【正文】 keep healthy. Secondly, you can join in some club activities to make school life more colorful in your spare time. In other words, please keep balance between school life and study. In addition, it is a good choice to make more friends and read more books. At last, if you have problems in school life, please talk with your teachers or parents. They are always there waiting for you. I hope you will have a wonderful school life.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，自己即將畢業(yè)，給七年級新生的學習生活提幾點建議。結合所給的材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時，以第一人稱為主，要注意主謂一致，所寫的句子要符合英語語法，用自己熟悉的單詞和句式來寫。寫作亮點：本文結構緊湊，開頭兩句很自然地過渡到正文上來。用了短語和句式，如：graduate from畢業(yè)于；share sth with sb和某人分享某事；wait for等候等，用來一些過渡詞或短語，如：Firstly, Secondly,In other words, At last等，上下文銜接很自然。14．（海南中考模擬）書面表達年1月以來，瓊海市開始推廣使用共享單車，你對這一舉措有什么看法？請根據(jù)下面的表格提示內(nèi)容寫一篇短文，談談共享單車的利弊及使用共享單車的建議，以便在英語課上與同學們交流。shared bikesadvantages: save energy, air pollutiondisadvantages: park in wrong places, bike accidentssuggestions: follow the traffic rules, care for bikes, don’t bring home要求：1. 語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；2. 必須包含所給提示，但不要逐字翻譯，并做適當發(fā)揮；3. 行文中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名、校名或地名；4. 詞數(shù)80左右。（文章開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）Recently shared bikes can be seen everywhere on the street in Qionghai. Many people use them for work, for sport or just for fun. I think … What’s your opinion about shared bikes? Will you choose one as your everyday vehicle?【答案】Recently shared bikes can be seen everywhere on the street in Qionghai. Many people use them for work, for sport or just for fun. I think it’s a good idea. As we know cycling can help us save energy and it can greatly reduce air pollution. What’s more, it costs little to use them. However, some people park bikes in wrong places after they use them. Sometimes it’s hard to find a bike on the street. And bicycle accidents do happen once in a while, so we must be careful when riding. Never ride too fast and always follow the traffic rules. At the same time, everyone is supposed to care for the bikes. Don’t bring it home or keep it your own. What’s your opinion about shared bikes? Will you choose one as your everyday vehicle?【解析】亮點說明：這篇習作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如on the street，a good idea，as we know，help sb. do sth.，save energy，what’s more，park bikes，in wrong places，once in a while，be careful，at the same time等。而As we know cycling can help us save energy and it can greatly reduce air pollution./ What’s more, it costs little to use them. / At the same time, everyone is supposed to care for the ，豐富了習作內(nèi)容，使表達多樣，是本文的最大亮點。點睛：書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數(shù)。15．（湖北中考模擬）書面表達Relationship and Emotional Attitude （人際關系和情感態(tài)度）現(xiàn)在社會普遍對90后，00后有一些誤解， 認為他們自私、無禮，所以不能很好地與 人溝通，那么，作為一名00后學生，你又是怎么看待這個問題的呢? 請結合你自己和周圍同學的表現(xiàn)，分別列舉至少三條優(yōu)點和兩條不足之處進行描述。要求：，可適當發(fā)揮?！敬鸢浮緼s students born after 1990, we have so many advantages. We are usually kind and helpful. When someone is in trouble, we always give him or her a hand. We are also active. We like to do sports and go traveling. Most of us can work hard in class and play happily after school. Besides, we are imaginative and creative. We always try something new and do everything differently. On the other hand, we also have some disadvantages. Sometimes we can’t express our opinions in proper ways。 sometimes we are a little over confident. And many students have no brothers or sisters, so they may do everything for themselves. These problems may make us seem impolite, even we can’t municate with others well. So it’s the most important for us to learn how to get on well with others.【解析】本文內(nèi)容應包含題目中所提供的所有信息。靈活運用各種句式，采用不同的表達方式將各個要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確，簡潔。最后必須認真查驗是否有漏寫，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。點睛：這篇文章使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如in trouble；do sports；On the other hand ；municate with等；When；Besides ；And ；So等的運用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理；同時語言流暢，內(nèi)容完整，是一篇不錯的范文。16．（山東中考模擬）書面表達有沒有那么一件事是你一直想做的，但又因為種種原因遲遲未付諸行動？也許是被擱置的新年愿望，或許是對父母的一句“我愛你”，抑或是一直沒有動身前往的地方？請將“It’s never too late to ...”補充完整，并以此為題寫一篇英語作文。詞數(shù)：不少于100詞。要點：1. 寫一件讓你心心念念的事；2. 談談你一直想做這件事，但沒能實現(xiàn)的原因；3. 談談你下一步的計劃。注意: ，可適當發(fā)揮；、校名等相關信息?！敬鸢浮縄t’s never too late to fulfill my promiseMolly and I used to go to the beach and watch the sunrise together. She said that she wanted to go to Hainan with me and see the beautiful scenery when we grow up. I happily agreed.Ten years had passed since I made that promise. However, I didn’t do anything about the promise because I was busy with my study. My mother also disagreed with me. “You should know study is the top priority （首要任務） for a student. You are just a teenage girl, there’s no way you can go there without an adult’s help.” I always felt upset when my mother said something like this.I talked to Molly about it. “My mother won’t allow me.” I sighed （嘆息）. “It’s a really long way. What should we do?” said Molly. “I don’t know.” I replied, “But we can make a plan by choosing a perfect time first.”“I’d like to set off when the summer holiday begins,” she said. “We can go there with both our parents. I want us to go there together. Just the way I have promised you.” I said.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，將“It’s never too late to ...”補充完整，并以此為題寫一篇英語作文。結合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般過去時，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構和動賓結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：Molly and I used to……，She said that……，I didn’t do……，I talked to……等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系。點睛：本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我想長大了去海南看美麗的風景，接下來介紹我一直想做這件事，但沒能實現(xiàn)的原因，最后介紹我下一步的計劃。此處used to do sth, want to do sth, grow up, be busy with, by doing sth, set off等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增