【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 【答案】Reading Is Very ImportantIt’s very important for us students to read books. And there are so many good points when we do that. First of all, we can get lots of knowledge we didn’t know, especially when we are reading some scientific books or historical ones. And reading can bring so much fun to our life. If we read some jokes or interesting stories, it’s easy for us to keep happy all day. Also, it’s a good way to relax. After a longday work, just take a book to read, imagining what’s happening in the book, so our brains could get enough relax.Since reading can help us so much, I enjoy reading a lot. I like to read after school, when I finish my homework. And my favorite time is the summer vacation, I can get lots of nice books to read without worrying about time! And I write down what I think after reading each book!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文，談?wù)勯喿x的好處和你的閱讀習(xí)慣并號(hào)召大家閱讀。英語(yǔ)作文要注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)，注意提供的觀點(diǎn)、材料，要注意句子的完整性，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式，句子之間的銜接和過(guò)渡。英語(yǔ)作文，要忠實(shí)于材料，不必?cái)U(kuò)展，注意用好連詞，多用非謂語(yǔ)，慎用較難的句型，一定不能寫錯(cuò)句。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。9．（山東中考模擬）緊張而又忙碌的初中生活即將結(jié)束，在裝載你收獲的行囊成長(zhǎng)記錄袋中還應(yīng)增添一份你自己滿意的答案。根據(jù)上述提示，請(qǐng)以“My Unforgettable Junior High School Life”為題寫一篇文章，記錄你難忘的校園生活。首句已給出。注意：. ，句子連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；2. 短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名或能夠透露你個(gè)人身份的相關(guān)信息。，信件的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。My Unforgettable Junior High School LifeHow time flies! 【答案】How time flies! My colorful junior high school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think of about myself.In the past, I was busy learning my subjects and worked hard at them. I got on well with my classmates. I was good at English. I liked playing basketball / football / volleyball. But now I am interested in history, because it is very interesting. I have many interests such as reading books, playing sports and so on. In this way, I’ve got more knowledge and improved my life.In the future, I’ll try my best to do better. I’ll learn to enjoy my school life. I’ll make it more and more beautiful. Believing myself is the key to success.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文要求我們以My Unforgettable Junior High School Life為題，回想一下自己即將過(guò)去的初中，講述難忘的初中生活。題目中用思維導(dǎo)圖，列出了一些文章中會(huì)用到的關(guān)鍵詞，供學(xué)生們參考使用。審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)以一般過(guò)去時(shí)、第一人稱為主來(lái)敘述。題目中并沒(méi)有給出具體的寫作內(nèi)容，學(xué)生們應(yīng)發(fā)揮自己的想象力，可以從自己的學(xué)習(xí)、愛(ài)好、與同學(xué)的交往、與老師的相處以及自己的感受等方面進(jìn)行詳細(xì)闡述。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：首先要展開合理想象，補(bǔ)充文章細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容，注意各部分內(nèi)容之間的層次，內(nèi)容要完整、充實(shí)，結(jié)構(gòu)要清晰。其次應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯。句子的結(jié)構(gòu)要完整，可以簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，如主謂賓或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)。為提升作文檔次，應(yīng)穿插使用并列句、復(fù)合句及其他復(fù)雜句式。語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、自然?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，回憶了自己的初中生活，并描述了自己的感受。短文有以下幾個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)：首先文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)、完整，符合題目要求。短文中作者從自己的學(xué)習(xí)情況、與同學(xué)的交往、愛(ài)好、特長(zhǎng)等方面進(jìn)行了總結(jié)，在最后提出了對(duì)未來(lái)的希望。層次清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)合理。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，文章第一段引出主題，使用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；第二段回憶過(guò)去的生活，主要使用了一般過(guò)去時(shí)；最后對(duì)未來(lái)提出希望，用到了一般將來(lái)時(shí)。語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，注意了名詞、動(dòng)詞、形容詞等的正確形式。句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，也使用了并列句、賓語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句等復(fù)合句句型，調(diào)整了文章節(jié)奏，提升了作文檔次。短文中較好的句型有：In the past, I was busy learning my subjects and worked hard at them、But now I am interested in history, because it is very interesting、In this way, I’ve got more knowledge and improved my life.、I’ll make it more and more beautiful. Believing myself is the key to success等等。10．（浙江中考模擬）書面表達(dá)為了解學(xué)生們的職業(yè)觀，班主任以我的理想職業(yè)為主題在全班做了調(diào)查。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格中的結(jié)果，寫一篇英語(yǔ)調(diào)查報(bào)告，并且結(jié)合實(shí)際情況，談?wù)勀銓?duì)未來(lái)工作的選擇和原因。PrecentJobReason45%businessmenrich28%teachersteach knowledge20%DoctorsSave lives7%Other jobs/注意：⑴必須包含表格所有內(nèi)容，并談?wù)勛约旱奈磥?lái)工作選擇和原因；⑵文中不得出現(xiàn)與你身份相關(guān)的信息；⑶0—100詞，短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。短文首句：In order to know more about the ideas of students on their future jobs，we made a survey in our class．【答案】In order to know more about the ideas of students on their future jobs, we made a survey in our class. Here are the results. 45% of the students would like to bee businessmen in the future. Because they think if they are rich, they can buy whatever they want. 28% choose to be teachers. They can not only teach students much knowledge, but also feel happy with them. 20% hope to be doctors. In their hearts, doctors can cure sick patients as well as saving people39。s lives. The rest of the students think about other jobs, such as policemen, engineers, nurses and so on.In my opinion, I want to be an English teacher. That39。s because I love children and I love English, too.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇調(diào)查報(bào)告。文章要按照題目要求，根據(jù)提綱中所給的信息完成短文，短文句中時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，句中的主要是第三人稱，句中使用了一些固定短語(yǔ)和句中結(jié)果，例如，would like to do sth. in the future。 be happy with。 hope to do sth. as well as。 think about。 in my opinion。此外文章使用了一些主從復(fù)合句，使得文章上下文邏輯關(guān)系更加合理。11．（陜西師大附中中考模擬）書面表達(dá)假設(shè)不久前你們學(xué)校為貧困地區(qū)的孩子們籌款舉辦了一次慈善行活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)以“Walk for children in poor areas”為題，為某中學(xué)生英文報(bào)寫一篇報(bào)道，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1. 目的：為貧困地區(qū)的孩子們籌款2. 時(shí)間：10月23日，星期六3. 路徑： 學(xué)?！兄行?. 簡(jiǎn)況：學(xué)生把自己分成四人一組，出發(fā)前計(jì)劃好了一切，步行很艱辛，但活動(dòng)過(guò)程中大家互相幫助，互相支持。最終在許多人的幫助下，籌的善款5萬(wàn)多元。5. 感受：每個(gè)人都很累，但都很高興，因?yàn)椤?注意：1. 報(bào)道必須把包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫；2. 第5要點(diǎn)的內(nèi)容須用至少2句話展開合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3. 詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）Walk for children in poor areasNot long ago, our school organized a charity walk to raise money for children in poor ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】It was on Saturday, 23rd October. We walked from the school to the centre of the city. Before the walk, we grouped ourselves into a team of four and planned everything well. It was a hard （tough） work. But during the walk, we supported and helped each other. With the help of many people, we raised over （more than） 50,000 yuan in the end. We all felt tired, but we were very happy. Because it was a meaningful experience and it wasan excellent chance to learn team spirit.【解析】【詳解】本篇文章屬于報(bào)道類，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)該用一般過(guò)去式為主。重點(diǎn)詞匯：（1）walk from …… t