【正文】 s exactly what we did. I feel so proud of my achievementand I hope I can publish my book soon.【解析】現(xiàn) 在 ，某 英 文 網(wǎng) 站 正 在 開 展 以 “成 就 ”為 主 題 的 征 文 活 動 ?假 如 你 是 李 華 ，請 用 英 語 寫 一篇 短 文 投 稿 ?談 一 談 你 經(jīng) 歷 的 讓 你 很 有 成 就 感 的 一 件 事 情 ，主 要 內(nèi) 容 包 括 :你 取 得 了 什 么 成就 ，你 是 如 何 做 到 的 ，以 及 你 在 取 得 成 就 的 過 程 中 學 到 了 什 么 ?話題作文寫出的句子要達意，完整，語法正確，合乎習慣，特別是句式，謂語動詞形式要有根有據(jù)，選用比較有把握的詞匯，用恰當?shù)木湫蛯懗龃_切反映內(nèi)容要求的句子。英語作文要注意人稱和時態(tài)，注意提供的觀點、材料，要注意句子的完整性，謂語動詞的正確形式，句子之間的銜接和過渡。英語作文，要忠實于材料，不必擴展，注意用好連詞，多用非謂語，慎用較難的句型，一定不能寫錯句。 translate into 把翻譯成；in order to為了； used to do過去常常做某事14．（北京中考模擬）假如你是李華，在你的幫助下，交換生Tom在中文演講比賽中獲得了一等獎。請你給他寫一封祝賀信，表達你的真誠祝賀，回憶他比賽時的表現(xiàn)，以及你從他身上學到了什么。提示詞語：wm，priZP,，speech petition，pronounce，practlce提示問題：Why do you congratulate Tom?What made him successfulin the petition?What can you leam from him?【答案】Dear Tom,I am very happy to know that you won the first prize in the Chinese speech petition, so I’m writing to congratulate you on your wonderful performance.You did a good job in the Chinese speech petition. You pronounced really well during your speech and your voice was beautiful. You spoke so fluently that we all felt proud of you. What’s more, we were surprised at your rich and meaningful contents.As your best friend, I know you tried your best for the petition. You kept practicing your speech every day in order to make it better. I know it is important to keep on trying and never to give up. I hope I can be successful like you one day in the future.Yours,Li Hua【解析】本文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含題目中所提供的所有信息。靈活運用各種句式，采用不同的表達方式將各個要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確，簡潔。最后必須認真查驗是否有漏寫，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。點睛：這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如：try one’s best。 What’s more, feel proud of； in order to； give up ；keep on trying. ； It is important to keep on trying and never to give up等；so ；sothat等連詞的運用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理；同時語言流暢，內(nèi)容完整，是一篇不錯的范文。15．（全國中考模擬）現(xiàn)在越來越多的人在網(wǎng)上購物，網(wǎng)購已成為流行趨勢，網(wǎng)購的利弊也成為人們討論的焦點。請根據(jù)下表所給的提示，用英語寫一篇短文，并發(fā)表你的看法。字數(shù)90字左右，開頭已給出，不計入總字數(shù)。優(yōu)點方便，可以在家買東西，不受時間限制；有很大的商品信息，可以買到當?shù)貨]有的商品；價格較便宜。缺點實物和圖片有差距,質(zhì)量不保證；買貨容易退貨難；網(wǎng)絡(luò)支付不安全；你的觀點考生自擬（至少1點）提示詞：實物：material objectNow Internet shopping is more and more popular in the world. It’s a new way of shopping. 【答案】Now Internet shopping is more and more popular in the world. It’s a new way of shopping. It has lots of advantages. It is convenient and you can shop whenever you like because the online shops are open 24 hours a day. There are so many goods online that it is easy to find the things that you can’t buy in the shop. Besides, the price is much lower.However, “ Every coin has two sides.” So does Internet shopping. You can’t see the material objects or check their quality. Usually the pictures are more beautiful than the goods. So when we get the goods and don’t like them, sometimes it’s not easy to give them back. What’s more, it’s not safe to pay through the internet.In my opinion, Internet shopping is easy and fast but we should be more careful.【解析】 這是一篇圖表，現(xiàn)在越來越多的人在網(wǎng)上購物，網(wǎng)購已成為流行趨勢，網(wǎng)購的利弊也成為人們討論的焦點。要求用英語寫一篇短文，并發(fā)表你的看法。動筆前先要認真閱讀要點，圍繞要點組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。convenient 方便的；in one’s opinion按某人的觀點16．（安徽中考模擬）書面表達假如你是李華，你們學校打算舉辦一場以“感恩老師”為主題的活動。請根據(jù)以下要點，給你的美國筆友Mike 寫一封郵件，介紹這次的活動。時間：5月30號活動內(nèi)容： 1. 給老師獻花致敬；2. 把寫滿感謝祝福話語的卡片貼在墻上；3. 為老師表演節(jié)目（put on performances）你的感觸：……注意： 1. 詞數(shù)80100；2． 可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 信中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息；4. 開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Mike,Our school will hold an activity to express our thanks and love to the teachers._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________What do you usually do to thank your teachers? I am looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Mike,Our school will hold an activity to express our thanks and love to the teachers on May 30. On the day we will give our teachers some flowers to show our thanks and respect. We thank them for helping us when we are in will put up the thanknotes on the that we put on performances for our teachers.What do you usually do to thank your teachers? I am looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹以“感恩老師”為主題的活動。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Our school will hold……，On the day we will……，We thank them for……，I am……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我們學校舉行了一個感恩老師的活動，接下來介紹我們的活動內(nèi)容，最后表達我的感觸。此處give sth to sb, thank sb for doing sth, be in trouble, put up, put on, look forward to等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。17．（山東中考模擬）書面表達請務(wù)必將短文寫在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置！父母為我們付出了很多，你又做過哪些事情來表達自己的感恩之情呢？請敘述你為父母做過的一件事，并談?wù)勀愕母惺?。要? 1. 條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范整潔，100個詞左右。2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的地區(qū)、學校及姓名?！敬鸢浮縏here’s no doubt that parents have given me a lot since I was born. With their care, I grow up happily. So I think it is necessary to do something special for them to show my gratitude.Both of my parents love music. So it would be a great idea to buy a wonderful CD for them. Last Sunday, I went to a bookstore and chose one among the top 10. While we were having dinner together, I played the CD. It was beautiful. With great joy, they gave me a warm hug and a big smile. I felt very sweet