【正文】 意義。要求： 80；2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名?！敬鸢浮縄t39。s very important to learn to share with each have many things to share in different example，I can share some beautiful pictures，my favorite music，different ideas with others face to face or by ， which are widely I39。d like to share one of my unforgettable experiences with you.Emily was lonely and I found her crying alone for some made me worried about her，so I hoped to cheer her first，I tried to share my favorite books and chatted with her on study after we knew each other better，I began to talk more about my everyday life with time went by，she gradually opened her heart and became used to sharing her feelings with we are good friends.In a word，sharing is not only interesting but also helpful and it makes us grow can learn a lot from sharing and enjoy our lives more.【解析】本文屬于話題作文，結(jié)合自身的一次經(jīng)歷，闡述分享的意義。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容?！玖咙c(diǎn)說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如share with，in different ways, for example, face to face, one of +形容詞最高級(jí)+名詞復(fù)數(shù)，make sb+形容詞，chat with， as time goes by, gradually, in a word, not only...but also...等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。點(diǎn)睛：寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。16．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)假定你叫John，最近從報(bào)紙上得知英國某公司將在你的家鄉(xiāng)建一座工廠，請(qǐng)給該公司寫封電子郵件。要點(diǎn)如下：表示歡迎：有利于家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)展等；感到擔(dān)憂：造成環(huán)境污染等；希望了解有關(guān)環(huán)保措施及更多信息。適當(dāng)提出一點(diǎn)你的建議。注意：1．詞數(shù)80—100；2．請(qǐng)不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮以使行文連貫；3．郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Sir or Madam,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours faithfully, John【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,I am a middle school student. I have recently learned from the newspaper that you are going to build a factory here in my hometown. There is no doubt that it is good for the development of my hometown and it will provide us with more jobs. Most of us stand by the program. However, some of us are worried that the factory will make much noise and pollute the environment of the area. I would like to know whether you have any plans for the environment protection.Would you please offer us more information about it?I39。m looking forward to hearing from you.Yours faithfully,John【解析】這是一篇提綱作文。內(nèi)容是針對(duì)英國某公司將在你的家鄉(xiāng)建一座工廠這件事，寫一封電子郵件，表達(dá)歡迎和你的擔(dān)憂。注意電子郵件的格式，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要為第一人稱?？忌枰紫葘徢逯黝}，圍繞主題展開作文。要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語法規(guī)則的正確性；文章必須涵蓋所提供的各個(gè)提綱要點(diǎn)，不要遺漏。行文間要注意簡化描述，用簡短的語句代替冗長的語句。作文完成后，應(yīng)該檢查、修改，以免遺漏需要表達(dá)的要點(diǎn)和細(xì)節(jié)。本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：1．表示歡迎：有利于家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)展等；2．感到擔(dān)憂：造成環(huán)境污染等；3．希望了解有關(guān)環(huán)保措施及更多信息；最后，適當(dāng)提出一點(diǎn)你的建議。17．（四川中考模擬）書面表達(dá)在中國歷史上，書籍一直傳承著人類的文明。然而隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的發(fā)展，國民尤其是青少年對(duì)網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲的癡迷，使得閱讀漸漸地退出中學(xué)生的生活。就“如何在學(xué)生中開展閱讀活動(dòng)”, 請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英語小短文。提示：。：①在圖書館閱讀。 ②在班級(jí)建立圖書角。③同學(xué)間互借。 ④計(jì)劃閱讀時(shí)間及閱讀量?！?要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80詞左右。（2）字跡工整，語言流暢，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，邏輯清晰。（3）文章內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。How to Have Reading Activities______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】How to Have Reading ActivitiesAs we all know, it is important for us to read books. It not only makes us know about the world but also helps us relax ourselves. I have some good advice about how to have reading activities.First, we can read in our school library. There are all kinds of books there. It39。s a good place to read. Second, we can set up a reading corner in order to read at any time after class. Third, we can exchange books with one another. It helps develop our cooperation spirit. At last，it39。s necessary to plan reading time and the number of reading books.All in all, we can benefit from colorful reading activities.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，主要內(nèi)容是圍繞由于受到互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的影響，青少年對(duì)閱讀漸漸失去興趣這一現(xiàn)象，就如何在學(xué)生中開展閱讀活動(dòng)，寫一篇英語小短文。結(jié)合所給的材料可知時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要為第一人稱輔以第三人稱。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象，注意要理順要點(diǎn)，防止漏寫。在寫作的時(shí)候，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性。同時(shí)要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。提示要點(diǎn)：。：①在圖書館閱讀。 ②在班級(jí)建立圖書角。③同學(xué)間互借。 ④計(jì)劃閱讀時(shí)間及閱讀量?！?18．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)難忘的初中三年學(xué)習(xí)生活已經(jīng)接近尾聲，你一定既有收獲又有不足，也有許多對(duì)自己未來的期待。請(qǐng)以My Unforgettable Middle School Life為題，根據(jù)下面的思維導(dǎo)圖，寫一篇短文介紹自己難忘的校園生活并描述對(duì)未來的期盼。注意:。短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。，并補(bǔ)充相關(guān)信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。語言連貫、通順。、校名等相關(guān)信息。How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself. 【答案】How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.In the past, I learnt a lot of knowledge not only from books but also from the teachers. So, I am very grateful to them. They helped me a lot! I also got on well with my classmates. We shared happiness and sadness together. We were like a big family. However, I still have a lot to improve. I didn’t do well in Maths because I gave up easily when meeting difficult Maths problems. Besides, I didn’t have a good sense of time. I used to go to school l