【正文】 n their child grows up and they grow older, their child may marry with an only child girl accidentally,/ It would be much ，豐富了習作內容，使表達多樣，是本文的最大亮點。點睛：書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內容經整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數。15．（海南中考模擬）書面表達年1月以來，瓊海市開始推廣使用共享單車，你對這一舉措有什么看法？請根據下面的表格提示內容寫一篇短文，談談共享單車的利弊及使用共享單車的建議，以便在英語課上與同學們交流。shared bikesadvantages: save energy, air pollutiondisadvantages: park in wrong places, bike accidentssuggestions: follow the traffic rules, care for bikes, don’t bring home要求：1. 語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；2. 必須包含所給提示，但不要逐字翻譯，并做適當發(fā)揮；3. 行文中不得出現真實人名、校名或地名；4. 詞數80左右。（文章開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數）Recently shared bikes can be seen everywhere on the street in Qionghai. Many people use them for work, for sport or just for fun. I think … What’s your opinion about shared bikes? Will you choose one as your everyday vehicle?【答案】Recently shared bikes can be seen everywhere on the street in Qionghai. Many people use them for work, for sport or just for fun. I think it’s a good idea. As we know cycling can help us save energy and it can greatly reduce air pollution. What’s more, it costs little to use them. However, some people park bikes in wrong places after they use them. Sometimes it’s hard to find a bike on the street. And bicycle accidents do happen once in a while, so we must be careful when riding. Never ride too fast and always follow the traffic rules. At the same time, everyone is supposed to care for the bikes. Don’t bring it home or keep it your own. What’s your opinion about shared bikes? Will you choose one as your everyday vehicle?【解析】亮點說明：這篇習作的層次清晰，內容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如on the street，a good idea，as we know，help sb. do sth.，save energy，what’s more，park bikes，in wrong places，once in a while，be careful，at the same time等。而As we know cycling can help us save energy and it can greatly reduce air pollution./ What’s more, it costs little to use them. / At the same time, everyone is supposed to care for the ，豐富了習作內容，使表達多樣，是本文的最大亮點。點睛：書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內容經整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數。16．（湖北中考模擬）書面表達同學們，三年的初中生活就要結束了，在我們的成長過程中，既有快樂，也有煩惱。請用英文寫一篇短文，內容包括：1．你在學?；蚣依镌浻龅降淖畲髥栴}或煩惱；2．你解決問題或煩惱的過程；3．你的感想。要求： 1．詞數80～100，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數；2．文中不得出現真實的校名與人名。My middle school life is ing to an end .During the three years， ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My middle school life is ing to an end. During the three years，not only did I have happy time, but I had kinds of problems. My biggest problem was too much homework. Homework seemed endless for me. It made me stay up late and feel very tired every day，but I knew the teachers were expecting us to do better，even the best in my lessons.How can I deal with the problem？On the one hand，I concentrated more on my study in class. On the other hand，I did the homework as quickly as possible instead of being slow or absent minded. As a result，I spent less time on homework，and I wasn39。t frustrated any more.As we all know，practice makes perfect. Complaining or waiting can39。t help. Instead we should be active to face our problems.【解析】本文是一篇材料作文。圍繞三年的初中生活展開敘述，寫作前首先要確定三年中遇到的最大問題或煩惱是什么，一件事情即可，然后圍繞這件事情展開敘述，三個寫作要點要面面俱到，可適當發(fā)揮。在寫作時，人稱為第一人稱，因為文章涉及的內容是曾經發(fā)生過的事情，所以時態(tài)應該用一般過去時來描述發(fā)，寫感想可以用一般現在時態(tài)?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縄 did the homework①as quickly as possible ②instead of being slow or absent ，而不是遲鈍或心不在焉。①as…as possible盡可能…②instead of 代替 而不是，后跟動名詞。【高分句型二】As we know，practice makes perfect我們都知道，熟能生巧。practice makes perfect熟能生巧，諺語的運用，為文章增添了色彩。17．（長沙麓山國際實驗學校中考模擬）書面表達 75. 初中生活馬上就要結束了，三年的初中生活一定給你留下了很多揮之不去的回憶。請你給大家講一個最值得你回憶的故事。包括時間、人物、事情經過和事后你的感想要求：（1）應包含以上全部的信息，可適當增加細節(jié)，以使條理清楚、行文連貫；（2）詞數：80字左右（3）短文中不得出現你的真實姓名、學校名和地名。_____________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school in a month. I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you. I had so many memories in three years’ life. One of them impressed me very much. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I’ve bee