【正文】 children in the US died in February./ If you touch your nose or mouth, you can get the flu./ Because some patients pay no attention to the flu, it starts very suddenly and spreads from person to person closely in ，使本文內(nèi)容豐富，表達流暢，是本文的最大亮點。點睛：書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。15．（山東中考模擬）書面表達?，F(xiàn)在各行各業(yè)都在為建設(shè)美麗中國，實現(xiàn)中國夢而奮斗．請根據(jù)下列圖示，談?wù)勔韵聨追N職業(yè)怎樣做貢獻的．作為學(xué)生，你又該怎么辦？要求：短文需包含提示要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和校名；語句通順，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，書寫規(guī)范；詞數(shù)：80詞左右．短文開頭部分已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．Now all the Chinese people are making their efforts to build beautiful China and achieve the Chinese Dream． 【答案】Now all the Chinese people are making their efforts to build beautiful China and achieve the Chinese Dream．In the fields，a large number of farmers work hard every day to improve our living levels．In order to produce enough vegetables and fruit，they are busy growing plants．Meanwhile，in hospitals，doctors and nurses always try their best to save patients day and night．Besides，they also take good care of the old．（醫(yī)生）In our daily life，we can see many policemen in the streets on duty to protect people．（警察）As for scientists，they concentrate more on scientific studies to invent something useful and raise our living standards．（科學(xué)家）As students，what should we do to build our country？I think we should study hard to get rich knowledge so as to make contributions to our country。【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹為建設(shè)美麗中國，實現(xiàn)中國夢，農(nóng)民，醫(yī)生，警察和科學(xué)家怎樣做貢獻的。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Now all the Chinese people are……，they are busy……，we can see……，I think……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了為了實現(xiàn)中國夢，中國人正在努力做貢獻，接下來介紹農(nóng)民、醫(yī)生、警察和科學(xué)家如何做貢獻的，最后表示我們作為學(xué)生應(yīng)該做的事。此處make efforts to do sth, a large number of, be busy doing sth. try one’s best, take good care of, concentrate on, make contributions to等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。16．（全國中考模擬）三年的初中生活接近尾聲，回首過去你充滿依戀，展望未來你豪情滿懷。請以The happy life為題寫一篇90詞左右的短文。要點如下：1. 校園生活豐富多彩，在寬敞明亮的教室里學(xué)習(xí)，老師和同學(xué)們都很友好，相處融洽，同學(xué)們互相幫助，互相學(xué)習(xí)，雖然作業(yè)多，但一起學(xué)習(xí)很快樂。課余還經(jīng)常一起打球唱歌。2. 希望將來從事一份喜歡的工作，和父母分享成功，也為社會（society）多做有意義的事情。3. 現(xiàn)在必須努力學(xué)習(xí)，使夢想成真。 【答案】The happy lifeMy school life is rich and colourful. We have a lot of fun studying in the classroom with our lovely classmates. All my teachers and classmates are friendly and helpful. We get on well with each other. We often help each other and learn from each other. Though sometimes there is too much homework, with their help, we always finish it happily. During our free time, We play ball games and sing songs together. I wish to have a job I like and I will share my success with my parents. I also hope that I can do a lot of meaningful work for the society in the future. At present, I must study hard to make my dream e true. 【解析】英語作文寫出的句子要達意，完整，語法正確，合乎習(xí)慣，特別是句式，謂語動詞形式要有根有據(jù)，選用比較有把握的詞匯，用恰當(dāng)?shù)木湫蛯懗龃_切反映內(nèi)容要求的句子。英語作文要注意人稱和時態(tài)，注意提供的觀點、材料，要注意句子的完整性，謂語動詞的正確形式，句子之間的銜接和過渡。英語作文，要忠實于材料，不必擴展，注意用好連詞，多用非謂語，慎用較難的句型，一定不能寫錯句。get on well with相處融洽；help each other and learn from each other互相幫助，互相學(xué)習(xí)；with one’s help在某人的幫助下；in the future. 在未來；e true.（夢想）成真17．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達假定你叫John，最近從報紙上得知英國某公司將在你的家鄉(xiāng)建一座工廠，請給該公司寫封電子郵件。要點如下：表示歡迎：有利于家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)展等；感到擔(dān)憂：造成環(huán)境污染等；希望了解有關(guān)環(huán)保措施及更多信息。適當(dāng)提出一點你的建議。注意：1．詞數(shù)80—100；2．請不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮以使行文連貫；3．郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Sir or Madam,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours faithfully, John【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,I am a middle school student. I have recently learned from the newspaper that you are going to build a factory here in my hometown. There is no doubt that it is good for the development of my hometown and it will provide us with more jobs. Most of us stand by the program. However, some of us are worried that the factory will make much noise and pollute the environment of the area. I would like to know whether you have any plans for the environment protection.Would you please offer us more information about it?I39。m looking forward to hearing from you.Yours faithfully,John【解析】這是一篇提綱作文。內(nèi)容是針對英國某公司將在你的家鄉(xiāng)建一座工廠這件事，寫一封電子郵件，表達歡迎和你的擔(dān)憂。注意電子郵件的格式，時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要為第一人稱?？忌枰紫葘徢逯黝}，圍繞主題展開作文。要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語法規(guī)則的正確性；文章必須涵蓋所提供的各個提綱要點，不要遺漏。行文間要注意簡化描述，用簡短的語句代替冗長的語句。作文完成后，應(yīng)該檢查、修改，以免遺漏需要表達的要點和細節(jié)。本文的寫作要點：1．表示歡迎：有利于家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)展等；2．感到擔(dān)憂：造成環(huán)境污染等；3．希望了解有關(guān)環(huán)保措施及更多信息；最后，適當(dāng)提出一點你的建議。18．（湖北中考模擬）書面表達同學(xué)們，三年的初中生活就要結(jié)束了，在我們的成長過程中，既有快樂，也有煩惱。請用英文寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容包括：1．你在學(xué)?；蚣依镌?jīng)遇到的最大問題或煩惱；2．你解決問題或煩惱的過程；3．你的感想。要求： 1．詞數(shù)80～100，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的校名與人名。My middle school life is ing to an end .During the three years， ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My middle school life is ing to an end. During the three years，not only did I have happy time, but I had kinds of problems. My biggest problem was too much homework. Homework seemed endless for me. It made me stay up late and feel very tired every day，but I knew the teachers were expecting us to do better，even the best in my lessons.How can I deal with the problem？On the one hand，I concentrated more on my study in class. On the other hand，I did the homework as quickly as possible instead of being slow or absent minded. As a result，I spent less time on hom