【正文】 答案】As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in . From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” among students.About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun. It can bring people closer , they can make more friends .Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives. About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets. They don’t have enough munication with their family members .They may feel a little lonelyPersonally, there39。s no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form. Also, it39。s obvious that it is more convenient. However, as a saying goes, each coin has two sides. It is not an exception, it also has some bad effects. If people can39。t grab the red packets, people may feel sad or illtempered ,even break their cell phones. What39。s worse, it may lead to the crime.【解析】這篇作文要求我們對學(xué)校進行的關(guān)于春節(jié)搶紅包這件事的調(diào)查結(jié)果進行總結(jié)，并談?wù)勛约簩@件事情的看法。題目中給出了一個表格，里面包括了支持搶紅包這個游戲的人們的觀點以及反對這個游戲的人們的觀點和理由，只給了一些短語，我們需要組織語言，將這些要點用正確的英語表達出來，并使文章內(nèi)容更加豐富、完整。最后還要加上自己的看法。因此文章的內(nèi)容應(yīng)主要包括三部分：支持的人們的理由；反對者們的理由；自己的看法，可以分成兩段或者三段來敘述，這樣可以使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清楚，有層次。寫作時，應(yīng)注意英語表達習(xí)慣和漢語的不同，不要逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，以簡單句為主，穿插并列句和復(fù)合句。為提升文章檔次，還應(yīng)注意使用高級句型和較復(fù)雜的句式。語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文章整體意思連貫、表達流暢。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整、結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。文章分為三段，第一段是題目中已經(jīng)給出的，因此了文章的話題。第二段中作者表述了支持和反對玩這個游戲的人們各自的理由；第三段中作者發(fā)表了自己的看法。其次短文中語言得體，句式準(zhǔn)確，符合英語的表達習(xí)慣。文章以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主，特別注意了謂語動詞的正確形式，語法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確。短文中使用了較豐富的句型，如About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun.、Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives、About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets、Personally, there39。s no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form.、If people can39。t grab the red packets, people may feel sad or illtempered ,even break their cell 。文章中也出現(xiàn)了一些語法上的小錯誤，總的來說，不影響整篇文章的質(zhì)量。15．（南通市通州區(qū)金北學(xué)校中考模擬）書面表達 陽光中學(xué)為了豐富學(xué)生的課余生活，每學(xué)期都會舉辦各種各樣的活動。請根據(jù)提示，為校報寫一篇有關(guān)的報道?；顒觾?nèi)容籃球比賽強身健體, 團隊精神航模制作了解科學(xué), 培養(yǎng)興趣英語演講練習(xí)口語, 提高能力…………你的觀點……（請自擬至少兩點內(nèi)容）注意：1. 必須包含所給要點, 省略號部分適當(dāng)發(fā)揮, 不要簡單翻譯；2. 詞數(shù)90左右, 開頭已寫好, 不計入總詞數(shù)；3. 表達中請勿提及真實校名及姓名。In order to make our school life more colourful, there are all kinds of activities for us to choose from every term.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________【答案】In order to make our school life more colourful, there are all kinds of activities for us to choose from every term.If you are a sports fan, you can join in the basketball games. It can not only make you strong and healthy but also help you learn teamwork. For those who are interested in science, model making is a good choice. Students get to know more about science and develop interest in it. If you want to practice your spoken English, you can’t miss the English speeches. It can improve your abilities as well. There is also an art festival. Those who are good at singing and dancing can take an active part in it. You can show your talents and bee more confident.In my opinion, taking part in those activities helps us reduce our stress of study and every student enjoys a colourful school life.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹學(xué)校在業(yè)余時間舉辦的各種各樣的活動。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第二，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如there are……，If you are……，It can not only……，It can improve……，Those who are……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我們有各種活動可以選擇，接下來介紹各種活動的內(nèi)容，最后表達參加各種活動的意義。此處all kinds of, choose from, join in, be interested in, know more about, want to do sth, be good at, take an active part in, help sb do sth等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。16．（福建中考模擬）書面表達隨著電子時代的到來，西方文化如潮水般涌來，中國傳統(tǒng)文化的傳承面臨著巨大的挑戰(zhàn)。有人認(rèn)為學(xué)校應(yīng)當(dāng)開設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課（set up traditional culture classes），但也有人認(rèn)為沒有必要。假如你是Mike,請你用英語寫一封郵件，給你校英文報投稿寫一篇短文，詞數(shù)80左右，談?wù)勀銓﹂_設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課的看法。Your opinionnecessary or unnecessaryYour reasonsthe root （根） of Chinese culture, know more about,spread, developYour suggestion…Dear editor,As we all know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development if international technology nowadays. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,Mike【答案】Dear editor, As we know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development of international technology nowadays. In my opinion, it’s necessary for schools to set up traditional culture classes. First, traditional culture is the root of Chinese. As Chinese, we shouldn’t give up our traditional culture and run after Western culture. Second, traditional culture classes can give students chances to know more about our nation. They can raise their sense of national pride. Last but not least, setting up traditional culture classes can spread and develop our Chinese culture.All in all, it is of great importance to set up traditional culture classes in schools. Let’s call on more schools to set up traditional culture classes!Yours,Mike【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，談?wù)勎覍﹂_設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課的看法。結(jié)合所給材料，可知