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But I don39。t think so.In my opinion,to read books is more valuable than anything else.The old sayingTo open a book is always helpfulclearly tells us how good it is to read a book.Books are our friends.They introduce us different kinds of knowledge.They lead us down the road to success.Books are our teachers.They teach us troth,science,literature,and philosophy of life.Besides,they increase our knowledge,enlarge our experience,strengthen our character and do many other things which we can not do without them.Books tell us what is good and what is evil.And only books can tell the good from the bad.Therefore to read more books is the best policy for our young students.As a middle school student.I think we should read more books.Reading is good for our physical and mental health. Let39。s be active readers and enjoy reading.【解析】這是一篇材料作文,行文之前,把表格里的要點內(nèi)容通讀一遍,做出框架,開始寫作時,把表格里所列內(nèi)容全部表述到文章中,并且自己適當增加內(nèi)容,注意人稱、時態(tài)、單復(fù)數(shù),詞形的變化。適當增加銜接詞,使文章更出彩。如對長句不好把握,就盡量使用短句。14.(北京中考模擬)作為初三畢業(yè)生,你們首次參加了“英語聽說機考”(the English Listening and Speaking Online Test)。你應(yīng)邀為初一初二的學弟學妹們做聽說機考的經(jīng)驗介紹。請你用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿,談?wù)勀銓τ⒄Z聽說機考有什么認識,在考試中需要做什么以及你想對他們提出哪些建議。提示詞語:necessary, answer questions, take notes, retell, read a passage aloud提示問題: What do you think of theEnglish Listening and Speaking Online Test? What do they need to do in the test?What suggestions do you want to give them?Good morning, everybody. I’m glad that I can share something about theEnglish Listening and Speaking Online Test with you.Thanks for listening!【答案】Good morning, everybody. I’m glad that I can share something aboutthe English Listening amp。 Speaking Online Test with you. I think it is necessary for us to take the listening and speaking test. In the test, you need to listen and choose the best answer and you will listen and answer the questions. Next, you’ll listen and take notes and then you will listen and retell the passage according to the notes. Finally, you’ll read a passage aloud. If you want to improve your listening and speaking, you should listen more and read aloud. At the same time, you’d better pay more attention to your pronunciation. What’s more, you can practice retelling. It is a good idea to retell the passage that you’ve just learnt. Practice makes perfect. Wish you success. Thank you for listening.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文,為初一初二的學弟學妹們做聽說機考的經(jīng)驗介紹。結(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時,人稱為第一,二人稱,注意主謂一致問題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用,比如:I’m glad that……,I think……,If you want to……,you’d better……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞,注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系。點睛:本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語言簡練。開頭介紹了我對英語聽說機考的認識,接下來介紹你們在考試中需要做什么,最后給出一些建議。此處share sth with sb, need to do sth, take notes, want to do sth, at the same time, pay attention to等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。15.(江蘇中考模擬)書面表達。隨著連云港經(jīng)濟的發(fā)展,私家車的數(shù)量不斷攀升,而同時我們的空氣污染越發(fā)嚴重,去年我們經(jīng)歷了柳絮漫天飛舞以及數(shù)個霧霾天氣(hazy days),生活環(huán)境日趨惡化。就此,你班展開討論美麗連云港應(yīng)該從何做起,請你根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英語短文,并談?wù)勛约旱挠^點。連云港現(xiàn)狀美麗連云港從我做起未來展望①車輛越來越多②空氣越來越差③…….①出門坐公交,步行,騎車②……③…….①水更清,天更藍②……注意:,可適當發(fā)揮,使文章連貫;;開頭已經(jīng)為你寫好,不計入總詞數(shù);。Make Lianyungang More BeautifulWith the development of Lianyungang, more and more families have their own cars.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Make Lianyungang More BeautifulWith the development of Lianyungang, more and more families have their own cars. As a result, there is too much traffic on the road and the air pollution bees worse and worse. It has bee impossible for us to see the clear sky as often as before. This not only has a bad effect on our daily life but also does harm to our health. It39。s a worrying problem. Therefore, action should be taken to deal with this problem. I think there are many things we can do to help. We can take a bus, ride a bike or go somewhere on foot. What39。s more, more trees and grass should be planted to reduce the pollution.. If we try our best, I believe in the future we will have more clear days and clean rivers. Let39。s work together to make a difference to our homeland!【解析】寫作分析:這篇書面表達的背景是空氣污染越來越嚴重,生活環(huán)境在不斷惡化,需要完成的寫作任務(wù)是,描述連云港的現(xiàn)狀講一講如何從我做起建設(shè)美麗連云港對未來的結(jié)果進行展望。需要注意的是正確使用相關(guān)短語表達和時態(tài),尤其是在描述展望未來時需要借助將來時,各個部分之間要注意合理連接,保證文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整,語言連貫。寫作亮點:文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出來了,于是可以開始正文的敘述,首先是描述現(xiàn)狀,用到的短語表達準確,例如too much traffic on the road道路上車輛過多,bees worse and ,does harm to our health對我們的健康有害,也用到了很實用的句型It has bee impossible for us to do…做…對于我們來說已經(jīng)變得不可能了。在銜接下一部分“采取措施”時,用了一句話過度,Therefore, action should be taken to deal with this problem.(因此,應(yīng)該采取行動來解決這個問題。),最后有對未來的展望,用到了條件句的主將從現(xiàn),也用到了Let39。s work together to do讓我們一起來做…這樣的句型,總體來說文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整,完成了要求的寫作任務(wù)。16.(四川中考模擬) 書面表達時間對每個人來說都是寶貴的,那么怎樣才能更好地利用時間呢?請用英語寫一篇題目為“How to save time”的作文。內(nèi)容包括:1. 時間的意義和重要性; (至少3種);3. 節(jié)省時間的方法(至少3個);4. 號召大家節(jié)約時間。作文要求:1. 語句連貫,條理清楚,不得抄襲原文,書寫工整;2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱;3. 詞數(shù)80左右。How to save time__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】How to save timeWe have ever heard of “Time is money. Time is life”.Time is very important to everyone. But we can see people waste their time everywhere. They spend much time playing puter games, drinking, sleeping late in the morning and so on. It’s necessary for us to save our valuable time. We have to listen to our teachers carefully in class so that we can save mo