【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 in our life, we should never give up. 【解析】【詳解】本文要記述自己經(jīng)歷過(guò)的一件小事, 在時(shí)態(tài)上用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。本篇文章,首先開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題,指出事情發(fā)生的時(shí)間及所經(jīng)歷的事件。It was a sunny and warm day. My father told me he would teach me how to ride a ，詞語(yǔ)at first，However,…. After one hour,的使用使整篇文章渾然一體。最后一段是從這件小事中得出的感悟，It tells me that although we will have all kinds of difficulties in our life, we should never give up. 對(duì)這件小事進(jìn)行了總結(jié)，更使文章在思想上得到了升華。文章時(shí)態(tài)使用正確，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，事件本身思路清晰，是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。【點(diǎn)睛】認(rèn)真審題，看清題目要求，在描述事件時(shí)，要注意清晰表達(dá)事情發(fā)生的開(kāi)端，內(nèi)容及結(jié)尾。必要時(shí)要適當(dāng)使用連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢，文章最后注意對(duì)整個(gè)故事進(jìn)行總結(jié)，最好能夠從故事中得出自己的感悟，在敘述故事的同時(shí)使文章具有思想性。寫(xiě)完文章后注意檢查有誤單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤，語(yǔ)法使用錯(cuò)誤，字?jǐn)?shù)是否達(dá)到要求。8．（江蘇中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)隨著中國(guó)國(guó)際地位的日益提高，越來(lái)越多的外國(guó)友人開(kāi)始關(guān)注中國(guó)。假定你是李明，你最近認(rèn)識(shí)的澳大利亞筆友David給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件，想更多地了解中國(guó)。請(qǐng)認(rèn)真閱讀下面的郵件，并根據(jù)信中的內(nèi)容及你的了解用英語(yǔ)回復(fù)。To: Li Ming@ 163. From: David@ bigpond. Dear Li Ming,How are you? Is everything going smoothly? It39。s February. It39。s very hot in Australia nowand I39。m having a long summer vacation. I39。m making a trip plan to China these days. Would youplease tell me more about China?●What39。s the season in China now?●What39。s the most popular festival at this time of the year and what do you do during thefestival?●Which city in China is worth a visit and what can I do there?●What gifts can I choose for my Australian friends and relatives?I look forward to hearing from you soon.Best wishesDavid注意事項(xiàng):，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，要求語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫。，信的首尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。、校名等相關(guān)信息。Dear David,I39。m really happy to tell you something interesting about China. China is a country with a long history. I39。m sure you39。ll have a wonderful time here.Yours sincerely,Li Ming【答案】Dear Thomas,I’m really happy to tell you something interesting about China. China is a country with along history.It is winter now and Spring Festival is the most popular at this time of year. Family members get together and then have a big dinner, After that, they watch lion dances and fireworks.“East or west, Gulin landscape is best.” Guilin is worth a visit if you like natural views. You can take a boat trip along the Lijiang Rive or ride around the countryside. It is great fun.Guilin is a special city with strong local colour. You can choose many excellent gifts there, such as Chinese paintings, paper fans and colorful clothes. I’m sure you’ll have a wonderful time here.Yours sincerely.Li Hua【解析】【詳解】這是一篇書(shū)信作文，根據(jù)電子郵件中的相關(guān)信息向澳大利亞筆友David介紹一下中國(guó)。所提供的材料中問(wèn)到了關(guān)于中國(guó)的幾個(gè)問(wèn)題：●What39。s the season in China now? ●What39。s the most popular festival at this time of the year and what do you do during the festival? ●Which city in China is worth a visit and what can I do there? ●What gifts can I choose for my Australian friends and relatives? 主要從這幾個(gè)方面去介紹。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第三人稱。注意作文中必須包含電子郵件上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，避免使用漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語(yǔ)。語(yǔ)法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。【高分句型一】Guilin is worth a visit if you like natural views. 如果你喜歡自然風(fēng)光，桂林值得一游。句子if you like natural ?！靖叻志湫投縄’m sure you’ll have a wonderful time here. 我相信你會(huì)在這里過(guò)得很愉快。you’ll have a wonderful time here. 是賓語(yǔ)從句。9．（靖江市第三中學(xué)中考模擬） 年11月15日泰州市召開(kāi)了深化全國(guó)文明城市創(chuàng)建迎檢部署會(huì)，會(huì)上我市正式啟動(dòng)了“泰有禮”全民主題實(shí)踐活動(dòng)，形成崇德向善、文明有禮的道德風(fēng)尚和城市標(biāo)識(shí)，同時(shí)組織“泰有禮”志愿服務(wù)隊(duì)伍，圍繞“文明禮讓”“文明交通”“文明餐飲”“文明上網(wǎng)”等文明實(shí)踐活動(dòng)，承擔(dān)起對(duì)市民日常行為進(jìn)行勸導(dǎo)的責(zé)任。假如你是其中的一名志愿者，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫(xiě)一篇150字左右的英語(yǔ)短文。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。（以上背景內(nèi)容無(wú)需表達(dá)） 內(nèi)容提示： ，幫助他們做家務(wù)活；，排隊(duì)候車，不隨地吐痰、不亂扔垃圾；不在公共場(chǎng)所抽煙、喧嘩（比如在圖書(shū)館或博物館），不撒謊，不說(shuō)臟話；，幫助別人；坐車時(shí)請(qǐng)讓座給老人，殘疾人，尤其抱小孩的婦女；，做到紅燈停，綠燈行；。 要求：，字跡工整：可圍繞主題適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；、校名、地名成其他真實(shí)信息；As a member of the city, I think we should______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’m sure our city will bee more and more beautiful and cleaner as long as we all try our best to do something for it!【答案】As a member of the city, I think we should respect our parents at home, and help them with the housework. While we are travelling, we should pay attention to our own behavior, such as waiting for a bus in line. We should never spit or litter everywhere. What’s more, we can’t smoke or talk aloud in public, such as in the library or the museum. During our daily lives, we ought to be honest, never tell lies or say bad words because it’s rude to others. Also we should be polite and helpful to others. When we are on the bus, we can give our seats to the old and the disabled, especially the women with babies in their arms. And we should obey the traffic rules. Remember to stop when the traffic light is red and walk when the traffic light is green. Don39。t forget to protect our environment. Though we are young, we can still do something to help. I’m sure our city will bee more and more beautiful and cleaner as long as we all try our best to do something for it!【解析】【詳解】本文就具體的話題給出一定的范圍。所以用得特別多的句式是we should| ought to do sth ……。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示，至少包括五個(gè)點(diǎn)：we should respect our parents at home。While we are travelling, we should pay attention to our own behavior。We should never spit or litter everywhere。we ought to be honest, never tell lies or say bad words。及we should be polite and helpful to others等。Don39。t forget to protect our environment補(bǔ)充作者個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)。最后用I’m sure our city will bee more and more beautiful and cleaner as long as we all try our best to do something for it!總結(jié)全文，表達(dá)每個(gè)人都出一份力，我們的城市會(huì)越來(lái)越美。文中針對(duì)現(xiàn)象提出想法，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，且用第一人稱陳述?！军c(diǎn)睛】10．（廣東中考模擬）