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求可知,人稱以第三人稱為主。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)。我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)句子來(lái)組織這些材料,在描寫外貌和性格時(shí),會(huì)用到系表結(jié)構(gòu),注意主謂一致關(guān)系。介紹發(fā)生的一件難忘的事情,要用到一般過去時(shí)態(tài)。另外在寫作時(shí)可以適當(dāng)使用一些連詞,使之上下連貫,合乎邏輯?!军c(diǎn)睛】人物介紹是記敘文中常見的一種寫作類型。內(nèi)容可以是介紹自己也可以介紹他人,包括姓名、年齡、外貌特征、興趣愛好,有時(shí)也可以包括日?;顒?dòng)。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。在介紹長(zhǎng)相時(shí)用“be+形容詞”來(lái)描述人物的身高、體重、身材等;用“have/has + (straight/curly) hair / (big/small) eyes/nose/mouth”來(lái)描述頭發(fā)或五官。用“wear + 某種衣服”來(lái)介紹某人的穿戴。用be good at doing ,用like sth./doing “My/His/her favorite + 名詞+ is …”來(lái)介紹某人的最愛。當(dāng)主語(yǔ)是第三人稱單數(shù)時(shí),注意主謂一致關(guān)系。9.書面表達(dá) 我校決定讓學(xué)生輪流打掃廁所,以此作為教育學(xué)生的一種方式。 這件事在學(xué)生中引 起了強(qiáng)烈的反響,請(qǐng)你把下列不同意見整理成一篇書面材料,報(bào)告給學(xué)校。 同意 :1.多數(shù)學(xué)生是獨(dú)生子女,不會(huì)做事。 2.學(xué)生應(yīng)該學(xué)會(huì)做艱苦的工作。 3.學(xué)會(huì)理解和尊重清潔工人的勞動(dòng)。 不同意:1.很臟,容易使學(xué)生生病。 2.不是學(xué)生應(yīng)該做的事情。 3.打掃教室就足夠了。 注意:1.短文應(yīng)包括表中所有內(nèi)容,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,但不要逐字翻譯; 2.不少于80詞。 生詞提示:respect尊重【答案】A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor.Some students think it is a good way of education. Now most families have only one child. They never do hard work. To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. It can also help them understand and respect the cleaners.But others have different points. They think it is easy for them to get sick. They don’t think it is students'jobs. Cleaning the classroom every day is enough.【解析】【詳解】閱讀題干要求,這是一篇看法類的作文,那么首先得點(diǎn)明討論的話題,然后分別寫出不同人群對(duì)此事的看法,時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。重點(diǎn)詞匯及短語(yǔ):argument爭(zhēng)論;take place發(fā)生;among(三者或三者以上)之間;a good chance for sb對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)是個(gè)好機(jī)會(huì);help sb do sth幫助某人做某事;get sick生病。亮點(diǎn)句型:(1)A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor. 自從我們學(xué)校讓學(xué)生做自愿勞動(dòng)以來(lái),在學(xué)生中發(fā)生了一場(chǎng)激烈的爭(zhēng)論?,F(xiàn)在完成時(shí)(have/has+done)。(2)To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. 做義務(wù)勞動(dòng)是他們學(xué)習(xí)如何做困難工作的好機(jī)會(huì)。動(dòng)詞不定式作主語(yǔ),謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用單數(shù),疑問詞+to do。10.隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的發(fā)展、人們消費(fèi)觀念的轉(zhuǎn)變, 購(gòu)物方式也在悄然的發(fā)生變化?!熬W(wǎng)購(gòu)”已成為一種時(shí)尚,越來(lái)越多的學(xué)生也加入到網(wǎng)購(gòu)群體中。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下表格的提示,寫一篇網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物的文章。優(yōu)點(diǎn)(advantage);節(jié)約時(shí)間;避免擁擠、勞累,品種多缺點(diǎn)(disadvantage), 看不到商品本身, 造成浪費(fèi)你的觀點(diǎn)……提示詞匯:網(wǎng)購(gòu)shopping online。 商品 goods。 導(dǎo)致 cause注意:,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;;:100詞左右,文章開頭已給出,但不計(jì)入總數(shù)。With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. 【答案】With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has bee fashionable. Some of us students also join the group. Shopping online has many advantages. Just with the click of a mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowds and save a lot of time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower. Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods that aren’t like the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money. All in all, I love shopping online.【解析】本文屬于材料作文,主要講述網(wǎng)購(gòu)的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯,可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容?!玖咙c(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣,準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致,特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句,如convenient,disadvantage,in good quality,figure out,have the chance to do,be attacked by,of course,take care of等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系,增加上下文意思連貫,用詞準(zhǔn)確,句子通順,行文連貫。點(diǎn)睛:寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起:認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求,抓住要點(diǎn),詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱,我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的,而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮,因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀觥⒚鞔_的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒,就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了,在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞,使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外,還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言,大小寫是否正確,格式是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。