【正文】 along with, but he39。s strict with us. All these years he39。s worked hard. He39。s tried his best to make his class lively and interesting. He39。s helped us a lot in our Englishi studies. We39。ve improved our spoken English with his help. All of us feel grateful to him. Next week Mr. Green will leave for Australia. Let39。s wish him a pleasant journey.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)，例如Ladies and Gentlemen，first of all，thank you for doing，give me a chance，be from，three years ago，get along with，be strict with，try his best to do，leave for等。而He came to teach English in our school three years ago./He is easy to get along with, but he39。s strict with us./ We39。ve improved our spoken English with his help./ Next week Mr. Green will leave for ，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛：書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。16．（河南中考模擬）書面表達(dá)近幾年來，越來越多的中國(guó)人出國(guó)旅游，但一些游客的不文明行為也成為國(guó)內(nèi)外輿論關(guān)注的焦點(diǎn)。直接影響著中國(guó)“禮儀之邦”之形象。新華旅游局呼吁文明出游，游客應(yīng)認(rèn)真思考如何做一名“合格的旅游者”， 請(qǐng)以How to be a qualified tourist 為題目 寫一則英語(yǔ)短文，談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā? 、保護(hù)環(huán)境，不隨地吐痰，不亂扔垃圾。 2 、遵守公共秩序，不在公眾場(chǎng)所喧嘩，購(gòu)物時(shí)排隊(duì)。 3 、保護(hù)文物古跡，不到處亂涂亂刻，不攀爬觸摸文物。4 、節(jié)約用水用電，用餐不浪費(fèi)。注意：1. 文章必須包括提示內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)擴(kuò)展，增加細(xì)節(jié)使行文連貫； 2. 詞數(shù)80左右； 3. 開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)； 4. 參考詞匯：文物古跡cultural relics 文物artifactsHow to be a Qualified Tourist____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Recently, more and more Chinese people travel abroad , but some of them have bad manners .The poor behaviors or some Chinese have done great harm to our good reputation. How should we be a qualified tourist? In my opinion ,We have to understand and respect foreign cultures. First, we are supposed to protect the environment ,We shouldn’t spit or throw the rubbish everywhere. Second, we should obey the public order .We had better not shout loudly in public places , We have to wait in line when we are shopping .Third, we should protect the cultural relics. We mustn’t paint or carve on the monuments. We shouldn’t climb or touch artifacts. At the same time, we should save water and electricity. We are not supposed to waste food when we have meals . In this way, we39。ll win respect for ourselves as well as our country.【解析】寫作分析：這篇寫作需要圍繞“如何做一個(gè)合格的游客”展開寫作，具體的要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出了。寫作的時(shí)候可以適當(dāng)借助祈使句來表示“不應(yīng)該做…”，需要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)姆绞揭胛恼?，銜接好每個(gè)要點(diǎn)。寫作亮點(diǎn)：開頭應(yīng)該對(duì)寫作的背景進(jìn)行一定的交代?！癰ad manners”表示禮貌狀況不好，然后講到了這些行為對(duì)中國(guó)的名聲有害（have done great harm to our good reputation），這里用到了現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)，表示傷害已經(jīng)造成了，產(chǎn)生了不好的影響，時(shí)態(tài)的妙用是一個(gè)亮點(diǎn)。緊接著發(fā)問引入主題。借助first, second等詞串聯(lián)起自己的觀點(diǎn)。相關(guān)短語(yǔ)使用恰當(dāng)，“are supposed to”（應(yīng)該…），“spit or throw the rubbish everywhere”（四處亂扔垃圾），“protect the cultural relics”（保護(hù)文化遺產(chǎn)），最后文章有簡(jiǎn)練的收尾，we39。ll win respect for ourselves as well as our country.（我們會(huì)為我們自己和我們的國(guó)家贏得尊重），簡(jiǎn)練，完成了寫作任務(wù)。17．（四川中考模擬）（題文）書面表達(dá)課外活動(dòng)可以讓我們?cè)鲩L(zhǎng)知識(shí)，發(fā)展智力，開闊視野和塑造性格。許多學(xué)校創(chuàng)造性地開展了課外活動(dòng)，如朗誦、唱歌、講故事、演話劇、辦刊物以及舉辦各種體育活動(dòng)等。最近，某中學(xué)生英文報(bào)開設(shè)了“Afterclass Activities”的欄目。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，為該欄目寫一篇英文稿件，并鼓勵(lì)同學(xué)們積極參 加課外活動(dòng)。；；。注意： 80 以上；、校名及地名；（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。Afterclass ActivitiesNowadays, afterclass activities are being more and more popular in junior schools.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Afterclass ActivitiesNowadays, afterclass activities are being more and more popular in junior schools. In our school there are various kinds of activities, for example, arts and sports. We enjoy them very much. Playing football and reading are my favorites which do me lots of good. Besides building my body and improving my skills, they also free me from the heavy work of study.Here I have some suggestions. To students, we’d better choose the activities which interest us and suit us。 Schools should organize more activities for students and leave more time for activities by giving us less homework.Dear friends, please actively take part in afteractivities, which will not only make your school life colorful, but also improve your learning.【解析】這篇作文要求寫一篇英文稿件，并鼓勵(lì)同學(xué)們積極參 加課外活動(dòng)。首先應(yīng)注意在短文中要包括題目中給出的所有信息，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，并注意表達(dá)的層次和條理。其次要注意使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，通過分析可知，這篇短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用原形，特別要注意如果主語(yǔ)是第三人稱單數(shù)的時(shí)候，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式要變化，這是一個(gè)寫作的難點(diǎn)。最后要注意英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，英語(yǔ)句式與漢語(yǔ)在語(yǔ)序和詞性上的使用是不同的，要注意不能逐詞翻譯，寫漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)。應(yīng)從句子整體考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和句型來表達(dá)，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范。還應(yīng)使用一些較好的句型或者短語(yǔ)，增強(qiáng)文章的表現(xiàn)力。18．（河南中考模擬）書面表達(dá)每個(gè)人都有自己心愛的物品，相信你也擁有一個(gè)自己心愛的物品吧！請(qǐng)以“A（n） _____ I have”為題，描述一個(gè)或一件你心愛的物品，并談?wù)勀闶侨绾蔚玫剿?，以及它存在的意義。要求：1. 請(qǐng)?jiān)陬}目空白處填上你心愛物品的名字；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。3. 語(yǔ)言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，短文連貫通順，80詞左右。A（n） _________ I have______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________