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。提示詞語(yǔ): Chinese classes, learn, attend, culture, prepare提示問(wèn)題: ● When and where will the Chinese Summer Camp be held?● What activities will be held at the Chinese Summer Camp?● What is your advice for Jack?Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in ourschool this summer holiday . .Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our school this summer holiday.The Chinese Summer Camp will be held in our school from July 10th to July 30th this summer. The activities of this Chinese Summer Camp are as follows:First, you will attend Chinese classes, learning the meaning of Chinese characters. Second, you will take part in different parties, knowing the history of China and Chinese culture, especially Chinese holidays, which will impress you deeply.What’s more, you will have chances to visit some museums and the Great Wall. What you should prepare is a pair of shoes for the visit. If you have any questions, please tell me. I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】:這是一篇提綱類書面表達(dá),只給了一些要點(diǎn)提示,但都不很明確。學(xué)生除了要把所給要點(diǎn)提示都表達(dá)出來(lái)外,還要進(jìn)行適當(dāng)拓展,使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)。:該題要求寫作體裁為書信格式,所以例文用第一人稱I進(jìn)行寫作,在文章結(jié)尾也按照標(biāo)準(zhǔn)書信格式進(jìn)行了收尾。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)。文章條理分明,三個(gè)要點(diǎn)提示都已表達(dá)清楚,并進(jìn)行了適當(dāng)拓展,所給單詞也都全部用上。:短語(yǔ):as follows,take part in,What’s more,look forward to。句型:被動(dòng)句型,現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ),主語(yǔ)從句。9.(吉林省實(shí)驗(yàn)中考模擬)(B) 《朗讀者》第五期節(jié)目中,主持人在開場(chǎng)白中說(shuō)道:“我們的一生,會(huì)經(jīng)歷很多的第一次,難忘而又寶貴,它意味著我們的成長(zhǎng)?!闭?qǐng)談?wù)勀闳松凶铍y忘的“第一次”,或許是第一次做家務(wù)、第一次旅行、第一次成功……并說(shuō)說(shuō)你從中學(xué)到了什么或有哪些收獲。不少于80詞。(文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名)【答案】The First CookingLast weekend, my parents went out and only I stayed at home. So I had to cook a meal for myself. First I washed the cabbages and then cooked it. But I didn39。t know how to cook them I put too much salt into the cabbages. So they tasted too salty. I had to throw them away. But I didn39。t lose my heart. This weekend, I asked my mother to teach me how to cook. She taught me how much salt I should use. Wow, the cabbages tasted good. My mother praised me and I felt very happy. Now I know that if I try hard, I will succeed.【解析】【分析】本文為材料作文,需要寫出第一次做某事,人生中有許多第一次,可以挑選一件讓自己感覺深刻,并且從中學(xué)到了許多東西的事件來(lái)寫,這樣的話,貼近生活實(shí)際,學(xué)生有話可說(shuō)?!驹斀狻勘疚膶懥宋业牡谝淮巫鲲?,先交代背景知識(shí),因?yàn)楦改覆辉诩?,所以我不得不自己?dòng)手,動(dòng)手做的過(guò)程中,由于沒有經(jīng)驗(yàn),理所當(dāng)然地失敗了。但是,我不能氣餒,要從失敗中找原因,從哪里跌倒,就從哪里起來(lái),所以,第二周,我讓媽媽教我做菜,獲得了成功,而且知道了,只要不放棄,就能獲得成功?!军c(diǎn)睛】本篇作文貼近實(shí)際,每個(gè)人都有第一次,挑選一件自己有話可說(shuō)的來(lái)寫即可。但是需要注意文章邏輯,語(yǔ)篇順序,注意連接詞的使用和長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合。這樣的話,文章符合英文造句習(xí)慣,更容易獲得高分。10.(黑龍江中考模擬)話題作文:構(gòu)建文明和諧的社會(huì)是實(shí)現(xiàn)中國(guó)夢(mèng)的一個(gè)重要組成部分,請(qǐng)你圍繞構(gòu)建和諧社會(huì)(build a harmonious society)寫一篇文章。提示:(1)對(duì)國(guó)家、社會(huì)的熱愛;(2) 對(duì)父母、師長(zhǎng)、同學(xué)的尊重與關(guān)心;(3)對(duì)環(huán)境的保護(hù)。(B)圖示作文:仔細(xì)觀察下列圖片,展開合理想象,寫一篇作文。要求:(1)話題作文或圖示作文任選其一。(2)詞數(shù)在80~100詞之間。