to ourselves can cheer us up and bring back our confidence．It can also make us forget our worries．We should also learn to smile to others．It will help us to get closer to each other and bring us friendship．So, smile is a language that everyone can easily understand．【解析】這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。同時(shí)Why not learn to smile? / Smiling to ourselves can cheer us up and bring back our confidence./ It will help us to get closer to each other and bring us ，使本文內(nèi)容豐富，條理清晰，表達(dá)流暢，是短文的亮點(diǎn)。還要注意在行文中使用一些