【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 的能力?？忌荒苓z漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和高分句式，語言要規(guī)范，信息表達清晰、完整，意思連貫。要學(xué)以致用。注意書寫的規(guī)范：大小寫、標(biāo)點符號等的正確運用。注意檢查：單詞拼寫、語法、動詞時態(tài)、語序、主謂一致等。8．（江蘇省運河中學(xué)中考模擬）書面表達。根據(jù)下列圖畫，寫一篇80詞左右的短文。提示詞：bucket n. 水桶，tap n. 水龍頭___________________________________________________________________________________【答案】A little boy saw an old woman carrying a bucket to fetch water. He rushed forward to help Grandma fetch water, but he was so short that he could not reach the tap. At this time, a big sister saw that he helped him turn on the water pipe and fill the water. The little boy took the water to Grandma. Grandma was very grateful to the little boy. We should also learn from that little boy.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇看圖作文，考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。要求介紹。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等?！军c睛】這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。如At this time, a big sister saw that he helped him turn on the water pipe and fill the water給文章增色不少。9．（河南中考模擬）書面表達。因?qū)W習(xí)壓力大，部分中學(xué)生的身體健康狀況有所下降，這一情況已經(jīng)引起社會的關(guān)注和教育部門的高度重視。假若你是來自九年級三班的李華，請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容，用英語寫一份不少于80詞的倡議書。建議大家積極多參加體育活動，提高身體素質(zhì)。不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名。要點：1. 鍛煉身體的好處： strong， healthy...2. 鍛煉身體的方式： play ball games， running， swimming...3. 請你談?wù)剬W(xué)校開展體育鍛煉的看法和建議。要求：1. 內(nèi)容必須包括以上要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；3. 語句通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；4. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名及校名。Dear schoolmates,I am Li Hua from Class Three, Grade Nine. Health is very important to us teenagers. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Li Hua【答案】Dear shoolmates,I am Li Hua from Class Three,Grade Nine. Health is very important to us teenagers. Either study or work is based on a strong body. Doing sports every day helps us keep healthy. If we don’t take any exercise, we may feel tired and get sick easily. Just as we often say, “Exercise one hour a day keeps illness away. ”There are many kinds of sports we can do, such as running, swimming and playing ball games. But we have to do too much homework after school, I hope teachers will give us less homework so that we can have more time to take part in sports. I also hope our school can organize more sports activities for us. In order to build ourselves stronger and stronger,let’s take active part in all kinds of sports in proper time. Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文。講述鍛煉身體的好處、鍛煉的方式，并建議大家積極參加體育活動。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如either...or..., be based on, keep healthy, such as, have time to do, take part in, in order to, stronger and stronger以及all kinds of等，增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。【點睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達的關(guān)鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。10．（河南中考模擬）書面表達你們學(xué)校的生活豐富多彩嗎？請以“Colorful weekdays”為題，介紹一下你們學(xué)校周一至周五（weekdays）都有哪些課外活動。要求：1. 語意連貫，層次清晰；2. 要有評價性描述；3. 詞數(shù)80左右?！敬鸢浮緾olorful weekdaysIt is my honor to show you our colorful activities and today I mainly tell you something about the part time activities in my school. Here is an introduction of my school’s part time activity. Our school has various activities after class. The activities begin at 4：20 and end at 5：20 every day. The groups on different subjects include sightseeing, speech contests, art festival, volunteer activities, and sports meeting and so on. Among them, I would like to take part in the sightseeing and art festival the most. Because the activities are wonderful.So I really hope that we can have less homework so we can have more time to participate in the part time activities to relax ourselves. Hope you can join us and enjoy every moment in my school!【解析】話題作文寫出的句子要達意，完整，語法正確，合乎習(xí)慣，特別是句式，謂語動詞形式要有根有據(jù)，選用比較有把握的詞匯，用恰當(dāng)?shù)木湫蛯懗龃_切反映內(nèi)容要求的句子。英語作文要注意人稱和時態(tài)，注意提供的觀點、材料，要注意句子的完整性，謂語動詞的正確形式，句子之間的銜接和過渡。英語作文，要忠實于材料，不必擴展，注意用好連詞，多用非謂語，慎用較難的句型，一定不能寫錯句。11．（江蘇中考模擬）假定你是David，來自美國，你的好友Li Ming想要在今年的暑假去做志愿者，他來信向你了解有關(guān)這方面的情況。請認真閱讀下面的郵件，并根據(jù)信中的內(nèi)容和實際用英語回復(fù)，可以有適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。To: davidwoodlandschool@From: limingsunshineschool@Subject: VolunteeringDear David， I’m writing to ask you for advice. I know you often do volunteer work in your free time. I’m interested in it very much. I’m going to do some this summer vacation. But I know little about it. Could you help me answer the following questions? ●Why do you want to be a volunteer? ●What kind of vo1unteer work is suitable for us students? ●Do you have any problems with volunteering? ●If my parents don’t allow me to do so, what should I do? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best wishes， Li Ming注意：?；貜?fù)信的開頭和結(jié)尾己經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。、校名等相關(guān)信息。Dear Li Ming,Thanks for your letter. I39。m glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer your questions.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________