【正文】 Hua【答案】Dear Billy,It’s my great pleasure to receive your . You wanted to know about my usual exercise. I’ll tell it to you. I am busy preparing for the ing physical test. So I take exercise less than an hour every day. Sometimes I don’t do exercise, because I have so much homework that I have no time to do it. I do well in playing balls.Doing exercise can help me keep a strong body, and it is good for my health. Besides, I think it can make me relaxed by doing exercise. So I advise you to spend more time doing exercise every week.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，給Billy回封電子郵件，介紹自己平時的鍛煉情況，并建議他每周都要花些時間鍛煉身體?！驹斀狻拷Y合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構和動賓結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：I am busy……，because I have……，Doing exercise can help……，So I advise you to……等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系?！军c睛】本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭表示很高興收到Billy的來信，接下來介紹我平時的鍛煉情況，最后指出鍛煉給我?guī)淼暮锰幰约拔医ㄗhBilly要多鍛煉。此處be busy doing sth, prepare for, do well in, be good for, advise sb to do sth等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。13．（廣東中考模擬）近來，野生動物園發(fā)生了老虎傷人的事件。我們作為游客應該如何避免受到野生動物的傷害呢？請根據(jù)下列提示寫一篇短文。提示：1. 遵守動物園的各項規(guī)定；2. 參觀時不要單獨行動；3. 時刻提醒自己安全第一；4. 遇到危險及時求助。要求：（開頭己給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；2. 文章必須包含所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當發(fā)揮；3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和校名；4. 條理清楚，語句通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范。It is reported that tigers hurt people in a zoo. As visitors, what should we do to avoid the hurt? Here are some tips.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】It is reported that tigers hurt people in a zoo. As visitors, what should we do to avoid the hurt? Here are some tips. Firstly, every zoo has its own rules. We must read them before visiting it. Then we will know what to do and what not to do. We must follow the rules while visiting the zoo. Secondly, we had better go anywhere with our parents or friends in the zoo. Thirdly, we should remember that safety es first all the time. We neither go to the dangerous places nor do the dangerous things. Finally, we must ask for help as soon as possible when we are in danger.I believe we will be safe in the zoo if we do so.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇提綱作文。題干列出了四點內(nèi)容，故第一段使用Firstly，Secondly，Thirdly和Finally進行分條陳述，使文章層次分明、邏輯性強，每點要適當增加內(nèi)容，比如這樣做的原因或好處等；第二段用一句話“I believe we will be safe in the zoo if we do so.”進行總結。根據(jù)提示，使用到的單詞和短語有rule，follow，e first，dangerous，ask for help，in danger好單詞：rule 規(guī)則follow 遵循dangerous 危險的好短語：had better do sth. 最好做某事e first 首先要考慮到的ask for help 尋求幫助as soon as possible 盡快in danger 處于危險中好句型：We must read them before visiting it. 我們必須在參觀它之前閱讀它們。before引導時間狀語從句，當主從句主語一致而從句是進行時時，從句省略主語和be。We must follow the rules while visiting the zoo. 參觀動物園時我們必須遵守規(guī)定。while引導時間狀語從句，當主從句主語一致而從句是進行時時，從句省略主語和be。We neither go to the dangerous places nor do the dangerous things. 我們既不去危險的地方，也不做危險的事情。使用了“neither…nor… 既不……也不……”。14．（海林市朝鮮族中學中考模擬）（A） 今天是周日，你（David）邀請你的朋友（John）晚六點去看電影，但他不知道電影院在哪兒，你發(fā)了一條微信和路線圖，請他按照路線圖來電影院。格式和開頭已給出。Dear John,The movie theater is not very far. Go out of your home and__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________David【答案】Dear John,The movie theater is not very far. Go out of your home and turn left. Go along Buxing Street and turn right at the first crossing. Go straight till you see a post office on your right. The movie theater is just across from the post office. Let us meet there at 6:00 . David【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，告訴約翰如何到達電影院。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內(nèi)容。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如turn left, go along, turn right, at the first crossing, go straight, across from以及l(fā)et sb do。增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。15．（山東中考模擬）寫作讀萬卷書,行萬里路。為幫助中小學生了解國情、熱愛祖國、開闊眼界、增長知識,提高社會責任感、創(chuàng)新精神和實踐能力,教育部倡導開展“研學旅行 （study tour）”活動。你校也計劃開展此項活動,但是有些學生表示歡迎,也有些表示反對。請你以 My Opinions onStudy Tour為題,寫一篇英語短文,談談你的看法并說明理由。要求,可適當發(fā)揮,以使行文連貫。、校名:80100（文章開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)）?？蓞⒖家韵略~匯the sense of social responsibility社會責任感。 creative spirit創(chuàng)新精神。 practical ability實踐能力My Opinions on Study TourIn recent years, many primary and middle schools have been organizing study tours forStudents 【答案】My Opinions on Study TourIn recent years, many primary and middle schools have been organizing study tours forstudents so that they can have a better understanding of life and students are crazy about such tours while others show their great concerns.Personally ,I think study tours play a critical role in developing students’ study of the time,studennts acquire knowledge and skills from walking out of the campus,they can learn through their own experiences and