【正文】 to the students in Grade 7 and Grade 8. Especially, we can give them to the poor students. They need our help. Students in Group 2 thought that we could raise our pocket money. The books in library are old and little. So we can use the money to buy some new books for the school library so that more students can get more and latest information from books. Students in Group 3 thought we can plant some plants and flowers in the school. That may make our school more beautiful. Anyway, we have studied here for three years, we love our school. We hope our school will be better and better and we should study hard and one day our school will be proud of us.【解析】【分析】本片書面表達(dá)要求學(xué)生寫出一個(gè)班會(huì)會(huì)后的總結(jié)?！驹斀狻窟@是一篇材料作文。表格中一個(gè)兩個(gè)組的討論結(jié)果，第三組是需要考生圍繞著主題自己補(bǔ)充的，盡量避免與前面兩組重復(fù)。我們可以按照總分總的結(jié)構(gòu)來(lái)寫。 首先引出此次班會(huì)的主題；其次分別寫出三個(gè)小組的討論結(jié)果；最后可以對(duì)三個(gè)小組進(jìn)行總結(jié)，表達(dá)情感。在語(yǔ)言上要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，這樣才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體。14．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)常州市政府發(fā)文，從年2月1日起，市區(qū)禁止燃放煙花爆竹。你們班級(jí)的同學(xué)們就春節(jié)是否能燃放煙花進(jìn)行了討論。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格所提供的信息,給市長(zhǎng)寫一封信介紹大家的觀點(diǎn)，同時(shí)談?wù)勛约旱南敕āＷ⒁猓?1. 所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中的信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3. 表達(dá)，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范；4. 詞數(shù)不少于90。文章的開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。AGREEDISAGREE原 因1．減少空氣和噪音污染，保護(hù)環(huán)境……2．可能引起安全問(wèn)題。如，火災(zāi)……3．……（發(fā)揮至少一點(diǎn)）1．千百年來(lái)已經(jīng)習(xí)慣燃放煙花2．沒(méi)有煙花，過(guò)春節(jié)更無(wú)趣3．……你的觀點(diǎn)……（自擬至少兩個(gè)觀點(diǎn)）Dear Major,We have had a discussion about whether to let off fireworks at Spring Festival. All the students in our class give the ideas. 【答案】Most of the students don’t agree to let off fireworks at Spring Festival. They think fireworks produce so much smoke that it can cause serious air pollution. What’s more, people like letting them off at midnight, it is always so noisy outside that many people can’t sleep well. Also, it may cause big fire if people aren’t careful enough. Some children like playing with fireworks, so it’s dangerous for their eyes. If we don’t let off fireworks, cleaners don’t need to clean up so much rubbish everywhere.On the other hand, some students don’t agree. They think Chinese people have been used to letting off fireworks since hundreds years ago. Moreover, Chinese traditional culture is missing. We should protect it. People will feel less interested than before without fireworks.I think we should follow the rule because good environment is more important than anything else. Protecting environment is protecting ourselves.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文。常州市政府發(fā)文，從年2月1日起，市區(qū)禁止燃放煙花爆竹。你們班級(jí)的同學(xué)們就春節(jié)是否能燃放煙花進(jìn)行了討論。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格所提供的信息,給市長(zhǎng)寫一封信介紹大家的觀點(diǎn)，同時(shí)談?wù)勛约旱南敕?。時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。人稱主要為第三人稱和第一人稱。仔細(xì)閱讀所給材料，認(rèn)真審題，確定主題，根據(jù)主題和所給要點(diǎn)列出提綱，所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中的信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范。盡量使用高分句型。要運(yùn)用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有連貫性。根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)，列出本文的寫作提綱。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無(wú)單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤（時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致等）。本文提綱： 大多數(shù)學(xué)生不同意在春節(jié)放煙花。他們認(rèn)為煙花產(chǎn)生的煙太多，會(huì)造成嚴(yán)重的空氣污染。更重要的是，人們喜歡在午夜放假，外面總是那么吵，很多人睡不好覺(jué)。另外，如果人們不夠小心，可能會(huì)引起大火。有些孩子喜歡玩煙花，這對(duì)他們的眼睛很危險(xiǎn)。如果我們不放煙花，清潔工就不需要到處清理那么多垃圾。 另一方面，有些學(xué)生不同意。他們認(rèn)為中國(guó)人幾百年前就習(xí)慣放煙花了。此外，中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化也缺失了。我們應(yīng)該保護(hù)它。如果沒(méi)有煙花，人們會(huì)比以前更不感興趣。 我認(rèn)為我們應(yīng)該遵守這條規(guī)則，因?yàn)榱己玫沫h(huán)境比其他任何東西都重要。保護(hù)環(huán)境就是保護(hù)我們自己?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文思路清晰，時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用要正確，敘述清楚條里，層次分明，所用句式句型比較高級(jí)，像If we don’t let off fireworks, cleaners don’t need to clean up so much rubbish everywhere./ They think Chinese people have been used to letting off fireworks since hundreds years ago. / I think we should follow the rule because good environment is more important than anything else.。書面表達(dá)題要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和高分句式，語(yǔ)言要規(guī)范，信息表達(dá)清晰、完整，意思連貫。要學(xué)以致用。注意書寫的規(guī)范：大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等的正確運(yùn)用。注意檢查：?jiǎn)卧~拼寫、語(yǔ)法、動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)序、主謂一致等。15．（四川中考模擬）書面表達(dá)越來(lái)越多汽車進(jìn)入我們的家庭生活,改善了我們的生活,但同時(shí)也帶來(lái)了很多問(wèn)題,如塞車和車禍,給家庭和社會(huì)帶來(lái)極大的危害。作為中學(xué)生,我們應(yīng)該怎樣做呢?請(qǐng)寫一篇有關(guān)交通安全的短文（80字左右）內(nèi)容包含：,如走人行道/過(guò)斑馬線。，讓短文通順，過(guò)渡自然。參考詞匯：sidewalk 人行道 zebracrossing 斑馬線________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】With more and more cars ing into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.Traffic safety is everybody39。s business. We must obey the rules. For example, we must walk on walk side, when we cross zebra – crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across fast. Don’t play football on the road .we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc.We can say cars are ing into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody39。s business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks.【解析】本文屬于給出一個(gè)主題，對(duì)這個(gè)主題的相關(guān)內(nèi)容進(jìn)行論述，談?wù)撚嘘P(guān)交通安全的相關(guān)內(nèi)容。實(shí)際上就是要求書寫一份倡議書。人稱為第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。動(dòng)筆前先要注意認(rèn)真閱讀材料，確定寫作內(nèi)容；文章必須包括要點(diǎn)中所給的信息，并補(bǔ)充個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)。注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮使行文連貫，豐富文章的文采?？赡苡玫降脑~組：more and more, heavy traffic, obey the rules, look right and left, tell sb. not to do sth., walk on sidewalks等等。16．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)保護(hù)環(huán)境是每一個(gè)人的責(zé)任。假設(shè)下面是你閱讀了有關(guān)環(huán)保的書之后的變化，請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)所給內(nèi)容寫一篇短文。過(guò)去現(xiàn)在 ，并回收利用 你認(rèn)為作為中學(xué)生應(yīng)該如何做才能保護(hù)好環(huán)境?（至少兩點(diǎn)）要求：，意思連貫。，做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。，不計(jì)入總同數(shù)。It is our duty to protect our environment. After reading a book about the environment, Ihave changed a lot.