【正文】 c gloves and carry a garbage bag when I run along the river. I can easily clean up trash such as plastic bottles, cans and so on . . I feel even better after returning from a run when I can do something that’s good for myself and my munity. Plogging shows how we are making the world a better place with a simple task. Everyone should be an environmental protection guard and take action to keep our home clean . To protect the earth is to protect ourselves.【解析】【分析】本篇是材料作文，要求結(jié)合自己的日常生活經(jīng)歷，談?wù)勀銓?duì)目前最環(huán)保的運(yùn)動(dòng)方式 （plogging） 的認(rèn)識(shí)以及怎樣從身邊小事做起，做生態(tài)中國(guó)，健康中國(guó)的踐行者。書(shū)寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意題干所給的提示材料，成文時(shí)要文句通順，內(nèi)容完整。開(kāi)篇緊扣主題，介紹自己最喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)是跑步；正文部分順理成章的介紹plogging這種運(yùn)動(dòng)方式以及自己如何身體力行地做到鍛煉、環(huán)保兩不誤；結(jié)尾以. Everyone should be an environmental protection guard and take action to keep our home clean . To protect the earth is to protect ，總結(jié)全文。：高分短語(yǔ)： so much ； all over the world； run along； take action to； keep ……clean .高分句型： enjoy running so much because it makes me keep fit and have an excellent figure. is the act of cleaning up trash while running . Sunday I wear plastic gloves and carry a garbage bag when I run along the river； protect the earth is to protect ourselves.【點(diǎn)睛】本篇材料作文書(shū)寫(xiě)前要認(rèn)真審題，確定人稱(chēng)（第一人稱(chēng)）和時(shí)態(tài)（一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)）；關(guān)注題材的格式（記敘文），注意文章的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)；書(shū)寫(xiě)時(shí)要緊扣主題，做到中心突出，內(nèi)容完整、連貫；成文后要檢查人稱(chēng)、時(shí)態(tài)是否一致、單詞的拼寫(xiě)是否正確、短語(yǔ)和句式的使用是否得當(dāng)。云南中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)提示：轉(zhuǎn)眼間三年的初中生活即將結(jié)束，在這三年的學(xué)習(xí)與生活中一定有些讓你難忘的人或事物。要求：1. 請(qǐng)先將題目補(bǔ)充完整后再作答；2. 語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè)；3. 文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)；4. 將短文寫(xiě)在答題卡上?！敬鸢浮縀veryone has an unforgettable thing in his life. So do I.when I was a middle student, I celebrated my mother’s birthday for her. I cleaned the room, mopped the floor and also bought a present for her. I waited for mum at home after doing all these things. When mum came back, I jumped to her and gave her the present and said happy birthday to her. Mum was so happy and surprised that she hugged me for a long time. This is an unforgettable thing in my life because this was the first time I did the housework and felt how tired to do the job and this was also the first time I noticed mum was so happy that she even cried. Though I was tired, I felt happy.【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇話題作文。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般過(guò)去式時(shí)，人稱(chēng)主要為第一人稱(chēng)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩?！军c(diǎn)睛】點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求。山東中考模擬） 如今，很多城市出現(xiàn)了一種綠色出行方式――共享單車(chē)（bikesharing），它因環(huán)保、便捷而備受青睞，但同時(shí)也引發(fā)了一些問(wèn)題。要點(diǎn)提示：AdvantagesBe convenient, less pollution, reduce the traffic pressure（減緩交通壓力）Take exercise…Problems Throw away, damage（毀損）, be stolen…Advice Civilized（文明的）, follow the rules, take good care of…注意：1. 短文應(yīng)包括以上要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名及地名；3. 詞數(shù)：80100（文章開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。s known that it has many advantages. So it39。s very convenient for people to go somewhere.【高分句型一】Also, it helps to reduce the traffic pressure. There will be less pollution because of bikesharing. Besides, bikesharing helps people take more this way, it39。s health.（優(yōu)勢(shì)） However, it also brings some problems. For example, some people throw them away after using bikes. Even some people damage them, and some bikes are stolen.（難題） In my opinion, everyone should try to be civilized and follow the rules of using bikes. As long as we take good care of bikes, it will make our life better and better,and our environment will be more beautiful.【高分句型二】（建議）【解析】【詳解】這篇短文內(nèi)容豐富，表達(dá)了所有要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。s known that it has many advantages.，F(xiàn)irst of all, it39?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文要求以“Bikesharing”為題，根據(jù)表格的內(nèi)容提示，寫(xiě)一篇短文，表達(dá)自己對(duì)共享單車(chē)的看法和建議。7．（請(qǐng)你以“How to Protect Our Lives”為題，從安全和健康的角度入手，寫(xiě)一篇如何珍惜和保護(hù)我們生命的短文，要點(diǎn)如下：1. 交通安全，校園安全2. 健康的飲食和生活3. ... ...參考詞匯：treasure（v.）珍惜注意：1. 詞數(shù)80~100；2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及學(xué)校名稱(chēng)。t climb trees, don39。而固定句型It is very important for us to know how to treasure and protect our we can learn to treasure and protect ourselves, I believe we can have a healthy body and a better ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容；同時(shí)First of all,/ Secondly,/ Thirdly,和Finally,等詞使表達(dá)條理，層次清晰，是本文的亮點(diǎn)?！军c(diǎn)睛】書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。河北中考模擬）請(qǐng)以“Never Give Up”為題,寫(xiě)一篇短文,簡(jiǎn)要描述圖中的三個(gè)畫(huà)面,并談?wù)勛约旱南敕?要求:1. 文中不得涉及真實(shí)的人名,校名和地名?2. 可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使短文連貫,通順?3. 詞數(shù):80個(gè)詞左右,已給出的部分不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)?提示詞:the long distance running, the ball throwing, the standing long jump, practiceNever Give UpThe . exam is ing. Students of Grade Nine prepare for it every day. Some______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Never Give Up The . exam is ing. Students of Grade Nine prepare for it every day. Some of the students do longdistance running. After school they run on the playground together. They pete for the first and cheer for the winner. Some students practice the standing long jump. They stand in one line and jump at the same time. The student who jumps farthest must share the experience with his classmates. Others practice balling throwing. Though the ball is very heavy, they throw balls again and again until they are satisfied with the result. Although they are tired every day, they never give up. I cheer for them. I think exercising is very useful to them. First, the students must pass the . exam, for it is very important. Second, if they do sports every day, they will be healthier than before. In a word, they are