【正文】 good habit to be honest and keep your words. What’s more, you should keep studying , go to bed and get up on time. You mustn’t stay up too late.In my opinion, every family must keep rules and children shouldn’t develop bad habits, like telling lies and be rude to others. We should be strict with ourselves.The family rules also make a great difference to me. I learn to think about others’ feelings and Chinese traditional culture. What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，向山姆介紹你的家規(guī)并向他展示一個(gè)溫情的中國(guó)家庭。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如be supposed to, be kind to, keep your words, what’s more, in one’s opinion, develop bad habits, be rude to, be strict with, make a difference to以及it is a good habit to be honest中it作形式主語(yǔ)。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。【點(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。9．上周，你們班就初中生能否騎電動(dòng)自行車上學(xué)進(jìn)行了一次討論?，F(xiàn)在，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表用英語(yǔ)寫一篇介紹討論情況的短文。注意：；，書寫工整、規(guī)范；。生詞提示：electric 討論結(jié)果25人表示同意35人不同意理由；。，騎電動(dòng)車不安全；，騎電動(dòng)車也快不起來?！敬鸢浮縇ast week， our class had a discussion about whether junior students could ride electric bicycles to go to students of our class agreed with it， because they said it was convenient for them and it could takethem less time to go to school. But the other 35 students didn’t agree with them. They said it was not safe forthe junior students to get to school by electric bicycles， for they were too young. They also said in the morningthe traffic was busy and the students couldn’t ride electric bicycles quickly.【解析】試題分析：本題要求以初中生能否騎電動(dòng)自行車上學(xué)進(jìn)行了一次討論。根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)寫一篇80100詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文，而且要做到表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫。根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)可知，本文主要以一般過去時(shí)態(tài)書寫。要注意把每一個(gè)要點(diǎn)都表達(dá)出來，不要遺漏任何一個(gè)，書寫時(shí)一定注意時(shí)態(tài)的正確使用。觀點(diǎn)分明，談及理由按照要求至少要各寫兩點(diǎn)。并注意上下文要語(yǔ)句貫通。并且要圍繞主題適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作亮點(diǎn)：短文中作者按照題目的要求，給我們介紹了持不同觀點(diǎn)的學(xué)生各自的理由，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，要點(diǎn)全面。時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，書寫工整規(guī)范。該文中以下幾個(gè)句子用得很好。Because they said it was convenient for them and it could take them less time to go to school. They also said in the morningthe traffic was busy and the students couldn’t ride electric bicycles ，理由也很充分?？键c(diǎn)：提綱類作文。10．中學(xué)生在成長(zhǎng)過程中經(jīng)常會(huì)碰到一些煩惱。假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提示，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇發(fā)言稿，在班會(huì)上談?wù)勀阌龅降臒酪约澳阕约旱淖龇?。你的煩惱你的做法個(gè)頭不高，相貌平常不必在意，相信自己父母不理解，朋友少學(xué)會(huì)溝通，友善待人學(xué)習(xí)壓力大，課外活動(dòng)少……（自主發(fā)揮，至少兩點(diǎn)）要求：1. 詞數(shù)100左右，開頭及結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。2. 所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中所有的信息，并作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。3. 不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。Hello everyone,Hello everyone,I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them. That’s all. Thank you!【答案】Hello everyone,I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them.I am not very tall and very mon. But I don’t care and I believe in myself.My parents don’t understand me and I have very few friends. I encourage myself to be kind to others and learn to municate with others very well.I often feel stressed because of my study and I don’t have many chances to join the afterclass activities. I will plan my time very carefully and improve my study in a very good way. Try to join as many activities as possible and achieve a balance between study and hobbies.That’s all. Thank you!【解析】試題分析：本題是一篇給材料作文，要求用英語(yǔ)寫一篇發(fā)言稿，在班會(huì)上談?wù)勀阌龅降臒酪约澳阕约旱淖龇?。要求從個(gè)人外貌特點(diǎn)、與人溝通及學(xué)習(xí)壓力等方面進(jìn)行寫作。要包含表格中所有的信息，并作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。短文用第一人稱形式，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。寫作亮點(diǎn)：短文開頭直奔主題：我想要談?wù)勎业臒兰霸鯓犹幚硭麄?；后面三段分別從外貌上的煩惱、與父母交流上的障礙、學(xué)習(xí)上的壓力幾方面分別談?wù)撟约旱臒兰疤幚淼姆绞?，生?dòng)具體，條理分明。文中的不定式作賓補(bǔ)、作定語(yǔ)、作賓語(yǔ)用得準(zhǔn)確恰當(dāng)；and連接的并列句、并列謂語(yǔ)等等都使短文顯得簡(jiǎn)捷生動(dòng)?！究键c(diǎn)定位】 考查提綱類作文。