(3)要求字跡工整,語(yǔ)法正確,意思連貫,合乎邏輯,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Build a harmonious societyBuilding a “harmonious society” plays an important part in achieving Chinese Dreams. As middle school students, what should we do?First of all, we should love our motherland. Let’s take a great interest in the development of our hometowns and take an active part in our school’s activities. Secondly, let’s fill the world with love. We should show our respect for old people, our parents and our teachers. We should also care for each other and help those in need. Finally, let’s work together to save energy and protect our environment, including animals, trees, flowers and grass.Let’s start right now and try our best a little bit every day, every hour, and every minute!(B) My friend Li Ming had an accident yesterday.When school was over, Li Ming went to play basketball with his classmates on the playground. They played very happily. Suddenly, Li Ming fell down and hurt his legs. He couldn’t help crying. His classmates hurried to take him to the hospital. The doctor looked him over carefully and he had to stay in hospital for a few days. His classmates all went to see him with some flowers. Li Ming felt very happy.What good children his classmates are!【解析】【詳解】A篇:這是一篇話題作文,根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下如何才能構(gòu)建文明和諧的社會(huì)。主要從對(duì)國(guó)家、社會(huì)的熱愛;對(duì)父母、師長(zhǎng)、同學(xué)的尊重與關(guān)心;對(duì)環(huán)境的保護(hù)這三個(gè)方面去介紹。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時(shí),避免使用漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ),盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語(yǔ)。語(yǔ)法要正確,表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣,注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞,注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系,表達(dá)具有條理性。【高分句型一】Let’s take a great interest in the development of our hometowns and take an active part in our school’s activities. 讓我們熱衷于家鄉(xiāng)的發(fā)展,積極參與學(xué)校的各項(xiàng)活動(dòng)。本題是由and 連接的句子。【高分句型二】We should also care for each other and help those in need. 我們也應(yīng)該互相關(guān)心,幫助那些需要幫助的人。這句話的語(yǔ)言很好。B篇:這是一篇圖示作文,根據(jù)圖片的內(nèi)容展開合理想象。圖片顯示的內(nèi)容是:圖一,打籃球;圖二,有一個(gè)學(xué)生摔倒了,腿受傷了;圖三,同學(xué)們趕忙送他去醫(yī)院。圖四,他的同學(xué)帶著花去看他。主要從這四個(gè)方面去介紹。時(shí)態(tài)為一般過(guò)去時(shí),人稱為第三人稱。注意作文中必須包含圖片上的所有信息,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時(shí),避免使用漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ),盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語(yǔ)。語(yǔ)法要正確,表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣,注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞,注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系,表達(dá)具有條理性?!靖叻志湫鸵弧縏he doctor looked him over carefully and he had to stay in hospital for a few days. 醫(yī)生仔細(xì)地檢查了他,他不得不住院幾天。本題是由and 連接的并列句?!靖叻志湫投縒hat good children his classmates are! 他的同學(xué)們多好?。∵@句話是由what引導(dǎo)的感嘆句?!军c(diǎn)睛】A篇:B篇:看圖作文是以圖畫或圖表來(lái)提供目的、對(duì)象、時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、內(nèi)容等情景,要求作者借助圖畫,通過(guò)聯(lián)想將一組畫面的直觀內(nèi)容轉(zhuǎn)換成傳神達(dá)意的文字形式,用于反映圖中所表現(xiàn)的思想內(nèi)容。從寫作體裁上看,可說(shuō)明介紹,可敘事記人、可寫景狀物,也可以發(fā)表議論??磮D作文主要考查考生的觀察能力、分析能力、想象能力、創(chuàng)造能力和語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力。想寫好看圖作文,必須遵循以下步驟:1. 仔細(xì)審題、弄清題目要求首先,必須通讀試題中的每一個(gè)字,認(rèn)真觀察所給的每一幅圖畫,正確理解提示所提出的各種要求,從而明確作文的中心思想,判斷文章的類型、特點(diǎn),了解文章的重點(diǎn)內(nèi)容,力求切中題意。2. 審好圖,確定要素