【正文】 在時態(tài)。在介紹長相時用“be+形容詞”來描述人物的身高、體重、身材等；用“have/has + （straight/curly） hair / （big/small） eyes/nose/mouth”來描述頭發(fā)或五官。用“wear + 某種衣服”來介紹某人的穿戴。用be good at doing ，用like sth./doing “My/His/her favorite + 名詞+ is …”來介紹某人的最愛。當主語是第三人稱單數(shù)時，注意主謂一致關系。9．隨著網(wǎng)絡的發(fā)展、人們消費觀念的轉變， 購物方式也在悄然的發(fā)生變化?！熬W(wǎng)購”已成為一種時尚，越來越多的學生也加入到網(wǎng)購群體中。請你根據(jù)以下表格的提示，寫一篇網(wǎng)上購物的文章。優(yōu)點（advantage）；節(jié)約時間；避免擁擠、勞累，品種多缺點（disadvantage）， 看不到商品本身， 造成浪費你的觀點……提示詞匯：網(wǎng)購shopping online。 商品 goods。 導致 cause注意：，可適當發(fā)揮；；：100詞左右，文章開頭已給出，但不計入總數(shù)。With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. 【答案】With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has bee fashionable. Some of us students also join the group. Shopping online has many advantages. Just with the click of a mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowds and save a lot of time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower. Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods that aren’t like the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money. All in all, I love shopping online.【解析】本文屬于材料作文，主要講述網(wǎng)購的優(yōu)點和缺點。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內(nèi)容?！玖咙c說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點詞句，如convenient，disadvantage，in good quality，figure out，have the chance to do，be attacked by，of course，take care of等。增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。點睛：寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達的關鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。構思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關的寫作材料。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關鍵。初寫短文。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。10．上周，你們班就初中生能否騎電動自行車上學進行了一次討論?，F(xiàn)在，請你根據(jù)下表用英語寫一篇介紹討論情況的短文。注意：；，書寫工整、規(guī)范；。生詞提示：electric 討論結果25人表示同意35人不同意理由；。，騎電動車不安全；，騎電動車也快不起來?！敬鸢浮縇ast week， our class had a discussion about whether junior students could ride electric bicycles to go to students of our class agreed with it， because they said it was convenient for them and it could takethem less time to go to school. But the other 35 students didn’t agree with them. They said it was not safe forthe junior students to get to school by electric bicycles， for they were too young. They also said in the morningthe traffic was busy and the students couldn’t ride electric bicycles quickly.【解析】試題分析：本題要求以初中生能否騎電動自行車上學進行了一次討論。根據(jù)所給要點寫一篇80100詞左右的英語短文，而且要做到表達清楚，語句通順，意思連貫。根據(jù)所給要點可知，本文主要以一般過去時態(tài)書寫。要注意把每一個要點都表達出來，不要遺漏任何一個，書寫時一定注意時態(tài)的正確使用。觀點分明，談及理由按照要求至少要各寫兩點。并注意上下文要語句貫通。并且要圍繞主題適當發(fā)揮。寫作亮點：短文中作者按照題目的要求，給我們介紹了持不同觀點的學生各自的理由，結構清晰，要點全面。時態(tài)運用正確，書寫工整規(guī)范。該文中以下幾個句子用得很好。Because they said it was convenient for them and it could take them less time to go to school. They also said in the morningthe traffic was busy and the students couldn’t ride electric bicycles ，理由也很充分。考點：提綱類作文。