【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 s opinion, develop bad habits, be rude to, be strict with, make a difference to以及it is a good habit to be honest中it作形式主語(yǔ)。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。【點(diǎn)睛】寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫(xiě)好書(shū)面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料。通常書(shū)面表達(dá)給出的話題是開(kāi)放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀觥⒚鞔_的關(guān)鍵。初寫(xiě)短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作了，在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。7．（河北中考模擬）請(qǐng)以“Never Give Up”為題,寫(xiě)一篇短文,簡(jiǎn)要描述圖中的三個(gè)畫(huà)面,并談?wù)勛约旱南敕?要求:1. 文中不得涉及真實(shí)的人名,校名和地名?2. 可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使短文連貫,通順?3. 詞數(shù):80個(gè)詞左右,已給出的部分不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)?提示詞:the long distance running, the ball throwing, the standing long jump, practiceNever Give UpThe . exam is ing. Students of Grade Nine prepare for it every day. Some______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Never Give Up The . exam is ing. Students of Grade Nine prepare for it every day. Some of the students do longdistance running. After school they run on the playground together. They pete for the first and cheer for the winner. Some students practice the standing long jump. They stand in one line and jump at the same time. The student who jumps farthest must share the experience with his classmates. Others practice balling throwing. Though the ball is very heavy, they throw balls again and again until they are satisfied with the result. Although they are tired every day, they never give up. I cheer for them. I think exercising is very useful to them. First, the students must pass the . exam, for it is very important. Second, if they do sports every day, they will be healthier than before. In a word, they are great. They never give up, and I should learn from them.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇看圖作文，題目中有三張圖片，展示了九年級(jí)的學(xué)生們?cè)跒轶w育測(cè)試做準(zhǔn)備，我們應(yīng)根據(jù)圖片，以Never give up為題，寫(xiě)一篇文章，簡(jiǎn)要描述三個(gè)畫(huà)面，并談一談自己的想法。寫(xiě)作之前，應(yīng)仔細(xì)觀察圖片，看清楚圖片展示的內(nèi)容，三張圖片展示了三個(gè)體育項(xiàng)目，跑步、鉛球和跳遠(yuǎn)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)，應(yīng)使用形象、直觀的語(yǔ)言，詳細(xì)介紹圖片中的內(nèi)容，然后組織語(yǔ)言，串聯(lián)成文。文章可以分兩段，第一段介紹圖片內(nèi)容，第二段談?wù)撟约旱南敕āｎ}目中有詞匯的提示，寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意使用。通過(guò)分析可知，這篇短文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，根據(jù)表達(dá)的需要確定應(yīng)使用的時(shí)態(tài)。注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)的不同，不能寫(xiě)漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，而應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，寫(xiě)完整的句子。可以簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，穿插使用并列句和復(fù)合句，調(diào)整文章節(jié)奏，提升文章檔次。語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，以使文意連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文的描述符合圖片中的內(nèi)容，敘述非常詳細(xì)，并對(duì)圖片展開(kāi)了合理的想象，使文章的內(nèi)容更加豐富。第二段中發(fā)表了自己的感想，升華了文章的主題。其次短文中句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，語(yǔ)言得體。短文以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，正確使用了謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的形式。句子結(jié)構(gòu)以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，也使用了賓語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句、定語(yǔ)從句等復(fù)合句，提升了文章檔次和水平，整篇文章表達(dá)流暢。短文中使用了較豐富的句型和短語(yǔ)，如They pete for the first and cheer for the winner.、The student who jumps farthest must share the experience with his classmates.、Though the ball is very heavy, they throw balls again and again until they are satisfied with the result.、I think exercising is very useful to them.、Second, if they do sports every day, they will be healthier than 。8．（黑龍江中考模擬）（B）圖示作文：根據(jù)圖畫(huà)內(nèi)容，展開(kāi)想象，寫(xiě)一篇小短文。小安是一名初三的學(xué)生，運(yùn)動(dòng)讓他的生活發(fā)生了巨大的變化。請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給圖畫(huà)，展開(kāi)適當(dāng)?shù)穆?lián)想，完成下面的短文。要求：（1）話題作文或圖示作文任選其一。（2）詞數(shù)在80?100詞之間。（3）要求字跡工整，語(yǔ)法正確，意思連貫，合乎邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮?！敬鸢浮縎port makes a differenceXiao An is a Grade 9 student. He used to be very weak and had to take a lot of medicine. He wanted to be as healthy as his classmates, so he decided to do sports.He joined Zhao Yang Football club and practiced hard there. Because of football, his life has changed a lot. He finds himself much healthier than before. Now, he has grown into a tall and strong guy. What’s more, he is very good at playing football. Last month, he took part in School Football Match and won the Best Player Award. Xiao An needn’t take a lot of medicine any more. Sport makes a great difference to his life.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于圖畫(huà)作文，表達(dá)運(yùn)動(dòng)讓小安的生活發(fā)生了巨大的變化。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如used to do, take medicine, as+形容詞原級(jí)+as, decide to do, because of, what’s more, be good at, take part in, not...any more以及make a great difference等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。9．（浙江中考模擬） 為響應(yīng)我市全面創(chuàng)建國(guó)家文明城市的號(hào)召，麗水市中小學(xué)開(kāi)展“文明城市，健康生活”為主題的英語(yǔ)征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你以“The Civilized City, the Healthy Life”為題，根據(jù)表格中的圖片及文字提示，簡(jiǎn)要描述并適當(dāng)發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。Subject The Civilized City, the Healthy LifeWays of doing ride bikes, reduce air pollution, throw rubbish into the bins, keep the city clean, plant more trees,…Your opinion……（至少2條）注意：（1）詞數(shù)80100左右，短文開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；（2）文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校及自己的姓名。The Civilized City, the Healthy LifeAs a citizen of Lishui, it’s our duty to____________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】The Civilized City, the Healthy LifeAs a citizen of Lishui, it’s our duty to help build a civilized city so that we can live a heal