【正文】 ’s our duty to protect the environment. We mustn’t throw litter or rubbish about and we should take care of trees and flowers.Third，it’s necessary for us to show good manners to others/ be polite to others. We need to say polite words such as“Thank You. I’m sorry and Please” as often as possible.Finally, we should devote ourselves to helping others. We should learn from Lei Feng and be willing to help others. It’s important for us to take part in voluntary work.We should try our best to make our city more and more beautiful!【解析】本文是一篇給材料作文。為使?jié)鲜腥脒x全國文明城市，鞏固文明城市創(chuàng)建成果，共建美好濟南，濟南市團委開展“學雷鋒、講文明、樹新風”的活動，作為一名中學生，我們平時應該規(guī)范自己的言行舉止。要求根據(jù)所給出的提示，寫一篇短文。根據(jù)所給材料可知時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱用第一人稱。本文給出的材料比較具體全面，考生需要用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達出來，并可進行適當想象發(fā)揮。寫作中注意理順要點，防止漏寫，注意表達的條理性、連貫性；注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤；要使用自己有把握的句式、單詞，詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，避免句式單一。最后檢查所用時態(tài)、人稱是否符合要求；檢查段落是否完整，句子表達是否準確，語法、拼寫、標點、移行、大小寫等方面是否有誤等。點睛：首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當運用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后要細心復核檢查，確保正確無誤。15．（北京中考模擬）作為初三畢業(yè)生，你們首次參加了“英語聽說機考”（the English Listening and Speaking Online Test）。你應邀為初一初二的學弟學妹們做聽說機考的經(jīng)驗介紹。請你用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，談談你對英語聽說機考有什么認識，在考試中需要做什么以及你想對他們提出哪些建議。提示詞語：necessary, answer questions, take notes, retell, read a passage aloud提示問題： What do you think of theEnglish Listening and Speaking Online Test? What do they need to do in the test?What suggestions do you want to give them?Good morning, everybody. I’m glad that I can share something about theEnglish Listening and Speaking Online Test with you.Thanks for listening!【答案】Good morning, everybody. I’m glad that I can share something aboutthe English Listening amp。 Speaking Online Test with you. I think it is necessary for us to take the listening and speaking test. In the test, you need to listen and choose the best answer and you will listen and answer the questions. Next, you’ll listen and take notes and then you will listen and retell the passage according to the notes. Finally, you’ll read a passage aloud. If you want to improve your listening and speaking, you should listen more and read aloud. At the same time, you’d better pay more attention to your pronunciation. What’s more, you can practice retelling. It is a good idea to retell the passage that you’ve just learnt. Practice makes perfect. Wish you success. Thank you for listening.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，為初一初二的學弟學妹們做聽說機考的經(jīng)驗介紹。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時，人稱為第一，二人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構主要為系表結(jié)構和動賓結(jié)構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：I’m glad that……，I think……，If you want to……，you’d better……等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系。點睛：本文結(jié)構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我對英語聽說機考的認識，接下來介紹你們在考試中需要做什么，最后給出一些建議。此處share sth with sb, need to do sth, take notes, want to do sth, at the same time, pay attention to等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。16．（江蘇中考模擬）寫作81. 春天，許多人都喜歡參加各種戶外活動。為了倡導中學生接近大自然，某中學生英文報舉辦了一次征文活動，請你根據(jù)以下問題，用英語寫一篇短文參加征文。提示：1）What’s the benefit （好處） of outdoor activities? （12 opinions）2）Which is your favourite outdoor activity? How and why? （12 examples）3）What do we need to pay attention to when we do outdoor activities? （At least 1 suggestion）要求：1）表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；2）必須包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求適當發(fā)揮；3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入詞數(shù)；4）不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s great to get close to nature. 【答案】It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s a good way to get close to nature.When we are outdoors and in the natural world, we can not only breathe fresh air and enjoy the beautiful scene, but also relax ourselves for the ing study or work.There are many different ways we can get out into the natural world, such as hiking, cycling, camping and climbing. Cycling is my favourite. I join a cycling club, and often go out with other members. While cycling, we can forget our worries and have fun together. Also, we can learn to be a part of a team and help each other.Whatever you do, remember to stay safe. When you’re outside, it’s better to be with your parents or friends.【解析】試題分析：本篇書面表達以“outdoor activities”為話題，結(jié)合所給的寫作材料，寫一篇報刊征文稿。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文會使用到一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意一些常見句式的應用。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系，最后最好要表達出人物的感想和看法。寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構緊湊，語言簡練、要點齊全。文中in the natural world, not only…but also, get out, such as, also等詞（組）的恰當使用，使上下文意連接緊密；本文還采用了豐富的句型，比如：It is +形容詞+（for sb.） to do sth.；There be句型；時間狀語從句等復合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，這是一篇不錯的范文。17．（四川中考模擬）近年來霧霾天氣在中國許多城市頻頻發(fā)生。霧霾天氣引起大家極大的關注。請你用英語寫一篇有關霧霾的短文向校刊“英語角”投稿,內(nèi)容包括：1. 霧霾的危害 2. 霧霾產(chǎn)生的原因（2個） 3. 應對霧霾的措施（3個）提示：霧霾 smog poisonous 有毒的注意：1. 詞數(shù)110左右； 2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫； 3. 開頭語已為你寫好（不計入總詞數(shù)）。In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________