【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 eep me young and alive. To realize my dream, I have to make full use of spare time to acquire the essential knowledge and enter a good university. What efforts are you making for your dream?Tell me about your ideal job!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本題通過描寫夢想中的職業(yè)，讓學(xué)生對未來有憧憬，給一部分提示詞，讓學(xué)生有話可說?！驹斀狻渴紫然卮鹇殬I(yè)是教師。然后解釋為什么喜歡該工作，因?yàn)榭梢园炎约旱闹R分享給孩子們，并且喜歡學(xué)校的環(huán)境。為了實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的夢想，正在為此作出努力。最后向Bill提出問題，結(jié)束全文?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文首先開篇功能句Thank you for your ，運(yùn)用多種連接詞，比如because，Besides，To realize my dream, 等使文章連貫性強(qiáng)，長短句結(jié)合，讀起來朗朗上口，不失為一篇佳作。5． “inspire” 一詞的漢語解釋是“激勵；鼓舞；賦予靈感；或啟發(fā)思考”等。請以 “The person who inspired me”為題寫一篇不少于 80 詞的短文，向校報的英語園地投稿。要點(diǎn)： 1. What kind of person is he/ she？2. How did he/ she inspire you？要求： 1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名。2. 語言流暢，字跡清楚?！敬鸢浮縏he person who inspired meMany people around gave me deep impressions. They helped me, encouraged me and inspired me. But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng. Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes. He doesn39。t talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face. He is warmhearted and ready to help others. If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out. As a good student, he studies very hard. In the early morning, you can see him stand near a tree and read English intensively. Few students can arrive at school as early as he is. He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and pingpang. He got the first prize in last year39。s pingpang petition.You can see the good personality and the spirit of persistence in this small body. He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he is.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以The person who inspired me為題，介紹一個曾經(jīng)激勵過你的人。題目中用問題的形式給予了提示，審題可知，短文應(yīng)包括兩個部分的內(nèi)容：首先介紹這個激勵過你的人是誰，他是怎樣的一個人；然后介紹他是如何激勵你的。學(xué)生們可以這兩個問題為提綱，發(fā)揮想象力，充實(shí)細(xì)節(jié)信息，組織語言，連貫成文。短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時為主來敘述，人稱是第三人稱和第一人稱，注意謂語動詞形式的變化。寫作時應(yīng)注意：首先要符合題目要求，包括題目中要求的所有信息，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意上下文的銜接。其次應(yīng)注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語的不同，不要按照漢語思維逐詞翻譯。應(yīng)該從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)入手，寫完整的句子?？梢院唵尉浣Y(jié)構(gòu)為主，輔以并列句、復(fù)合句。為提升文章檔次，應(yīng)使用高級詞匯以及復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)。同時語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分使文意連貫、自然。【點(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，介紹了一個曾經(jīng)激勵過自己的人。短文有以下幾個優(yōu)點(diǎn)：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，層次清晰，短文分三段，第一段先介紹了這個人是誰，第二段描寫了這個人身上的品質(zhì)以及對自己的應(yīng)選；最后一段結(jié)尾。各部分內(nèi)容安排合理，主次分明。其次短文中使用了正確的人稱和時態(tài)，文章以第三人稱和第一人稱為主來敘述，主要使用了一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，動詞形式變化準(zhǔn)確，注意了第三人稱單數(shù)形式以及過去式形式的變化，語法規(guī)范。用詞準(zhǔn)確，語言得體，句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。短文中使用了一些較好的句型和短語，如But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng.、Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes.、He doesn39。t talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face.、If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out.、He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and pingpang.、He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he 。6．書面表達(dá)假如你是華,你的英國筆友對中國文化很感興趣,想到中國旅行感受中國文化。你想請他來你的家鄉(xiāng)一安徴一游,請你根據(jù)以下提示用英文給他寫一封電子郵件。1位置:中國東部,安做省南部: :春暖花開,秋季涼爽:山和古村落: :茶、黃梅戲提示詞:黃梅戲 Huangmei Opera注意:,使行文連貫。,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)Dear DaveI know that you are interested in Chinese culture and Im glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not e to Anhui, my home town, to have fun?【答案】Dear Dave，I know you are interested in Chinese culture and I’m glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not e to Anhui, my hometown, to have some fun.Anhui Province lies in the east of China. The best time to e here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats. There are many famous places to see. For example, Mt. Huangshan, where you will see wonderful plants and special rocks. Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on. As a fan of Chinese culture, don’t forget to try green tea in Anhui which smells good and tastes better. What’s more, e and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!Wele to Anhui! I’m looking forward to seeing you here!Yours, Li